Hi, rose I just read this “My favorite Jane Austen stories”.
Like you I also like the Jane Austen stories. My favorite is Jane Austin’s “Pride and Prejudice” and “Emma”. I read “Pride and Prejudice” more than ten times.
Mr. Bennet have five daughters. And Elizabeth is the eldest of all she faces pressure from her parents to marry. Mrs. Bennet once visits with her daughters in a social party. Here Elizabeth met Mr. Darcy and she found him so proud about himself. He refused to dance with Elizabeth. This makes her thought that he is arrogant. I like the conversation between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. Jane Austin wrote this story so easily and is an incredible author.
If you visit my portfolio you will see that I mention her name as my favorite author. You summarize these books so nicely. I am not yet read the book “Northanger Abbey”. I will read it. Thank you Rose for sharing this.
I like the picture in it.
I am here to review you on behalf of Simply Positive Group. I love the poem you wrote. This poetry is short, but very neat and sweet. The quadrant poem (abab) rhyming well.
Music creates a positive effect on our mind. It soothed us, refreshed us. In your poem you are telling this by the lines below
When I drop down sad, depressed
Music makes me soothed, refreshed
Music can help the patient to recover soon, removes our pain. The benefits of music can’t explain in a word. In your poem the words “melody” “pleasures waves” “breath of life” creates the atmosphere of the poem. I like the lines
Through all darkness, sorrow's knife
Music gives me breath of life.
I am here to review you on behalf of Simply Positive Group. I love the poem you wrote. This poetry is short, but very neat and sweet. The quadrant poem (abab) rhyming well. A perfect poem for a good friend.
Friends the most wonderful gift of the god. Season comes and season goes but the memory of a close friend glittering in our heart years after year. You are telling this by the lines below
Whatever season, old or new,
I can always count on you.
Friendship is one of life's greatest treasures. They us laugh when we are sad, they are not afraid to help us. The lines of your poem tell this
As we travel hand- in- hand
Sailing to that distant land
I love the poem you wrote. This poetry is short, but very neat and sweet. The quadrant poem (abab) rhyming well. For a little girl mother is her whole world. For a mother a child is always child is he/she is grown up or not. She shades us, care us, inspired us. She loves us and did not want anything in return.
She tried hard to bring up her children to sacrifice herself.
A beautiful gratitude poem.
I like the lines
Love you Mom, that's all I have to say
Hi, I just read this poem of yours. The subject of your poem makes me read this poem. Now a day’s Anxiety disorder is a great mental illness. It can damage ones nerve cells. I know that some kind of exercise can reduce this illness if it does not go in extreme limit otherwise you need help from the professionals. In you poem you are telling that how you helped an anxiety disorder patient.
A mental patient seeks counseling and support from us.
Hi, Kings I just read a poem of yours”Distant Trees”. Trees are one of the most creations of god.
Seasons come season go. Hills look different in every season because of the trees. In autumn red, orange, green all colors blended together makes a beautiful natural picture. Then in winter it loses their colors, covered with snow. Then in the spring trees fill with beauty. In our life we the human being depends on the trees every time and place. Each and every time we thanks god for this beautiful creation. I like the line most
Mother nature will revive their leaves,
To cover the earth and give the shade.
You are used some beautiful words to create the atmosphere of this poem.
Hi, warrior I just read this beautiful poem of yours. A father is a first hero to his daughter, the best gift of the god. He guides her daughter with great care; inspires her; and teach to take the life challenge; teach how to behave with others. He is the first pillar of her daughter. In your poem “I have sailed the seas of sorrow since my father passed away,” with these line you told everything about father. The story you are telling here that makes me read your poem from beginning to the end.
I like the lines
I will never give up hope as I sail the boundless sea,
for I am my father’s daughter, this life was meant for me.
A wonderful poem that I ever read.
Hi, I just read this. This reminds me something which I’m not done yet. Especially I like “Grow my hair down my back” “Have peace at all times.” “Learn to paint” I already learned paint but I have to sharpen it.
“Take piano lessons.” I like the symphony of piano” Be as elegant as Audrey Hepburn.”
“Watch the sunset. Watch the grass grow” Sometimes I like to lost myself in the nature with her trees, flowers, rivers and the seas.
I just read this poem of yours. Here you paints a picture and imagine that you flies upon “butterflies’ wings” and a fairy gift you something to repair this world; to repair “brokenhearted people”; to repair those whose hearts are hate-filled.
The image of the “butterfly” is an imaginary image of the good deeds of the mankind.
We live in this world the only planet to live in and we want to make this world a paradise by our own good deeds. The poet could imagine; with magical dust she ceases the war and brings everlasting peace in this world.
This simple and beautiful poem has a thoughtful message on it. Thank you for sharing with us. Your poem flow like a floating sea wave.
I am reviewing one of your essay.
You studied “ Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Spanish, Indian, American, Italian and French.” Lot of things you studied!!! I also like cooking but not like you.
Do you ever study “Bangladeshi cuisine”?? it almost similar with “ Indian cuisine”. You are right that fresh ingredients has the most nutrients and put just the right amount of seasoning can make the food more tastier.
Hi,
Firstly welcome to Writing.com
Yes, flower is the most beautiful creation of the world. All the poets always compared women to flowers. True love lies in our heart. Real love can hardly ever die. Love shouldn’t be throwing like tissue paper. In your poem you are using some good words to create the atmosphere of the poem.
I like the line
When my beauty and value had gone away, you threw me out
Suggestion: Capitalized all the first words of your poem. Cut your sentences a little shorter.
Overall Impression: A thoughtful poem. Keep writing.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful.
As I love cooking so I was curious to know the recipe. Though all the ingredients are not available in our country but I will try to make some of those.
About "Chocolate Spritzkuchen" I feel like making this cookies after reading this.
and the "Oatmeal M&M Cookies" I think making this could be easy.
Hi Whatsit, I just read this and I am reviewing you for "Anniversary Review"
I learned a lot of things from here. Especially these points caught my eye "Build the Vocabulary" "Keep up with current events" "Show some curiosity" and "Read out loud".
Yes, you are right that One can gather a lot of knowledge by reading newspaper, magazine,or journal. I believe it is beneficial to be curious and nothing can be learnt without curiously.
Thank you for sharing this important piece with us.
Hi Sam, I am reviewing you one of your nice emotional poem.
The subject of your poem kept me reading on. All of us have to pass the old phase of age. As we grow old everything changed inside us and we almost become children.
Then we need help from someone or the others.As we grow older we are worried about everything a thought always circulating in our head like "Who will take care of us? At that time if we attacked by the the diseases like "Alzheimer’s" its make our life difficult. But we don't have to worry because our children will look after one day.
"He’s always safe with them, after all, he is… their Dad." you explained it all by this line.
The flowing of your poem is like a floating sea wave. A beautiful poem.
Hi I am reviewing you for "Anniversary Review" . Childhood is the beast part of our life. "Innocent" and "Wonder" with these two words you had expressed how beautiful the childhood was.
As we grow up responsibility overtake us. We cannot be "carefree" anymore. Yes, Growing up is no longer a dream,
it's a reality.
Hi, Welcome to WDC. I just read this poem of yours. In your poem “she boils on inside” and “inside so patiently” you are telling that how patiently she hold herself inside. In our life we are deal with rejection and disappointment and this is very common. Impatient people never succeed in life and to them life is meaningless. And we should overcome impatient by self-defeating.
Hi KjkI want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.
Initial Impression: I like the “curious mind” of your poem.
Theme and Creativity: we know that curiosity kills a cat. All the great inventions in this world are indeed born out by the curiosity of the people. The teenage people have a curiously and urge to know more about things in the world around them. In your poem you described it beautifully. I like the lines
The mind goes on a journey
Into a deep, dark beyond
Hi, I just read this poem of yours. This is a beautiful poem.
In this world some people less happy then ourselves. We are not happy in our own position and places. Happiness depends upon ourselves. Some people think that only money can bring happiness. Riches struggles to find happiness running after the money. A certain point of time they are not happy to run after the money.
On the other hand a small sum of money makes the poor people happy than rich.
In your poem you use many good examples.
I just read this. I am sending you a review of your piece. This review reflects my opinion only.
All over the world color everywhere, color swings our mood. Here you described the meaning of colors beautifully. As I like to paints picture so I like this article to read on. “Red is the color of your face when you feel rage. Red.” Yes, you are right . About color orange you example “Bengal Tiger” Orange and black but it has four different color variations they are: orange, white, cinnamon, and snow white.
I like the line “Green is the crispness of the air on an early spring morning” and the line “Blue is choosing to stay in bed instead of sitting outside listening to the birds or the waves of the ocean.”
I think that you need to put a space between the word “brokenheartedness”
Nice article to read on. Thank you for sharing with us.
Hi, I just read this about depression. Yes. depression is like a monster and it has different size and shapes. It is the great obstacle in our pathway, it robs our sleep, it makes us helpless. Here you described it so well.
One who suffers, know how bad the depression is.
People cannot get rid of this depression by themselves and should get rid of the claws of the "depression monster" by taking medication.
Hi, I just read this. Yes, it is true that all fairy tale have happy ending. When I was young fairytale seems real to me. But our life is not a fairytale it has many ups and down. Life has many obstacles and stress and
it has both sorrow and happiness
So, we should admit that life is not a fairy tale.
Hi, I just read your opinion about life. Yes, life is unpredictable. God fixed our fate and one day we all leave this beautiful world this is a common truth. Our life is a river and its waves takes us where we don't know yet. In life we have face many obstacles and we have to admit this. So, we should enjoy our life whatever we want to do.
Thanks for sharing your opinion with us. Well written.
Hi, I just read this essay. The subject of this essay keeps me reading this. In this world we all depends on each other. He humans rule our earth and we have some responsibilities to protect them. In your essay you said that Many scientists think viruses aren't even truly alive at all. Is it true?
and yes we could not imagine a world without plants and animals.
Know lot about strange a world and plants. Thanks for sharing with us.
Hi, I just read this poem of yours. Human mind is very mysterious. Sometimes bright and sometimes filled with dark clouds. "my heart you stole" In this line you express your feelings so deeply. I like the word of your poem. I like the lines
Like quicksand,
My thoughts transcend,
Slowly,
Hi, I just read this poem. Our life is full of obstacles and stress. But we have to admit it. In your poem you are using many good words specially the lines where you are telling "Walk till your feet bleed and your legs can go no more". Yes, we should keep walking with hope. Hope is the light on our pathway. Only hope can keeps us alive.
Your poem is very inspiritional. Thanks for sharing with us.
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