Hi, I just read this poem. This poem is beautiful because you are used many good words. Our life has two different side the bright and dark. Brightness is there because of darkness. You are using "our" too many times. But I like the rhyming of your poem.
Hi, I just read this beautiful poem. After a long winter spring comes and nature looks like a canvas on the earth. The picture you painted here make me reading this. Though short but the words are wonderful. "Robins" "rabbits" "green grass" all the natural elements blended together makes a lively spring picture. I like the word of this haiku. I like the lines
rabbits feast on garden fare
while the green grass grows.
Hi,JosieStrange I just read your poem "Happiness"
Our life is full of obstacles, stress and depression. We should admit these on the way of our life.
Happiness depends upon ourselves and today’s world we are struggling to get happiness. Our mind is a mysterious palace sometimes it covered with clouds,sometimes rain and sometimes with bright sunshine brighten our mind. Here the poet express her feeling by this line "Yes I see through the rain." In this poem the poet used good word choice and rhyming pattern. I like the lines
But I see through it.
Yes I see through the rain.
Instead I let it chime.
Hi, Zeke
I just read this ans I would like to review this poem. In this world nothing is perfect but today people are struggling to get perfection. Our life is full of obstacles and if we overcome this we would win. Yes if we perfect the world make us queen. In your poem you are used some nice language, rhyme and word choice. I like this poem because of its words. I like the lines
But, if you were only perfect.
You wouldn't be the love of my life.
Hello, SHERRI GIBSON
I am reviewing you for "Anniversary Review"
In our life if nobody listen to us we should move forward alone.
If somebody not talk with us we should talk with ourselves.
If nobody comes in the stormy night then we should broke our chest ribs ease our soul, and let the light come in our hearts by ourselves.
In your poem you used various nice words that create the atmosphere of the poem that makes me reading your poem. I like this poem because of its rhyming.
I like the lines
Whenever you feel you’ve nothing else to give,
ease up on yourself, and learn to live.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.
Hi, I just read this poem. The description of nature "dusk-blanketed shores" and where you said "dusk-blanketed shores" "Cloud droplets" all things blended together makes a beautiful nature picture that make me read your poem from first to last.
You are using some good words, rhyming is well, keep writing.
Initial Impression: A beautiful poem that kept me reading.
Color has different meanings in different culture. Normally red is the symbol of love and we cannot bear read color long time. Whereas green is the color of freshness and she is symbolize to nature. White means peace likewise it means snow, ice or cold. Black sybolize strength and sometimes mystery. Each color swings our mood in many ways. Here the poet describes the meaning of color beautifully.
Overall Impression : Good rhyming, Nice flowing a beautiful poem.
Hi, I see your name in Anniversary Review page. Though I am not a good reviewer but I like to read poetry.
Season come season go it is the cycle of the nature. After winter come spring then summer. Each season has different variation and color these things follow cycle. Our planet is constantly changing from one shape to another. Sometimes human activities can change the nature. Only the planet earth we can live in. Each and every steps we thanks god for letting us live in this world.
The tone and mood of your poem is nice that kept me reading.
In our life we wishes many thing. If our wish is realistic one day our wish will come true. Expecting too much is hardly get fulfilled our wish. So we should always wish something that would be real.
I like the lines
Those that are deep, hard to understand.
The wish givers are very particular,
After a bitter cold spring come to this earth. Nature looks like a canvas in the earth, All things get a little more acceleration. New leaves peeps in the branches. This poem makes me read your poem.
If the parents are unhappy then the children’s are unhappy. Sometimes parents don’t understand that. When they quarrel it affects children’s life. Children love both mom and dad and they want them together. In your story you tell that.
Character buildings are good.
Hi Jonewton123 I am now reviewing one of your poems.
Human mind is so mysterious. It can change frequently. Our mind has also the freedom, thus it can do what it prefers to do. Here the poet said about how frequently mind changed that makes her emotional.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Newbies Academy Group" .
In your poem blooming flowers, butterflies, building a house for sparrows, reaping the fruits, sour apple tree, morning dew, daisy, bee, hills all the natural elements blended together makes a beautiful nature picture. Childhood the is best part of ones life. The golden days of these days cannot be forgettable. It glisten on our heart year after year.
Overall Impression: A nice poem about childhood memories.
What a nice poem about star. Once I wrote a poem about star but my one is not as beautiful as yours. Yes, star have so many colors blue, yellow and some are orange hues. Our sun is also nearest a star of the earth. At night when we looking through the sky our heart get delighted to see the variety of stars.
When the stars going to die they got brighter and bigger and at last with great explosion they died and turned in the black hole.
Hi, I just read this poem in random review page. The subject of your poem make me read this. Yes, Traffic jam is a monster of our daily life. Those who have experienced wont understand it. Sometimes patient suffers because of this traffic jam. In my country almost everybody familiar with this monster traffic jam. It makes our life horrible. In your poem you said all this.
Hi, I just read this poem from random review page. Each season brings different looks and beauty and color this world. Here poet telling In Autumn how the nature change. Oak levees, clouds hide in the sky, wind all things blended a beautiful Autumn nature picture. Spring and Autumn is my best season.
Autumn comes only for a few months and this beauty is not everlasting.
I especially like the line when poet sigh for growing old.
Hi a Sunflower in Texas I am now reviewing one of your item for Anniversary review.
When a dearest one died an emotional feeling surrounding our mind. And these feelings cannot be express in one words. Mom and Dad is the greatest gift of god. They are guide us, encourage us, and motivate us always. The loss of dad is very painful for any person. In your poem you described how you felt about your father after he passed away.
A beautiful and emotional poem. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
Hi,~LadyBee~ I am reviewing one of your word puzzle game for Anniversary review.
Just now I played your bee game. Its interesting {e:} and I enjoyed your bee~game. Bees are very useful insects. They makes honey. You give all the bees’ related information here. Also learn a lot about bees characteristics(workers,hymenoptera, buzzing, sting) while I was solving your puzzle.
Hi 💙 Carly: Joan Watson I am now one of your poems "The Power of a Single Tree".
Trees clean the air,trees provide O2 and exhale Co2. We cannot live without oxygen. Trees gives us shadow with their branches, provide us food. In my country trees saved us from cyclone "Sidor" in 2007. The benefits of the trees cannot express in words. In your poem you described a beauty of a single tree so simply and beautifully.
I like the lines
These trees raise bows up in praise and glory
Embrace their power in a single tree.
Hi, Cyndi Sue I just read this article. Yeas many years ago people have wrong thoughts about Epilepsy. I also know little about it that it is kind of brain disease. After read your article I learned that People with epilepsy are not less intelligent and Epilepsy does not lead to aggressive behavior. Our brain control's everything in our body.Now a days Epilepsy can be controlled through drug therapy.
Hi Yellow Rose I am now reviewing one of your poems. In your poems all colors rose, beige, orange, yellow, and blue, grey yellow and rose blended together. In your poem you painted a beautiful nature picture. The sunset in the sea is one of the most beautiful scenery in the world. I like the line most.
The brightness of the setting sun cast its own yellow haze
The sun hides behind those clouds and begins to change
Your poem flow like floating sea wave.Thank for sharing your poem with us.
Now a days Internet is so important and there are many ways to make money in online. online surveys, searching the web, building a website, writing blogs, getting an online freelance job, social investment networks, Sell all your old CDs, games and movies etc. We can do everything with internet. Learn a lot from your research.
Hi, Kings I just read your poem and I feel like to review you. Nice imagination about walk and talk with god and friend in heaven. We people come to this world only for short time. One day we all leave from this beautiful world. Somebody go to hell and some of them heaven. Those who did good deeds in earth heaven are for them.
I like the lines
He will always love me here in God's paradise.
He'll never forsake me God has given sacrifice.
Overall Impression : Nice flowing. Good Imagination. Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
Yes, it really shocking when someone gets to know that his/her real parents is not real. I like the way you are telling your story. If I ever hear that my parents are not mine I would surely black out.
Suggestion: I think if you put some paragraph break than it will be more interesting to read.
Yes, we people are depends on technology. Instead of hand writing we use typing, for communicating we use smart phone instead of direct communicating. Technology is used in our everyday life. From morning to sleep we used this. Now a days children’s also depends on technology they don’t go outside to play. They are addicted on computer games. So let’s get back to the basics.
Nice article. The subject your article makes me read this. Keep writing.
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