Initial Impression: I just read this acrostic poem "CONFUSED" . This poem is beautiful with the flow of your words.
Confusion is a part of our life. I often confused about life just like everyone else.
Favorite lines: “Desiring all that I dream to be reality”
OVERALL IMPRESSION: This poem has good thoughts inside every lines.. I enjoyed reading your poem. A thoughtful poem.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I just read another beautiful poem of yours. I like your poems.
Initial Impression: The poem was unique and it flowed wonderfully from beginning to end.
Theme and Creativity: This is lovely nature poem inside every line. This poem is not just about a tree, but also the feelings the poet had when he saw them.
Favorite lines : I like the lines
I fought to keep my country safe, from the bloody dogs of war,
and soon I’ll rest within God’s arms, a warrior’s life no more
I enjoyed reading your poem.
Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group" . I thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.
Initial Impression: This poem is beautiful with your words. Theme and Creativity: This has lovely gratitude poem inside every line. You nicely told the sweet relationship between two friends. The bond between the friends is the only real and purest bond in the world.
Favorite lines : I like the lines
Both of us blowing in the wind
for I have not seen such beauty since
My right much more elegant than I
I knew I would soon have to say goodbye
Suggestions: you need to capitalized all the first words of each line.
I enjoyed reading your poem.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
Hello Nbnelson2, First welcome to WDC. I just read your poem Time and Space. I was a science student and I know the Einstein theory "light bends because space is wrapped"
I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the thought of this poem. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
This poem contains powerful feelings of the poet. The images of this poem make me read this poem from beginning to the end. I like the vivid imaginary of this poem. “Old winds” “Old waters” “Old leaves” all the snapshots beautifully distilled in words. I like the lines
Old winds blow the mutterings of the ancestors
to swirl and eddy where they spark new growth
or sound the trumpets of morrow time, still,
ever dancing to the heartbeat of my soul
A beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing.
The Story: We all know that a true friend is hard to find, but Cece was lucky because she found a friend like Julie. This story is unique and it flowed wonderfully.
The day before Julie died Cece dreamt that “Julie walked further and further into the mist that hung over the fields until I could barely see her”
This was a message which Cece realized later.
Final Thoughts:
The way you wrote this story makes me reading this from beginning to the end. I enjoyed reading. A beautiful story about friendship.
It’s been pleasure to review your poem on behalf of Anniversary Review. I really love this poem because the thought of this poem is wonderful. You are right, that in our life we often feel disappointment because sometimes there are things beyond our control that have nothing to do.
But disappointment often fuels the climbs to the peak of accomplishments. You wrote everything beautifully in your poem. I like the lines
And we will once again be rewarded
For our unbelievable pursuit
Of triumph and glory.
Hello,Oldwarrior
I just read your poem. A dark tale of a cruel Halloween curse
The poem is unique and flowed wonderfully from be from beginning to the end. I like the way you wrote this poem. The rhyming A, A, B, B makes this poem more interesting and faster. I like the lines
That sound you hear, on the window pane, and the howling of the wind,
shall make its way inside your home, and thus will be your end.
So listen now and listen well there’s a way to fight this curse,
but being bad and playing tricks, you only make it worse.
This poem is beautifully written with a smooth flow to your words. I enjoyed reading.
I selected to read and review this poem when I came across in the nature genre list.
I love this poem because of the main thought of the poem about our mother nature. It’s written so beautifully that makes me read your poem to the end. It describes lot of problems created by us (the human being). We the human being rules the sea, air and land. But today she is getting polluted by us.
Even though we know that there is no other planet to live.
Now comes time to have a new start and think and do to save our dear planet. You are telling all these beautifully by the lines of your poem “It’s time to make my final stand, to make you go away,
to clear the smell and clean the land, and seek a better day.”
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Newbies Academy Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.
Initial Impression: I like this sweet poem and the little rhyming.
I think if you mentioned the poetry form that would be better.I enjoyed reading your poem.
Hello Cynaemon, I just read your story"The Magic Cat" . The way you wrote your story kept me reading. I like the smallest details of the story.
The old cat, her magic bouquets had making most of the peoples wishes comes true and change their entire life. But, they are ungrateful after they receive something good.
The cat remembered the lost days when she had danced in the moonlight. How they had whirled and twirled through the grand ballroom, and out into the summer garden, dancing lightly on the smooth lawn, their paw prints leaving no more marks than that of a soft wind.
The story floated so well. I like the happy ending.
I love the way you described the main character.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I just read this poem. It’s a beautiful poem. I read it a year ago but I read it again and again. When I read this poem it reminds me a pond in my village home.
The poet watched from behind a frosted window the change of the nature. She could imagine that she is a part of the nature. She expressed her feelings by using good word choice. She painted beautifully the nature of the pond to create the mood of the poem. I like the rhyming of the poem. Every stanza of this poem has the rhyme scheme of A, A, B, B, X, X. this makes the poem more beautiful.
I like the lines
Shimmering, like a diamond, beneath the moonbeams,
this whitewashed vision cloaking its unacknowledged dreams,
such as I, embracing desires of a destiny separate,
to a statue of stone, is singing a lullaby with a heart.
I am not a writing expert and I am constantly learning from this site but the only thing I would say I am touched by your poem. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing.
I read your "A Winter's Kiss"
I like this poem because each stanza reminds me the beauty of the season winter which just over. The poet painted the beauty of the frosty winter with some good words choice. She could think she is a part of nature. She enjoyed the snow falling. I like the last stanza
“This visit from the white winter frost;
I long to see and would never dismiss.
It holds a grace I cannot compare-
the brittle cold of a winter's kiss.”
A beautiful nature poem. Thank you for sharing.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
I just read your thoughtful piece.
Yes, self-confidence is one of the most important things in our life. We cannot go forward without it even to achieve the smallest goal of the daily routine we need self-confidence and positive thinking.
I learned a lot from this writing. It’s written so well that I easily understand. I like the third paragraph “foundation of self confidence”.
Suggestion: I am not a writing expert but I would like to say you to write if using color font and also with the number and the bullet points so the readers can read it smoothly.
I really enjoyed and learned a lot from this. These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
Hello Megan
I just read this poem. I always like the poem which tells a fairy tale story. I like the story of this poem because of its smoothness and the happy ending. It flowed wonderfully from beginning to end .
Here the poet telling that a sad princess left home to fulfill her wish on a scary night. The Princess was scared, but still nothing would stop her from trying to fulfill her dream, and finally she receives the special gift —she had children. I can imagine that too. The story of the poem is simple but so beautiful. I like the lines
"The fairy flew
to the castle to look at the children. The fairy was happy. She loved granting
wishes. She flew home to the forest on Pegasus. All was right with the kingdom."
Hello Just an Ordinary Boo! I just read this poem about child fear. I am now reviewing your poem on behalf of The Simply Positive Group.
You are right that most of the kids are feared about dark. Sometimes a simple object makes them afraid. In your poem you are telling all these beautifully. I like the rhyming of this poem. Every stanza of this poem has the rhyme scheme of A, B, A, B, . Rhyming not only makes your poem more interesting, but also makes the rhythm brighter. Thank you for sharing your poem. I enjoyed it reading.
I just read your piece “The Need of the Hour”.
Yes, you are right we the human beings cut the trees to meet our present requirements. But should we ever think what will happen if all trees will cut down?
We need trees in our environment for us to breathe for food and shelter. We need trees not only for ourselves but also for the ecological balance.
I like the subject of your writing.
Suggestion: I think you should need some paragraph break and need look for the punctuation mark.
A little bit editing will make your piece more interesting to read on. Keep writing.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "Simply Positive Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.
Initial Impression:: I like this sweet little nature poem about autumn.
This poem is beautiful. I especially like the wording of the poem. The poem flow wonderfully from beginning to the end.I like the last stanza
Such are the signs widely spreads in nature,
For those who understand,
The purpose of creation.
Hello Nela
I just finished reading your piece about “Life”. I like the idea and thoughts of your writing about life.
We come in this beautiful world only for a short period of time. In this period we have to do many things.Each and every moment of our life is so precious.
We know life is not so easy. It is full of fear, depression, stress and we might want to avoid these things altogether. We know we can’t fully avoid these thing but we can reduce it (at least partially!) if we look the brighter side of the life.
You are right we can make our life beautiful by laugh and smile because they could lower our stress level. So we should put a happy face.
Punctuation: put the comma after the words, like (smile,) not (smile ,) and put some paragraph break so the readers enjoy your writing.
This poem is beautiful. I like this acrostic poem. The poem is telling about the beautiful nature and of the season autumn. Each season brings different looks and beauty.Here you used some good words choice to create the mood of this poem like "Vacillates ‘tween "
I like the ending of the poem with "Red". The poem follow the rules of the acrostic poem.
Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
My name is Mina~and I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would write something about your work.
Initial Impression: I like the thoughtful writing piece of yours.
We the human beings are the best creation of the God. Only we have big brains. We can do the things which other species cannot. We think differently from all other creatures on earth. Only we can make moral judgments. The history's greatest inventions achieved because there was a question why?
Suggestions:I think if you put some paragraph break that will be make it more interesting to read.
I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.
I just read this newsletter about the Black Cat. Color black itself is the symbol of evil, fear, mystery and death. But somewhere black is the color of personality.
Somewhere black cat associates with bad luck or the power of evil. People say that the witches turn themselves into black cat.
After reading this piece I learn a lot about the beliefs and superstitions of part of the world. Especially “Fishermen's wives like having black cats for pets because they thought they would protect their husbands”
I like the simplicity of your writing. I enjoyed the story of Maxi. It flowed wonderfully and it is very delightful. Thanks for sharing.
I just read this poem. Yes, we all the writers are like the painters. A painter paints picture with the colors and we the writer’s paints with our words. Writing brings things to life. We are continuously creating something for the readers. We capture the words and painting picture with out words.
This poem is short but rich in words. I like the lines “Big ones, medium ones,lined up on my wall.
If you look close you will see them all.”
Hello thing, I just read this. This writing is very helpful for the members in writing.com. I like the way you wrote “How to review a product from Amazon.com.
You wrote this piece easily, you used lot of space per paragraph and you keep it short that makes the reader read it from beginning to the end.
I learn how to review a product from Amazon.com. Thanks for your important notice that we have to post it in Writing.com because we did this review for Writing.Com.
Come back to WRITING.COM (Important: The review you are doing is on Writing.Com, not Amazon.Com)
I sometimes like to read books from Amazon but I didn’t review them all. From now on I will follow the rules while review.
Thank you for sharing your helpful writing with us.
Mina
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