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#3965774

Review of Spring

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Spring

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March contest entry
#1977883 by Emiliya Wolfe

in your Portfolio.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just disregard it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to hope, every spring is a hope, a new day, a new beginning, a new morning.
There is always a hope in every morning like the grass sprouted in times of spring.

MY FAVORITES:
Title - one of the genres that I liked is nature, so your piece hooked me while roaming around your piece.
Imagery - The words you crafted reminds me of the combination of the images of spring and its principle. I liked how you combined the two.
Rhythm and rhyme - I can't say that this as a rhyming poetry because I didn't seen any pattern, but I liked the created rhythm in every line, somehow it blends with the flow.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t see any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is an inspiring piece.
When we are down, one of the best place we can seek refuge, is nature because this is one of the gifts which God created for us, and we always found Him in here, in His creation.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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#3964734

Review of Where do Angels Live?

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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As your request, here's my review to your nice piece

Where do Angels Live?

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Inspiring Question from my Granddaughter
#1981170 by Moarzjasac

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I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the beauty and uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. { e:smile}

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is tender. Sometimes the simplicity, purity and innocence of things can direct to an indepth meaning and it always certain.
I relate the angels to all who is capable of giving without expecting in return just for the benefit of others.That's what most call it Angel, and its true they were in there, specially to those who are in needs.

MY FAVORITES:
Title - I liked the given title, very curious, its tender, but creates a deeper impact.
Imagery - vivid, it just light as it see, but when it read and we think it so deep and seriously, there are many things behind it.
Rhyme and Rhythm - a rhyming poetry and it blends with the tone.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Not just in heavens above,
Anywhere there's need of love.

This is true, they were exist to those who needs them, that's why they called angel.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.

I just have doubt on the line - "13 lines" you put there in the upper part of your piece, it just distract my preparation and mind setting when I am begin to read, maybe you can put it below after the piece when already ended.
And some spacing, spacing can stimulate the created tone and mood of a piece, the spacing between the line or stanza and the created conversion.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. I liked the created tone which in combination of tenderness and deep and seriousness of the idea on it.

Thank you for sharing your piece and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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#3963065

Review of Rising Stars Shining Brighter (Acrostic)

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Rising Stars Shining Brighter (Acrostic)

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Rising Stars Shining Bright (Acrostic Form)
#1664852 by ~ Santa Sisco ~

while roaming around in your port,and it hooked me so i'm here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is true about stars. In old times, stars used travelers as guide in their journey.
They can be a source of inspiration, because stars are only the one that shines in a dark sky, except their mother moon.
and I relate this to writing or the spark of every crafted works or piece of every writer.
I relate also this to every person with different ability and character that always shine on them.

MY FAVORITES:
Title - the one that enticed me, we always know that rising stars will always shine and bright because they have always their own light that makes them bright, and it intrigues me.
Imagery - I liked words you crafted, vivid and clear creating a friendly tone, they really belong in a writers craft words, very inspiring to know about ideas and information about creating a craft in words.
Rhyme and rhythm - I liked the rhyming pattern you used and delivered it in that way, it blends with the friendly tone.
Form and structure - I admire how you used the form of acrostic, its like you have a guide just like your subject here- stars.

MY FAVORITE LINE :
Imagination and dedication will be your guiding light.

This is indeed the writers inspiration and motivation.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.

And no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well.
Congratulations!!!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is an Inspiring piece.
If times when we were meet some discouragement to our writings, your piece is good to relieve and can be a source of encouragement.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.
Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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#3963056

Review of She Wears A Painted Mask

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Your piece

She Wears A Painted Mask

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A trippy poem about being in love with someone who hides who she really is.
#1914702 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

hooked me while roaming around in your port and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
We always see a person on his/her face.

MY FAVORITES:
Title - the title captivates me, I already have the idea but your piece succeed in pulling me.
Imagery - I read it twice, and I've found a story on it., an emotional but good story, I liked how you mentioned the title on the body of this piece. For me, it makes the piece its breathing part because I am familiarized already on that line as same as the given title.
This is a free verse, and there's a rhythm, you succeed in delivering it.
Form is good and unique, you have your own style, and its good.

MY FAVORITE WORD :
pleading ignorance

I just think this as in the act of exploding but better to hide...?

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.

"Even through"

I think the word through-
And also think the word though.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

This is another great piece of yours.
Sometimes we like to wear a painted mask, specially if a situation really needs specially if this is for the benefit and goodness of others.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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#3958186

Review of Why Do I Hate You?

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Why Do I Hate You?

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A question and an answer.
#1587867 by Kristi

in your Portfolio and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Denying the truth just to forget a feeling., its really hard when our mind is in contrast on what we feel, the two should be the same, but its more really hard to teach our heart.Sometimes heart always have its reasons, and sometimes its true.

MY FAVORITES:
The given title caught my attention while roaming in your piece to search something to review.
It made me curious, like the question mark at the end.
The imagery is good and vivid,through your words you evokes emotion like
holding something that we can't refuse.
I liked how you dabble your rhythm and rhyming on the 2nd and fourth line, it blends with the given tone.
And the format is good also, I liked how you create the dash between stanza, each stanza became like a quotation.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :

I didn’t find any words that can distract its flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a a great piece.The Awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!!!
There are several piece that showed and define a broken heart feelings, and you did well in portraying in this piece.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#3958182

Review of Evening Sky

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Evening Sky

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#1951622 by 💙 Carly: Joan Watson

from your Portfolio and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
You captured the beauty of an evening sky, or in a twilight while turning to dark.

MY FAVORITES:
I liked the given title, its the one that enticed me to read your piece, for me an evening sky is silent and is at rest, reminds me of an enjoyable time of a family from a hard working day.
I liked your imagery, your words create a subtle flow and a soft tone, while the slightly dull clouds begins to turn to dark, while the sun slowly fade its rays and stars begin to spark their light.
A free verse, and it blends with the tone.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract its flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FAVORITE LINES :
cotton candy clouds

fascinating, I really love to touch.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece. A beautiful scene of an evening sky in which one of the natures best created by God to remind us the changing of time in an hour.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. You potrayed it well. And I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#3957489

Review of Death Of A Thousand Cuts

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

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Your piece

Death Of A Thousand Cuts

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Thoughts on love, in the briefest possible form (vers libre)
#1700437 by Ben Garrick

in your Portfolio has a magnetic rays that charm me to see for it, so I’m here giving you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just disregard it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Love is not always been sweet, if we want to taste the sweet of love, we should expect also its twin-Pain.

MY FAVORITES:
The title- is the one that captivates me, and I liked how you relate it as the death of love.
The imagery is fine, every line there is a good reason attached on it, and I also see a story behind it.
The format and structure is fine also is just too simple,
Maybe I am expecting more like breaking of words and lines to be more emotional.

FAVORITE LINE :
Death of a Thousand Cuts

What's really in hurt..?
The death or the thousand cuts

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't see any words that can distract the flow.
and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece.
For me its better to been dead, than always facing the pain of the thousand cuts.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep

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#3957483

Review of New School

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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New School

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Another unfinished story.
#1971947 by Gabriel Wolfbane Phoenix

in your Portfolio and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and disregard it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is a cute story, I think about a romance of a girl vampire and a boy vampire, unique, having another version of the Twilight saga.

MY FAVORITES:

The title is the hooker of a piece, it is the first thing that an author will see, I thought your piece is just a typical teenage story about school and classes as the title says, I didn't expected that you relate it to the world of vampire. I also created a short story in our own language about some funny romance of Mr. Vampire and a white lady, It just reminds me while reading your story.

Imagery is good, clear for me by crafting those words you used.
The flow is good also, it evokes emotion like suspense but it doesn't scared me.
The only thing I see is a blooming romance between the two.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
Just some misspelled word, I have also that in my writings,

I've moved from one school to other as my identity..
I've moved from one school to another as my identity..

Her eyes flutter open, reveling large, beautiful, blue eyes.
Her eyes flutter open, revealing large, beautiful, blue eyes.

Scratches as the young mans face.
Scratches as the young man's face.

The bat only manged to deliver one large blow..
The bat only managed to deliver one large blow..

She pulls a white handkerchief out out of her..

She pulls a white handkerchief out of her..

Donovan says he he starts to walk down
Donovan says he starts to walk down

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
I liked how you narrate it, and I am waiting to the next episode.
You portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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#3957443

Review of Falling - 1-8-08

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Falling - 1-8-08

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It starts down deep with a flutter. The crimson rises to your cheeks. The urge to speak...
#1974505 by CJHanna84

in your Portfolio captivates me and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is about falling again into love, its hard to be fallen so deep, the more its deep, the deeper its hurt.

MY FAVORITES:

The given title is the first thing that entice me to read your piece, I've been curious what is that falling that you mean, and I perceived that it was falling on the negative side..?
I think about fallen too.
The imagery is vivid, you used words that paint the emotion, or what a person felt when it is in falling again.
This is a rhyming poetry and I liked how you dabble your words into the rhyming.
Even if emotional, it makes it in the lighter shade because you tend to be in rhyming.

FAVORITE LINE:
How to remember when forgetting feels so good.

I just like it.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t see any words that can distract the flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece.
We have different definition about falling, and yours is one of the truest things about really in falling. You portrayed and described it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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#3956719

Review of Flying

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Flying

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I am flying
#1966382 by Sawyer

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I can relate this to our guardian, our hero, the one who always take care
of us,loving us, our inspiration, the one who lift us and beneath our wings in reaching our dreams and goals, to strive for our success.

MY FAVORITES:
I liked the given title, the one that hook me while roaming in your port.

I liked flying, like birds, makes me think to be light and free.
The imagery is good,vivid, your crafted words reminds me of a bird who is capable to do things and can depend also.
This is not a rhyming poetry, and I liked how you express it in the free verse,the rhythm is good, it blends with the verse.
I liked also how you form it, it shaped like a bird, that spreading its wings.

MY FAVORITE LINES :
Metal wings brisk and cold
Wings that never close
Of a bird that never sleeps

Great imagery reminds me of a character of the one we can hang on.

{e :questionP} MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t see any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a nice piece, you portrayed here a firm hand that we can rely and depend, thats how I see to all those who surrounded and loved us.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.
Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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#3956717

Review of Yin and Yang

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Yin and Yang

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Love from two perspectives - boy and girl
#1976013 by Anistasya

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A story in a poem. Wow!, that talks about relationship, a beautiful love story behind it.
Love in a relationship is not always been sweet, there is always the other shade on it-pain, because of our differences sometimes we often disappointed if it doesn't meet our expectation .

MY FAVORITES:
I liked the given title, the one that pulled me to see and taste your piece, makes me intrigue, it reminds me about the beliefs of Chinese. The imagery is good, vivid. Seeing a two lovers, who are different in each other and has its own character, but love blends them, and they ride the roller coaster of love. This is a free verse, concrete, every line have its own idea. The format is good, just using short or one word, but, I've found it firm.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t see any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a nice piece. You showed and expressed two different perspective about how we think and feel about love and relationships, but it truly blend with our love faith and understanding. Truly love conquers all.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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#3952765

Review of With These Loving Hands

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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With These Loving Hands

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A spiritual message/ prayer of service
#1435623 by C.E. Thieroff

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MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is a beautiful prayer, asking blessing and guidance from our Lord.
It can enlighten one's spirit, because there is a faith that attached on it.

MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted this piece of yours,words are really light and can uplift a burden heart, because it is full of encouragement and sincerity.
I feel also a sympathy for others,with drops of enthusiasm and love.
This is a free verse and I liked how its form, they blend together.

MY FAVORITE LINE :
with these loving hands

All parts in us was created by God, so indeed we must use this to glorify His name.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.

I just wonder, why you don't use punctuation on the end of every line.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
An inspirational piece, Prayer is always been encouraging and can uplift one's spirit, specially if prayers comes from the heart. I see that in your piece.You showed and portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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#3952050

Review of She Walks with Angels

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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She Walks with Angels

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the gentle letting go of a dying child
#1779229 by Redtowrite

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MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is an expression of love of parents to their child.

MY FAVORITES:
The emotion is tender and gentle, and I liked how you crafted it. Just like
a soft breeze of wind that gently let my eyes to drops its tear, and chill my skin.
Somehow, its like a lullaby that slowly flew its tune and slowly fade through the night.

MY FAVORITE LINE :
sprinkling sunshine on a harsh winter day.

children is always been the joy of every parents.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. The sadness in this piece is truly sincere and emotional, but you let and showed it in a lighter tune.You portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

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#3952049

Review of A Precious Stone - A Story In 21 Pieces

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: ASR

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A Precious Stone - A Story In 21 Pieces

(ASR)
This is a 21 part story written as little poems.
#1830297 by ChuChuRocker

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MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I like to read biography, I can find the uniqueness of life here, we have different journey in life. God gave us what we have now about life, because He knows that we can endure it and we can succeed on it. He create us and He knows our strength and weaknesses,He always give a challenge that we can be succeed and gain from it.

MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted this story into poetry.
You succeed in showing it within your words.
Sometimes I am not a fan of a poetry that is too long, but you hold me in this piece of yours until I didn't notice that it is already its end. Beautiful.
The words you used evokes emotion and sympathy,
And I liked how you create it in the rhyming form.
You're brave.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.

But just because this is a rhyming poetry I just noticed that there are two lines that were not rhyming on part XI the first two lines there.
Maybe you want to work on it.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. Another face of life, and life is really not boring. Problems, trials are challenges that God let us to have because He know at the end we can succeed all this things.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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#3952046

Review of The Fiber Of A Good Man

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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The Fiber Of A Good Man

(E)
Free form poetry about what makes a good man a good man
#1482470 by C.E. Thieroff

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MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This piece talks about philosophy, or the integrity of a man. Every one of us have its own opinion and character, but this piece already consist all the things that I what to know what really creates or the personality of a good man must have.

MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted this piece, I really liked that you stated here all the characters of a good man.The form is good also, it blends with the tone. Interesting.

MY FAVORITE LINES :
what makes up the fiber of a good man?
It is the many strands of life wound together
Into the rope that has become his life.

Trials, pains, sufferings sometimes we think as torment, but this brings us challenge,
Babies would not know the taste of solid foods if only milk is the only food that we can give to them.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.

and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

This is really a great piece. God let us to suffer all this things as a part of our life, to mold us to be a better person.That is always consist of a good man, he can face every challenges and always see the beauty on it.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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#3947444

Review of I am an Echo

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

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I am an Echo

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Will my cry be heard, or will silence fall?
#1970592 by Angels in my Ear

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this piece into a shadow, or a copy of the original, want to be seen, want to be distinguish, its real character or personality but can't, because an echo is just only borrowing its power to its original.

MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted it., the words you used is soft and subtle.
I liked also its flow, it is continuously flowing, I didn't noticed that I already reach its end.
I liked also the title, it makes me think so deep, and lead me to create a character of an echo you are showing here.
I liked also when you repeat that line in the last part of every stanza.
I think this is the concluding emotion of the echo and already accepted its role.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any words that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

FAVORITE LINE :
echo of thunder and light.

So many things that comes to my mind while thinking this like
The reflection of yesterday,
Second part,
substitute.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. You succeed in showing and relating the character of an echo to real life situations. That a piece of echo must have also a role that should be recognize, because the echo always supports its original.You portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
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#3945714

Review of For You

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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For You

(E)
About giving everything you have to be with someone who doesn't even know you exist.
#1968118 by CarpeNoctem

captivated me in your Portfolio and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

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You can chew and discard them, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is a one sided love affair. Loving someone, without expecting in return is really true and consider as a great love, like how our Lord Jesus Christ sacrificed just to redeem us.
But in a relationship this is not healthy, this is not how God planned for us, He always want us to be happy. He have chosen one that really fit and best for us.

MY FAVORITES:
I liked how the emotions was expressed here, I really feel the sincerity in every words.
I also liked the words used it is light and easy to grasp but full of emotions.
I liked also the rhythm, it creates a beat, that blends in the rhyming.Nice.

FAVORITE LINES :
Because the louder I get, the less you hear.

Sometimes, the absence of one make the other realized its importance.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I just have doubt on the given title, it seems so simple to me.
Title is the first thing that allures a reader.
The one that hooked me in your piece is your brief description. Very intriguing.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You poured your emotions here, and I really feel. You portrayed it well. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
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#3945711

Review of For You

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

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on your Portfolio has a magnetic rays that charm me to see for it so I’m here giving you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Practicality is one of the great issue to survive in today's world. They said if you are not practical you can't have an easy and somehow a good life, that is one of my father's belief and taught to me about the deep meaning of life. His right, but for me as I begin and having my journey to know more about life, I begin to believe that one must have the drops of creativity because it is the heart or the feeling of life.
I can relate this piece of yours into practicality that every time we do something there is the equivalent or a token of exchange of it, because this is maybe how we can be worth, and it is our needs. We work, we should be paid, to live, but somehow in the Bible said that words can sustain life also.

MY FAVORITES:

I liked how this writing flow. Truly, there is something that makes it interesting,
As I go along with, I begin to create a character into my mind, a playful but serious personality.
That has its own disposition in life on what he/she really believed.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :

Just some sort of mis looked, I also have this mistakes in my writings.

4th paragraph - I not only tripled our following,
you might mean : I not only tripled our followers..

4th paragraph - but I kept them all entertained and maintained a steady audience.

4th paragraph - but, I kept them all entertained and maintained as a steady audience.

The use of small letter i , I just wonder why you don't capitalize it..?

6th paragraph - I just hate you so so much.
The word 'so, was repeated in there.
11th paragraph - Thats nice.
That's nice.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. You did well in holding your readers attention, somehow to know you in this piece of yours. And it gives an idea to your readers about character and personality uniqueness. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

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#3943662

Review of Santa Darling

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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Santa Darling

(E)
Importance of someone's presence
#1968029 by ~Minja~

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MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
It’s a cute short poem about the recent holiday, so light and interesting, Santa Claus is one of my favorite character also when Christmas time arrive. I'd never outgrown what most others believed him that he always have plenty of gifts to give and share, and its so nice that you have here in your poem his character.I can relate this also to the real meaning of gift.

MY FAVORITES:

I like words you used, they are just simple and easy to grasp, they made me smile and a little bit curious about its story.
I like also the given title, it is the one that hooked me to read it.

MY FAVORITE LINE :
I know if I take diamonds then important thing I loose.

Truly, there is always much important than diamonds.Nice.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.

I just have doubt on the second line, because it doesn't rhyme on the first line.
It distract the flow.
For me its better when they rhyme.
How about using "your do" instead of "you were".
or you may have much better idea.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece.This is just only a short piece, but you nicely portrayed here that our joy and happiness can not be exchange to any material things.Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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#3943628

Review of Sword poem

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Sword poem

(E)
My first try at a shape poem. The poem is sword shaped.
#1874234 by Princess Zelda

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A character or the feeling of a real hero/heroine, that have the determination to win, whatever it takes.
It is not how many times we stumble or fall that counts in every victory, but the moment that we stand and determine to face the challenge.

MY FAVORITES:

I like this shape poem of yours, its not only the sword form that links to the theme, but most
specially the inside, the tone, the flow. Very inspiring.
Words are easy to grasp and it doesn’t distract the flow.
It just hold the flow until its peak. Nice

The given Award deserves well. Congratulations!!!

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect.

And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece. You crafted well your sword poem, and you succeed in letting your readers feel and see what can be the inspirational messages that always hides in a simple sword. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

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#3942855

Review of Number Ten

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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Number Ten

(E)
Chickens, hungry Rooster
#1967567 by Lynda Miller

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MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A simple piece that talks about the celebration in welcoming the New Year.
How every family have their own preparation to capture the moment of a coming Year.

MY FAVORITES:
I liked its tone, light and comical.
I liked also your inspiration, using chickens as one of the menu to celebrate and welcoming New Years.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
Dinner was at six P.M.
You might mean
Dinner’s ready at six P.M.
Or
Dinner will be at six P.M.

Knowing well, on chickens fate.
You might mean
Knowing well, on chicken’s fate

I will take me a hen
You might mean
I will take a hen

And you will be in chicken heaven.
You might mean
And you will be in chicken’s heaven.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

This can be a great piece, there are some things that needs to be polish, to spark its real beauty.
This is my rate just for now, and I’d be willing to change and re-review it, just email me after.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 3.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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#3935862

Review of you see

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

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you see

(E)
reflection
#1963115 by Gemma Wiseman

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You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believe that everyone knows their best.

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I think this is a moment or a past or a yesterday that was treasured and cherished and it sized up its status today.

MY FAVORITES:
I like its simplicity of words and forms, it is in depth.
The flow is good, it creates an impact. I like the rhythm and the tone, somehow it is sentimentalist.
It reminds me of a summer afternoon with the radiant rays of the sun coming from a window, and leaves were scattered from trees. Nice

FAVORITE LINES :
The slice of cake was sitting there..

Nice personification, I feel its stillness.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.

I just wonder why you don’t capitalized the letter even just only the title.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. Words you used are just short but you captured well the essence of the past or yesterdays. You crafted and showed in just only a few words. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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#3933513

Review of The Whole You Left

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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The Whole You Left

(E)
Six months after my dad died . . . .
#1960025 by Dan Sturn

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MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is an inspirational piece, stating the love of a Father. We can’t measure the love of every father, most of it are priceless and immeasurable like our Father above.

MY FAVORITES:
I like the given title, I think about the whole pertains to be his son. The whole for me pertains to be the moments that was shared and the wisdom in which every father always shared. Good title.
I like also every words used it flows fluently without any distraction of the tone or emotions that evokes.
This is a rhyming poetry – my impression about rhyming is having a playful or a happy tone, and can only distract the sentiment of a piece.
But you relate well here, using rhyming can be portrayed and well good also in a slow and emotional tone. Well done.

FAVORITE LINES :
to save our regrets for the past, and the dead.
But for the living, give them love and thus bread,

In other words It is important today than yesterday..?

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You crafted and showed here about the love of your father and the wisdom he had shared. You portrayed it very well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5.

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#3931753

Review of Wise Bee.

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

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Wise Bee.

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The wise bee speaks.
#1964824 by Mash

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MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is cute, The bee is really wise, we always found sound everywhere, except only when we are in our sleep. But even if we are in our sleep. We still found sound. -

MY FAVORITES:
I like how you crafted.
It is like I am reading a story. It flows and goes fluently until it reach the end. And I like the final part, it creates an impact.
You captured a friendly imagery. Vivid. Nice.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect.

I just wonder if this is a rhyming poetry,
because some are in rhyming, some are not.
I suggest that you stick in the rhyming form
The tone is some kind of playful and friendly,
It will combine a rhyming pattern.

MY FAVORITE WORD :
Wise Bee

The one that very appealing to me, and made me intrigue.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
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Again, thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine Sig.

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Review of Run

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour LOT!!,

Congratulations !!! for being one of the Member's Showcase on the "Newbies Academy Showcase Back SOON!" this month of December.

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name:Samberine Everose

I am captivated by your piece

Run

(E)
55 Word contest entry (Won 1st Place)
#1958228 by LOT

MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Nice short story in 55 words count, you captured well the scene and the feeling while we are waiting the decision of our work. And it tells also about Expectation.

MY FAVORITES:

I like words you used, you just only used few words but you successfully portrayed it well.
I like also the given title, the one that hooked me to read it.
The feeling other than escaping the truth.

The given Award deserves well. Congratulations!!!

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece. You crafted well in just only in few words but you showed completely to your reader the feeling and well imagery, in times when we are afraid to face the truth because of our doubts. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

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