Hi, I am now reviewing your page for "A very wodhouse challenge"
I join" Simply Positive group" this group because Simply Positive is a group where i don't work much for reviewing. Six reviews per week does not seem hard. I also like the beautiful badges.
I like your beautiful signatures. The layout of the forum is attractive.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for Anniversary review.
We live in this world. There is no another planet to live in. In this world we live with earthquake, cyclone, tornado, flood, forest fire etc. In your poem all things blended together.
Yes, nature takes without asking and changing our lives. Though we people are the ruler of this world but we have to live this world with these natural disaster in every steps of life. These disaster affects people living and more lives are lost in the disaster.
But we have to except that this is the part of life.
I like the lines
She can serve us or hurt us,
and is a force that commands respect.
A nice poem. Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing now one of youe beautiful poem.
Mother is the best gift of the god. She taught us what is right what is wrong; she is like a warm blanket in the winter. She protects us with her gentle patience and care. Life goes on its own way. But the memory of the dearest one never died. Here the poet said how the memory of her mother followed her in her life.
She remembers the days they have passed together. Smelled the perfumed she used. All things make her sad. The poet could imagine that her mother see everything from heaven window.
After read your poem I have to do something great for my mother.
I like the lines
and there should be a zip code for heaven.
Or email: Mom@heaven.com.
I like the story of your pet cat. I have once a white fury cat but it died when it grew older. Do you know that cat can live only 10 to 15 yrs. It is a most popular domestic in the world. Like you I also not heard the name “feline leukemia” before.
Suggestion: If you write more about your cat like How it played with you, How it looked like, that will be more interesting to read. Keep writing.
Hi ladybug I am now reviewing one of your item. First Welcome to WDC.
I think you know that self help is the best help. Self-Help helps us us to overcome certain things of our life's. Self help gives us power to fight the battle of our life. In our life is full of depression and stress. When it goes to extreme limit that causes mental illness. If ones experience helps other that will be a great achievement of other. Sometimes medication can cure this illness.
Hi poetpea Welcome to WDC. I am now one of your Item.
The subject of your article make me read. In this article you described the relation between men and women and their family. Our parents love us and taught us what life is? They learning life lessons at home. Our parents taught to take challenges of day-to-day living . Everybody want a happy family. If anybody losses job that can effect in his/her family. Women took part a leading role of the family. A thoughtful article with many good words.
Suggestion: I think if you put some paragraph break then it will be interesting to read. Keep writing.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.
Initial Impression: A thoughtful poem.
Yes you are right you will discovered it in due time. In our life we have so many questions. At first we don't know how to face this. When we experienced we know everything. With experience you get knowledge of everything around you.
Nice starting free verse.
Suggestion : I think if you add few lines would have been better.
I an now reviewing one of your poem. Though I am not a good reviewer but the poem you wrote here make me read.
Three little words love changes everything. Love sometimes make us happy sometimes brings pain in our life. It is two side of the same coin like day and night. This realities we face through our life. Here poet express the feeling of beautiful moments they passed together.
I like the lines
Know each other intimately
Different in every way.
Overall impression: Good rhythm, Nice flowing, Nice wording. Mina
Hi, nidy I am now reviewing one of your poem about spring.
First Impression: Spring is the best season of all. Here writer described the nature of spring so beautifully.
After a long winter spring come to our earth to make us smile. Birds twittering, Flowers bloom everywhere. Our Mind refreshes with joy and happiness. Grasses turn from brown to green. The aroma of the air freshness our mind. Everything is so lively. We call the season of renew and rebirth. In your poem you described all those so beautifully. I can imagine those all.
Conclusion: The flow of the poem is like a floating sea wave. Nice poem.
so beautifully you painted the picture about nature. Days come days dies then welcome a new day. A new day begin with new sunshine.
Our earth rotate to its own axis. That causes day and night. The beauty of the day and night give piece in our mind.The color (pearly pink, golden,black, yellow, purple) in your poem blended together to described nature.
I'm not a good writer. I'll try to give a honest feedback.
First Impressions: A simple small poem but rich in words.
An emotional feeling grow in one hearts when someone love other. First love never be forgettable. It lasts in ones heart till death. Love makes them blind. First love brings up emotions that anybody may never have felt before. Most people feel they have never come near feeling that strongly.
My Favorite line of your poem is "I felt I was complete"
Welcome to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.
A lose of a good friend never be forgettable who died tragically. The golden moments never come back. This memory lasts year after year in ones heart. This sorrow never run out. I like the subject of your poem. In your poem you described your feeling simply that makes me read. My opinion is if you write a prose about this subject it will be good.
Nice poem.
Keep writing
Hello Linda J. Wolff I am sending you a review of your poem, This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you. This is a wonderful poem about butterfly. A sweet little butterfly born in the earth only for few days. Poets are wrote so many poetry about them. Their color makes our mind colorful.
A sweet little poem about butterfly. I like the starting
will you stray far,
my little butterfly?
Hello Brittany I am sending you a review of your poem, This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. This is a wonderful poem about friendship. A friend always by ones side ones happy days and sorrow days.
They are very encouraging. They are always with us from the end of our life and never turn his back on her when she needs him. They maintain ones relationship over the long period.
In your poem you described it so simply and beautifully.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Newbies Academy Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.
Initial Impression: The flow of your poem flows nicely.
Theme and Creativity: Here your described your feeling so beautifully that kept me reading your poetry.
I like the lines most
But I don't believe that "we" will ever be
The you and me that I hoped to see.
hello Chantelle Quigley-Dimeo I am now reviewing one of your poem. Spring is the queen of all season. After a long winter spring come with bright sunshine. This is the time for rebirth, renew. Everything is so beautiful in that season. After a long month wait when we open our window a fresh air refresh our mind. Spring come to make our world beautiful.Birds creeping, bright flowers in the garden with aromatic air everywhere. I can smell spring In your poem.
Hello da_ddq I am now reviewing one of your poem. The subject of your poem is great. When loveable one died an emotional feeling is ones mind. We express our emotion by tears . Your grandfather is one of the shinning star in sky shinning so brightly. In your poem you express your feeling so simply and beautifully that kept me read your awesome poem. I like this lines most
I looked out the window,
and I saw your face in the stars,
and the tears started flowing.
hello Welcome to WDC. The subject you choose for your poetry is nice. When we sick it seems to us that our voice dyeing, we cant even walk. Self help is the best of all. We can beat this by our mental strength. If you loss your mental strength then it will hard for you to fight with illness. A mental strength can gear up us. our physical health related to mental health. Any body can overcome this by the mental power. In your poetry you describe it so sweetly.
Thank you for sharing with us your poetry. Our life is like a journey by train. We don't know where it will stop. We get life only once so we celebrate our life till death by our good deeds.
Thank you for sharing with us such a nice poetry. The picture of the nature you painted here so beautiful.
Our life is a journey. We don't know where it stop.
The flow of your poetry floating like the sea wave.
Thank you sharing with us such a nice poetry. Our family is our big treasure. Sibling are one of the greatest valued jewel. When we grow older they gradually drifted away. But the memories shining in our heart so brightly. This golden memories of the dearest one can not be forgotten. In your poetry you have painted it so nicely. You described it so simply and beautifully. me too have two sister and I love them. I like these line most.
Your voice it speaks volumes of sweet things, I like to hear
You are my sister, you are my special dear.
Thank you sharing with us such a nice poetry. The picture in your poetry you painted here really amazing. So simply and beautifully you described about a little girl and her world.
thank you for sharing with us such a nice poem. When a dear one goes away we feel something strong inside our mind. In your poetry you painted it so nicely. I like the lines most
I miss you when I eat,
when I sleep you are always there in my dreams.
Keep writing.
Mina.
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This is a wonderful poem about butterfly.
A sweet little butterfly born in the earth only for few days. Poets are wrote so many poetry about them. Their color makes our mind colorful. 
