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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi hiwakura Author IconMail Icon


This is beautiful poem about environmental awareness. It describes lot of problem that our mother earth faces nowadays. The way you wrote this poem keeps me reading. God has given us this beautiful world to live on. But we are polluting this world by greenhouse gases. If we keep polluting our world then it will probably die out on us.

The concept is unique.

I like the lines

We are next; we need to
Reverse the progress
Save the world
Raise the forests
Cut the cars, the oil,
The fumes,

I enjoyed reading your poem. It's beautiful. This is my idea alone. Keep writing.

Mina.


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*Starp* Mina *Starfishp*
*Flower3**Flowerb* *Treefall2* *Flower5* *Treecypress*
*Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass*

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Review of Near the Fountain  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello!Nikola

I read your poem "Near the Fountain" Open in new Window.. This poem has a soothing tone.


Through this entire poem, you painted the nature of the fountain and people so beautifully and that make me read this poem to the last word. Through this poem you wants to dig out your inner feelings. You felt as you are the part of nature, Like "Music of their voices blend
with the water's song in a joyful symphony."

I liked the little rhyming and the flow of this poem. I've enjoyed reading your poem. I like the lines

"Near the fountain
people dare to dream:
hopes, joys, sorrows.
The calm waters reflect
in cooling harmony."


These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I enjoyed your poem.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!Wolfbane

I just read your poem "My Name Is w0lfbane" Open in new Window..

It’s a very delighted poem. I really enjoy it reading. It keeps laughing. The flow of this poem floats beautifully with your crafted words.

The way you wrote this poem keeps me reading it from beginning to the end. I especially like the title the lines

Someday, I hope it would propel me to fame.
Within you I plant seeds, the size of a grain.
Maybe you will remember my name.

It is really a thoughtful poem.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.

Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Autumn's Chill  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!

I read your Rubaiyat poem from the nature genre list. I love this piece. It describes how beauty lies in everything. The season which we generally consider to be wed to stillness and dryness. I like the beautiful nature picture you painted here. Red and orange leaves, whistling wind, birds, creatures all things blended together creates a beautiful natural picture. This poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! Sharon

I just read your story “Captain Kid's Search for Buried Treasure”. This is a story of two young boys who act out their pirate search for buried treasure.

The way you wrote this keeps me reading from beginning to the end. I like the conversation between the two young boys.

I understood that this story was written for a contest with the words “buried treasure” “alligator” “pail” “missing shoe” “camp”. And they fit beautifully with the conversation.

I sometimes read your stories and poems here and I think they are all wonderful. And this piece is beautiful. I like the ending. Thank you for sharing.

Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!Calypso

I just read a beautiful children story.

First Impression: I like the subject of the story.

Story: The story was about three Pet store puppies. They were best friends. They slept together, ate together, and played together. They never talked about the time when they would no longer be together.

Dialogue: dialogue floated beautifully between the characters.

Suggestion: I found some mistakes though; I'm not expert in the same.

Whined Sebastian. "cut it out." Capitalized the word “C”
“What are you little guys up to over here." You need a question mark after the word “here”.
Spelling: Some minor spelling issues below which I marked
Delmolish should be “demolish”
“baby swimming pool that served as there home for now” should be “their”.

Overall Impression:I enjoyed this little puppy’s story. It’s beautiful.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Winter Blessings  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello!Dr Taher

I saw your name on the Anniversary review page. And I thought I would give you a review. I just read your story about adaptation. I like the subject . The way you wrote this read story kept me reading it from beginning to end, what I liked best was how Lalita finally adopt an abandon child. You did very well at moving the story toward a happy ending.

Story: This is a story about a divorced woman Lalita who finally adopt a child.

Dialogue: Dialogue floated beautifully between all the characters. I could imagine the scenes where they were.

This story is unique and it flowed wonderfully. I enjoyed reading your story. It’s well written.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.

Happy Writing!

Mina  

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello!Kotaro Author IconMail Icon

I found your name on the anniversary review page and I select this piece for review. I think you are a good story teller. The way you wrote this keeps me reading from beginning to the end.

I love the description and the presentation. You went into the smallest details.

Plot: Where all the firebombing takes place.

Dialogue: Floated normally between the characters Mary and Kenji.

I enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for sharing your awesome work with us.
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Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of My Online Friend  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!Bernie

A beautiful gratitude poem for friendship I just read. You are so lucky that you have got such a friend.

I think online friends play an important role in our life. So many people adore and love from afar. They just feel so real and so close.

Your poem reminds me some of my friends who lives afar. I have similar feelings like you. Sometimes I feel more comfortable talking with online friends rather than my real friends.

My favorite lines:

Just seeing a "what's up?" or a cheery "hey"
It makes my sadness and problems go away
Just having you there for me makes me smile

This poem is soothing and floated beautifully with your crafted words. I enjoyed it.
Thank you for sharing.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Doggie Time  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello!New

I just read your delighted story. Especially I like ending. “Nothing great really happens in a doggy’s life but sleeping, walking…. back to his normal food”. The way you wrote this piece makes me reading your story from beginning to the end.

I feel you could insert a few scenes so your story will be more interesting.

Overall impression: A great story. I really enjoyed your story. It's well written.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
Happy Writing!

Your Name  


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Review of The Shifting Sand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello!willwilcox

I found your name on the Anniversary review page and I am sending you a review of your story"The Shifting Sand" Open in new Window.. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

Your story is set in the planet Saturn where the spacer Jack Conner’s spaceship suddenly crashed.

I could imagine a planet where the Jack Conner dropped down into the whirlpool and struggling hard with its force.

I love the descriptions of the planet you given here.

Dialogue: Dialogue floated beautifully between the characters. I like the way you wrote your story. I really enjoy it reading.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello!medea


I read your veteran's poem "When I Came Back from Vietnam"

I found your name on the anniversary review page. I choose this item for review.

Here you beautifully painted the perfect war picture. Your poem is wonderful inside every line. I love the story of this poem and the way you wrote this. The flow of this poem floated beautifully with your crafted words.

Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful.

I like the lines

I hope someday you will see.
You made me feel like half a man,
When you coldly turned your back on me,
When I came back from Vietnam.


Your poem touched me. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina

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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!

I found your name on the Anniversary review page and I pick this poem for review.

Yes, Friends play an important role in our life. They encourage us when we are sad. And give us good suggestion to solve our problem. They encouraged us always to keep our chin up.

And yes, having good friends is like having treasure. Young or old, all of us need friends in our pathway.

This poem is small but rich in words. It is easy to read and understand.

I've read some of your poems and I have to say that I really like your work.

Thank you for sharing.

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Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello!Jones

I found your name in the Anniversary review page. I am now reviewing your story.

First Impression: A clever story. I like the ending.

The story: Mr. Beale who loves his work and who congratulated himself for working through the weekend.

But one day he was attacked by the bank robbers and he fought bravely until the end.

Characters: Mr. Beale , robbers and Martha.

Dialogue: The dialogue floated beautifully between the characters.

Punctuation marks: I think you need a hyphen between the word all leering “The circle of men grew tighter like in one of those ghastly slasher movies, what with the stockings and the lopsided faces all leering down at him” and a comma after the word shoving “shoving which”

Overall I impression: I enjoyed reading. It’s well written.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!Calypso

I found your name on the anniversary review page. I choose this item for review.

I like the sweet narrative poem. It’s really a good poem for the children. There are important messages in last three stanzas. Especially in these lines

You can be a friend!
When someone needs one,
Teach them how to have fun,
Cheer them up when their sad,
Talk to them when their mad.

I enjoyed the story of the Rat who has a tambourine in his hand.
I thought this piece was very nice. I enjoyed it very much.


These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!Ann Ticipation Author IconMail Icon

I found your name on the Anniversary review page and I choose this poem for review.

I like this thoughtful poem. it keeps me reading from the beginning to the end.

We should proud for them who fought for the country. In your poem there is honor and pride and at the same time there is a felling of absence. The mixed feeling and emotions throughout this poem.

Favorite lines:
Each morning at daybreak
We pray all wars will cease
That one day we shall wake
To find a world at peace.

Your poem is absolutely beautiful and flows wonderfully. It touched me. Thank you for sharing.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Feelings  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!

I am reviewing you for anniversary review.
I just read your poem about feeling. It is beautiful and reminded me of someone.


The poem flows beautifully with your crafted words. I like the little rhyme. The punctuation marks give this poem an extra flavor.

I like the lines Time seems to help put all in to perspective.
Perspective can help with the truth?
Truth! Can truth help define feelings?
Feelings; what is this feeling I have?


These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Kenzie Author IconMail Icon

I am reviewing you for anniversary review.

I just read your piece. The beautiful nature picture you painted here makes me reading your poem to the end. Each season comes different looks and beauty. And yes, Spring is certainly the best season of all with smell of flowers. When warm air begins to flow, birds start singing.

I like the sweet descriptions of this poem. The tone of this poem is beautiful. I like the lines
In my back yard is a symphony
Beginnings of spring harmonize with traces of winter

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Thank you for sharing.


Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, Ms. Winnie

I read this when I come across adventure genre list. The way you wrote this makes me reading it from beginning to the end.

How Nathan discovers his powers and saves his village from a sea monster. Before Nathan born a hunter’s mighty sword feel to earth at Winnie’s feet. She kept the heavy sword herself for her nephew. Waiting for the moment.
Sea monster attack him one day and Nathan fought fiercely with the mighty sword and killed the monster.

The conversation between the characters flows smoothly. I found it very entertaining. Thank you for sharing and allowing me reading and reviewing your work. I really enjoyed and learned a lot from this.


Happy Writing!

mina  


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!

I read your "One of a Mother's Days to Remember" Open in new Window. .

This is an amazing poem, and it shows a lot more about the reality. As the children grown up they leave their parents. You beautifully wrote how mothers feel for her children. In mother’s heart, each child will always be her kid..

Favorite lines: The chubby, little feet pushing along the floor, at some wee hour of the morn;
Noisily appearing at the bedroom door.

Thank you for sharing and allowing me reading and reviewing your work. I really enjoyed and learned a lot from this.


Happy Writing!

mina  


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Review of Renewed Spirit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello!again

I like this thoughtful poem. It describing what happens after death. The poet could hear lying on the hospital bed that the angels above her whispering “what shall happen with her?”

She imagined that the angels will lead her to the afterlife. You wrote this poem beautifully. The tone is soothing that kept me reading to the end. I like the lines
“I give my life to God
As I did there on Earth
For living in God’s light
Can truly sum your worth”

I enjoyed your poem. A beautiful poem, great write and the way you displayed life after death.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Giant Joe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!

I just read this narrative poem. Yes, fighting is not the way out. I like the wonderful example of Giant Joe’s story.. Tiny boy Joe lived with his mother and his mother called him “Giant Joe”. This made Tiny Joe very proud. Joe’s mother teaches him the value of life.

Here you focused on the positive side of life. The tone of this poem is quite. I like the little rhyming. The picture you are painting here is beautiful.

You have used punctuation marks where they are needed.

My favorite lines: “So you see kids learn from this
And be nice to everyone
If someone is being mean to you
Don't let them think they've won”

I enjoyed reading. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Blue  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!Zacharie Author IconMail Icon

This poem is absolutely beautiful. This story reminds me my pet dog. The flow of your poems floats beautifully. I like the lines
There once was a dog named Blue,
who really didn't mean to eat your shoe.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!Jelly

I read your piece "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.. I like your philosophical writing. We know that story play a vital role in our life. They are our good friends. The joy of reading a good book cannot describe in a words. When we are in trouble, or alone or in a great depression books stand by us to wipe out our tears.

I love the lines

"If you are in pain, you are not alone.
If you are joyful, you are not alone.
If you are lost, you are not alone.
If you are searching for something, you are not alone."

You written beautifully that keeps me reading.

Suggestion: I think you need some paragraph break. So that will be more interesting.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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Review of Being Perfect  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!

I read your piece "Being Perfect" Open in new Window. . Yes, nothing is perfect in this world. The truth is that life can never be what you imagine. If we want to be perfect we should earn and give a little bit of it to the poor.

The way you wrote these make me reading from beginning to the end. I especially like the lines

"On the verge of dying, people will know that the happiness they were after, in fact, never existed on earth, but they had an ounce of it left in themselves to strive unconsciously for it, and that is how life keeps going on. "

I love the good descriptions and the presentation.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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