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Review of I Saw a Dragon  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Magoo Author IconMail Icon! I am sending you a review of your poem. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: This is a wonderful poem with a unique story .

*Idea* Theme and Creativity:The way you wrote this poem kept me reading to the end. You have good imagination.

*Pencil* Technique: Every stanza of this poem has the rhyme scheme of a, b, a, b. It makes rhythm faster, happier, and brighter. .

*Bulletg*Favorite lines:
As beast and human drew a crowd,
the registers were ringing loud.
The wealth of all began to grow;
the land was filled with lots of dough.

*Cut* Suggestions :I didn’t find any mistakes. You have used the punctuation marks where they are needed

*Starg*Overall Impression: . The poem was amazing and the ending was brilliant. Thank you for sharing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!Moona

I read your poem "What The World Needs Now" Open in new Window.

I love this poem because of the main thought of the poem about our mother nature. It’s written so beautifully that makes me read your poem to the end. It describes lot of problems created by us (the human being). We the human being rules the sea, air and land. It describes beautifully a lot of problems that our mother earth faces now.
Even though we know that there is no other planet to live.

Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Before I Go  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!Sam

I just read your poem.
I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group"

Initial Impression: This is a beautiful poem with a unique concept. I appreciate the simplicity of your writing.

Theme and Creativity: The poem has lovely romantic thought inside every line. Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. I like the way you put your feelings into words.

Favorite line:
" I’ve looked in your eyes; seen how they shine.
At something I’d say, some sort of sign.
I saw the tears that never fell,
You held them back, so very well.”

Suggestions: I did not find any mistakes. You have used punctuation marks where they are needed.

I enjoyed reading your poem very much.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.


Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of MOMMY  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Oldwarrior Author IconMail Icon

I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group".

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: A very good gratitude poem with a unique concept. The poem expresses the poets feelings about her mother.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: This poem consists of two rimed stanzas of eight lines. It describes the feeling of awe, love and gratitude to a parent. The rhyme: a-a-b-b makes this poem brighter; the flow of this poem is wonderful. I could say poetically that it floats like the floating sea waves.


*Cut* Favorite Lines: “Mommy I smell you, your sweet fragrant charms,
as you hold me so closely, in your warm gentle arms.”


I enjoyed it reading.

*Starp* Mina *Starfishp*
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Review of Portraits  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!sharon

I love this piece.

I like the way you put your feelings into words. Your poem have lovely romantic thoughts inside every line.

I especially like the last stanza.

"Now gaze upon the dolphin's play
beneath the setting sun's display,
then to the clouds, the wisp of air
to tear apart the lovers there."

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

mina  


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Review of Love’s Triangle  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!

I just read your poem from the poetry genre list.

*Butterflyb* : The poem is unique it brings the innovative life in words. I especially like the title and the imaginary of your poem. It flowed wonderfully with your crafted words. Here you begin by comparing love with jungle. I like the way you put your feelings into words.


*Bulletg*Favorite lines:

Though this triangle of love
Must survive and endure,
For the tiger, who he dreams of,
Is giving ground, to be sure

*Starg*OVERALL IMPRESSION:

The rhyme scheme of A, A, make this poem brighter.
I enjoyed reading your poem. It’s beautiful.

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Happy Writing!

Mina  
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Review of Old Brighton Town  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!

This poem is unique. A great write and the way you displayed it. It brings the innovative life into words. Sometimes some people bring us back to the old days. I like the way you put your feelings into words. The rhyming A, B, A, B makes this poem more interesting and faster. Your poem floats well with your crafted words. I especially like the last stanza

So, I thanked this man for his pleasure today,
Placed change in his hand before walking away.
My mind still vivid from my younger years,
As I swallowed hard and sniffed back the tears.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us.*Smile*


Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Nobody Loves Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Jyo

I am sending you a review of your story, "Nobody Loves Me" Open in new Window.. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*Bulletg* WHY I AM REVIEWING THIS ITEM: A wonderful story. I like the title.


*Bulletg* FIRST IMPRESSION: You wrote beautifully in the view of a thirteen-year-old child. I like the way you wrote this piece kept me reading. I especially liked the ending.


*Bulletg*STORY LINE This is a story of a kid who feels unloved which makes him sad and unhappy.

*Starg*OVERALL IMPRESSION: I appreciate the simplicity of your writing. I enjoyed your story.

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*Starp* Mina *Starfishp*
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Review of Beauty  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!

I'm reviewing on behalf of "The Simply Positive Group" .

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: I like how you put your feelings into words. This is indeed a good poem. the way you wrThis is a good poem with a unique story. Yes, there is nothing like a good, faithful friend.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: Your poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. The rhyming scheme makes this poem more interesting and faster.

*Pencil* Favorite lines: The way you wrote this poem kept me reading it from beginning to the end. I especially like the lines

I cannot believe he is mine
Such a good friend
My soul and his intertwine
I will not find one like him ever again.

*Cut* Suggestions:You have used the right punctuation marks where they are needed. I didn’t find any mistake.
I enjoyed reading your poem very much.


Mina  


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Review of Lunar Elcipse  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello!Carly

I just read your poem from "read and review page". I like this poem. The way you wrote this kept me reading your poem to the end.

You have made a good word choice (ancient, yearn, eclipse, water to create the mood of this poem.

Your poem flowing beautifully with your crafted words. I understood this poem is written for a contest. And I think it followed the prompt.
My favorite lines

*DragonflyV* We are witnesses
To this natural phenomenon
No blood will be spilled
No violence unbound
Just a witnessing
Of wonderment.

Final Thoughts:  *FlowerY*I enjoyed your poem. It's pleasure to know someone like you.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Your Name  


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Review of Falling Leaves  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!again

I read your poem "Falling Leaves" Open in new Window..

The Poem:  *FlowerY* I like this thoughtful poem. The main image is wonderful. Our life is like the autumn leaf. The falling leaves become compost to nourish the soil of new beginnings.

My Favourite lines:  *FlowerR*

"Returning swiftly, the grass took me over.
Then part of me came back as a four leaf clover."

Final Thoughts:  *FlowerY* I enjoyed your poem. It's well written.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

mina  


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Review of Rapunzel  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello!RainbowFish Author IconMail Icon

I read your story. This is delightful story. The concept is unique.You have written a very good piece of story, I liked the way you told the story with very clear descriptions and presentation. Your story makes me laugh especially where you say "I will return, my darling, when I am taller and your hair is longer. I will scale this tower and we shall be together!”

The Story:  *FlowerY* I like the plot.

My Suggestions:  *FlowerR* I didn't find any mistake.

Final Thoughts:  *FlowerY* I enjoyed. It's well written.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!Wolfbane

I just read your story. This is good piece of story about Black Wolf and Corn fed Jim. Beautifully told and written. Writing a story for children’s is a challenge. The way you wrote it kept me reading it from the beginning to the end. Especially I like the ending.

Characters: All the characters are well developed.


These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of A Needed Friend  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Magoo Author IconMail Icon

I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group".

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: This is a nice poem. I like the story. It is beautifully told and written.


*Idea* The Poem:
This is a poem about friendship between a child and a pup.


*Pencil* Technique: Every stanza of this poem has the rhyme scheme of a, x, a, x. Rhyming not only makes the poem more interesting, but also makes the rhythm faster, happier, and brighter. .

I appreciate the simplicity of this poem.

*Bulletg*Favorite lines:
The pup perked up, then lay back down
with blanket as a hood;
a child in pink asleep in peace,
a mom now understood.

*Cut* Suggestions :I didn’t find any mistakes. You have used the correct punctuation marks where they are needed

*Starg*Overall Impression: . The poem was amazing and the ending was brilliant. Thank you for sharing

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  
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Review of The Magical Day  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

I'm reviewing for "The Newbies Academy Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.

I like the story about a fat boy Bruce Willis who was bullied because of his size. Bruce Willis expresses his inner thought and feelings in his diary. I like the way you wrote all these.

This was a very good letter. You did a good job moving this story into happy ending.
Suggestion: I think you need a paragraph break. A little bit editing will make this piece more interesting.
I enjoyed your story. Keep writing.

*Fairyr*Mina *Fairyl*


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi

I'm reviewing for "The Newbies Academy Group". I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: I appreciate the simplicity of this poem. The way you wrote this kept me reading.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity:Your poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. The tone of this poem is soothing. You beautifully put your feelings into words.

*Pencil* Favorite lines:
I’d like to share this dream of mine,
A dream that could come true.
And if you would, I’d gladly share;
This dream, I would, with you.

*Cut* Suggestions: This poem is one that I find nearly perfect. I did not find any mistake.
I enjoyed your poem. Keep writing.


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*Starp* Mina *Starfishp*
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Review of The Old Oak  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Starwriter Author IconMail Icon

My name is Mina~ Author IconMail Icon and I'm reviewing for "The Newbies Academy Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression:I like the story of the oak tree and the images you painted here.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity:Your poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. The tone of this poem is soothing.
*Pencil* Favorite lines:

You’ll find ‘round the trunk and limbs
The writing of sweetheart names
Generations carved and trimmed
You’ll find ‘round the trunk and limbs

*Cut* Suggestions: This poem is one that I find nearly perfect. I did not find any mistake.

I enjoyed your poem. Keep writing.


*Starp* Mina *Starfishp*
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Review of Be yourself  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!Ali

I just read your poem.

This is a good poem packed with message. Concept is unique. This poem is beautiful inside every line. It is our own responsibility to bring our own talent and act accordingly. I love this piece especially the last stanza

But make your enemies friends.
Let your imagination fly
Out with the stars
Until you feel free.
Never let your mind go
Till you reach the stars

I look forward to read more of your write.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Scorched planet  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!Wolfbane

I just read your poem.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: Wonderful poem about our mother nature.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: I like the way you describes beautifully a lot of problems that our mother earth faces now. But sadly we don't pay the respect that she deserves. We create the things to make our life easier. But by using them we polluted the air and sea.

*Pencil* Technique: I appreciate the simplicity of your writing. Your rhyming scheme (abab) is beautiful.

*Pencil* Favorite lines:
We ask ourselves, when? No one really knows.
We played our part, now all our soul's to blame.
The ice will move in to crush as it grows.
Live, carry what's left of our human name.

*Cut* Suggestions: I didn't see any mistakes.
*Butterflyb* Overall Impression:. Thanks Wolfbane for sharing this important message.

Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!Neva

I am sending you a review of your poem, "A Thanksgiving Past" Open in new Window.. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*Bulletg* WHY I AM REVIEWING THIS ITEM:I liked this gratitude poem and the way you telling this.

*Bulletg* FIRST IMPRESSION : Beautifully told and written. Through this poem you are remembering your Grandma, mother, Grandpa and what they gave to you. You remember their cooking “Turkey and oyster dressing”, “baked the pumpkin pie” “whipped the cream” “cranberry sauce”.

*Thumbsup* FAVORITE LINES:I liked the last stanza
"A Thanksgiving past
We gathered in the kitchen
And not in a dining room
Mom's cranberry sauce
Made with the whole cranberry
Memories of Thanksgiving"

*Bulletg*OVERALL IMPRESSION This is a wonderful narrative poem; flowed beautifully. I learned how to write an sedoka poem. Thank you for sharing. I liked the way you put out your feelings. I enjoyed your poem.


Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!Jack & Phoebe Fan Author IconMail Icon

I just read this delightful piece from friendship genre list. It’s beautifully written, which occurs in our daily lives. I want to thank you for your sweet description and the way you wrote this.

My favorite line: the last two stanza

"She's been my best friend for 72 years.
Through joy, heartbreak and many fears.

I realized finally that the woman I see
has always been my best friend, ME!"

I enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for sharing

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!DEATH NOTE Author IconMail Icon

It's been pleasure to review your story on behalf of the Simply Positive Group. Please be reminded that this review is my opinion only.

This is a wonderful autobiography of a pen. Beautifully told and written.
The most I appreciated is the descriptions and presentations of this story and the way you wrote this.

This is a story, View from the Pen. The pen remembers the time when it was red and shiny. She loved running over the soft and smooth pages. But one day the girl accidentally put the pen down and dented its nib.

I like the ending where “I stay in her pen stand, waiting to be taken in her fingers again, drink in ink once more and spill it all out for her … but I guess I will have to stay like this and wait in vain for the rest of my life!”

I enjoyed it. I think you can make bigger story from everything I just read. It would be interesting.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.
Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of My Critter Zoo  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!espero

I just read your poem and I'm reviewing for "Simply Positive Group" .

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression:This is a good poem with a unique story. Yes, there is nothing like a good, faithful dog. We may have many best friends but dogs are the only one to soothe our soul.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: Your poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. The rhyming scheme (A, A, B, B) makes this poem more interesting and faster.

*Pencil* Favorite lines: The way you wrote this poem kept me reading it from beginning to the end. I especially like the lines

“I was speechless, and yet it was so darn cute
That I didn't have heart to give him the boot.
I watched him leave but soon back he came,
Almost as though he were playing a game.”

*Cut* Suggestions:You have used the right punctuation marks where they are needed. I didn’t find any mistake.

I enjoyed reading your poem very much.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of F.R.I.E.N.D.S.  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!WriterAtHeart Author IconMail Icon

I just read your poem. This is a beautiful poem about heartfelt friendship.

Friends are the shoulder you unashamedly cry on.
The cushioning you need when the whole world is against you
Life is a bleak, dusty, desert if you have no friends.

I like the little rhyming. This poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words.

My favorite lines
So live with them.
Laugh with them.
Never settle for anyone else, but them

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for sharing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello!Neeti

First welcome to writing.com. I am reviewing your poem on behalf of The Simply Positive Group. Yes, Life moves on no matter what happens. There are so many obstacles in our life. We should be positive to face those challenges.

I like the subject of your poem. You wrote so beautifully. Especially I like the lines
but life moves on......
simple,alone and sometimes dark,
but with its spark,

“with its spark” yes hope never dies.

Suggestion : I think you need to capitalize the first word in the first line.

I enjoyed your poem. Well done. Keep writing.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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