I just read this newsletter. I like the way you wrote all these. This piece is written very neat. I learned a lot about Jane Austin’s writing from this piece. I learned that an author like Jane Austin often do the grammatical mistakes.
Beautifully written. I can understand every word. The images are interesting.
I read your poem "The Infinite Journey" You blended life, nature and people together with your crafted words. This poem shows a concern for beauty and truth and imagination. I like the images of this poem. Through this poem you painted a beautiful nature picture.
I like the lines
Water runs beneath our feet
through the scattered rocks
Friends we've made with birds and bees
made it hard to see
Beautiful poem. You wrote it very meaningfully and philosophically. I like the flow of this poem.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I read this poem "Firefly" a year ago now I read it again. I like the simplicity of this poem. Here you are telling that the beautiful fireflies gives your heart pleasure. You feel amazed by love of nature. Yes, it is better to let them go. I like the message of this poem.
My favorite lines:
One small insect brings much joy
After a hot summer's day.
Come and watch the fireflies
Be a child for just a day.
A beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone.
I just read your poem. I like the wording of this poem. Yes, words are powerful. Words give us freedom to express ourselves. They have an incredible power to make up happy, to ease our pain. A single word can change the whole world.
I like this free verse poem. This poem is unique with the flow of your words. The way you wrote this kept me reading to the end. I like the lines
“Language that can transform reality
with such an inherent brilliance
that it transcends the confines
of belief.”
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I just read your poem. I am now reviewing your poem on behalf of simply positive group.
The beautiful spring picture you painted here makes me reading this to the end. Each season comes different looks and beauty. In spring sprouted leaves smiles on the tree. The buds opened and the colorful flowers appearing. One could not help but be happy in such a joyful company of flowers.
I like the lines
The tulip fields of colors bold,
red and pink, plum and gold
to herald spring, they now unfold.
In your poem all the things blended together makes a beautiful nature picture.
I like the rhyming scheme and the flow of this poem. I want to thank you for your sweet description.
I just read your another poem "Fate" and I like the words.
I like the subject of this poem and the little rhyming.
Long distance relationship is one of the most challenging things we ever go through. So many people love from afar, never finding the courage to drive the situation. Only fate can tied up the two hearts. Fate creates our destiny and we participate in its unfolding.
In your poem you are telling these by these lines “But fate dealt this hand, there was never a chance; now I'm going country and you like to dance.”
I like the way you wrote this poem.
Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I just read your poem “When Fish Fly”. The beautiful nature picture you painted here makes me reading your poem from the beginning to the end. I can imagine a river where some fisherman busy to catch flying salmon fish. Where an eagle swoops down to catch the salmons fish.
I like the imaginary of this poem. I love poetry and I write too. I've enjoyed reading your poetry.
Here you have used punctuation marks where needed. I like the lines
We all know, fish don’t fly, they just swim,
But the salmon is confused, it's no lie.
Thrashing fish, churning waves upon the water
Swim upstream, just to spawn, then they die.
Thank you for sharing your awesome work with us.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Best of luck with all of your writing.
I just read your story. I liked the way you told the story with very clear descriptions and presentation.
My favorite: “the bridge was falling apart, the fire blazing from one wooden plank to the next, moving closer to Princess Kaci.”
How a mighty Knight (Knight Addison) with a magic sword saves their life from dragon.
I like the conversation between the characters. Thank you for sharing this excellent story for children.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I found your name on the anniversary review page. I am now reviewing your story.
I understood that this blog was written for “blog image contest”. I also participated in this contest. I think your story followed the prompt. The story flowed wonderfully from beginning to the end. I the characters “Byron”.
The Dialogue between the characters is clear and appropriate for the situation. Thank you for sharing.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
Yes, having good friends is like having treasure. Young or old, all of us need friends in our pathway.
Friends play an important role in our life. They encourage us when we are sad. And give us good suggestion to solve our problem. They encouraged us always to keep our chin up.
Here we all the Writers in writing.com are friends.*Smile*
Favorite Lines :
When you share a sorrow with me
My own pains pass by.
When you share a joy with me
My smile touches the sky.
I like the way you wrote these daily verses, poems. Your poems are small but rich in words. They expresses message to the readers.
Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I like the delightful conversation between the two characters. It really made me laugh.
My favorite lines:
” And there it sits. Behind us, on the table, sits my
Lonely paper heart, which I gave to him. My heart, left behind to
Be swept into the garbage, abandoned by the one who held it.
My broken paper heart.”
I like the main thought of the poem.
It’s written so beautifully that makes me reading your poem to the end. Thank you for sharing this lovely little lyrics based poem.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I just read your newsletter. I learned many about Jane Austin. Jane Austin’s “Pride and Prejudice” is my favorite. From your piece I learned a video game released based on Pride and Prejudice. I think it will be fun to play this game.
I learned Jane Austen included card games in her books.
I have watched Jane Austin’s pride and prejudice several times. And I enjoyed the movie.
The way you wrote this newsletter makes me reading this to the end. It is neatly written. You have used lots of paragraphs that give the readers the info they need.
The image you used is beautiful. Thanks for the information. It’s well written.
I just read your piece "Counting my Blessings" Yes excellent reminder to us. God made this beautiful world for us. Our family is the most precious gift of the god. But sadly we often forget to count our blessings to them. We don’t pay the respect that they deserves.
Suggestion:
Punctuation marks: There should be a space before the period.
I like this thoughtful piece. I enjoyed reading.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
Here you compare our life with a movie. You are telling that we are the actor. Yes, . We’re the actor living in a movie. We all have our roles.
In our life there are so many ups and down both drama and comedy. Sometimes there may be scary scenes and sometimes drama or comedy. There are so many challenges in our life.
Our director is GOD, the one who orchestrate everything.
Suggestion: I think a little bit of editing will make this piece more interesting.
Overall I like the philosophical thought of your writing. I like the way you wrote all these.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I just read this dialogue based piece from read and review page.
I like the delightful conversation between two characters Billy and his father. Billy fixes cereal for father's day, but he needs milk.
I want to thank you for your sweet conversation, which made me smile.
The dialogue flows wonderfully and kept me reading to the end. I learned that well-written dialogue upticks the plot and gives the reader new data about the characters.
Suggestion: you can make bigger story from everything I just read. It would be more interesting.
I enjoyed reading this piece. These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
Hello, Neva,
I just read this thoughtful piece of yours. The way you wrote this make me reading this piece from the beginning to the end.
Yes, God is invisible. He is the creator of all the life in earth. The all-powerful and all-knowing creator.
I like the point
"Since we cannot know God directly we must know Him (God is referred in the male because each of the known and remembered Manifestations are male) through His Manifestation or Messengers."
Its well written. Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
I just read this delightful poem. The story you telling here makes me reading this poem from beginning to the end. Rooster crowing in the morning very loud, with a cock-a-doodle-do that wakes the poet at dawn.
I like the rhyming of the poem.
Favorite lines:
No time to fret, I must set him straight;
it’s disturbing to me, a wee-morning woe.
Some are too crude, it’s beyond the pale;
they’re the rude of the Earth, as far as I know.
I really enjoyed reading this poem. it followed the prompt.
I just read your poem from read and review page. I like the story of the poem. The flow of your poem nicely crafted into words. I liked the rhyme scheme you chose and the way the lines were arranged into stanzas, your descriptions and use of imagery are beautiful, I especially liked these lines:
We’d dump our haul on the neighbor’s lawn; he’d be impressed.”
“Granddad, will you take me frog hunting? We could go now.”
“Wyatt, all the toads have disappeared! Who’d have ever guessed
that the frogs would be gone. Things just aren’t the same somehow.”
A really wonderful picture was painted with your words.
I saw your name on the Anniversary review page and I chose this fairy princess poem for review.
It is an interesting story. The imagination is great. I can imagine your story too.
I liked the rhyme scheme you chose and the way the lines were arranged into stanzas, your descriptions and use of imagery are beautiful, I especially liked these words:
Life in her castle will no longer be lonely.
The sun will shine and her heart will be happy.
She will still rule the land but it will be a new journey,
The fairy Princess and her Prince will live happily ever after
and peace will be throughout the land.
A really wonderful picture was painted with your words. The images you posted here are beautiful.
I just read your small poem. Winter is one of my favorite seasons, and your poem remind the winter which has passed.
I like the simplicity of this poem and the little rhyming. I want to thank you for your sweet description of the season winter. I enjoyed reading your poem.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I lust read your gratitude poem about friendship"Silent Scream"
The poem is beautiful with the flow of your words. Your words remind me one of my friend who lived far away. Somehow your word captured what I am feeling for her. I like the lines
How long can you ignore your pain
and excuse your lack of care
How long your feelings locked away
'Till they're no longer there
A wonderful example of heartfelt friendship. I enjoyed reading your poem.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
Happy Writing!
Mina
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