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Samberine Everose

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#3913314

Review of Worm Meets Apple

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Josh S.

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Opinion & Insight

This piece really funny, a nice piece, different of all the poems I had read. Like a fable, simple scene but in depths its meaning.

My Favorites

I liked how you crafted your words here, this is best for everybody not only for children.
I liked the inspiration you chose here, using simple things but filled with meanings.
I liked also the interaction of the two, their characters are both arrogant but they just simply hiding and playing.

My Favorite lines

Apple, why are you so green?”
“Because worm, you look awful lean.” ,

Warm approach by the worm to the apple, It reminds me of a guy who is playfully courting…

My Doubts and Suggestions

I didn’t find any grammatical error here.
Just only an exclamation point after the word Alas which expressed a deep feeling.

My Final thought :

This is a great piece, It gives warm in an inspired manner to the reader, Sometimes we are to choosy, and our characters always prevailing that we forget to think, but we never know that the one doesn’t fit, is the one that best for us.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

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#3912545

Review of Some Caring for Karen

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Detective Joey C

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Opinion & Insight

This piece talks about friendship, describing a friend who has been so special and the things he/she made us felt which made us to be special in his/her eyes. A real definition of friendship.

My Favorites

I liked how you inscribed your words in the first line, it is the answer on the last line.
Every line has a definition of what really friendship means.
Intimate and something special.

My Favorite lines

Then came a soft song, a whisper to the fear in me and She calls out my best, puts my protest at rest. ,

That was a really a best friend can do, like a soft song that gently taken care our fear,
and support as well.

My Doubts and Suggestions

I didn’t find any grammatical error here.

I just have doubts on the given title
for using the word “some” to described your caring for Karen
Why “some”, I just relate and understand it as a bit or not a certain feeling or a fully caring.
But the notes you scribbled is filled with certain and care.

My Final thought :

This is a great piece, You truly described and portrayed what friendship means to you, the trust, supports, comfortable,light and contentment of having our best friend. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3912537

Review of A Wish

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Farnaz Delgosha

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Opinion & Insight :
If we have doubts to enter a relationship, better not to embrace it, because we will truly have regrets and ended asking this lines you scribbled. But love they said, set him free, let the time arrange for it, if he’ll come back then he is your destiny, if he’ll not, then God have chosen a better one waiting just for you in the right time.

What can I say about the :

Title:
The given title doesn’t new to me, Simple, I can relate on it, welcoming me to know more about this piece, specially the brief description, it is the one also caught me to read.

Rhyme & Rhythm:
This is a free verse, there is no rhyming I see, but it creates its own rhythm. There’s a soft and slow beat within every word maybe the punctuation marks that you used at the end of every line, it goes with the flow. I liked it.

Tone/Mood:
You truly showed the feeling of a someone who are still expecting and realizing a love she/he let it flew and gone and still hoping in return. Pain was already fade here.

Format/Flow:
The flow is something lyrical, and there’s a sad soft music within the words, that gives a deep and emotional impact also.

Imagery:
Words used was light but in depth, and creates a vivid imagery to the reader, it can captured it easily, easy to reach but it make sense. I can see that every line creates a memory.

What ‘s the most I liked:
I liked how you penned your words here, passionately, intense.
And within the line it creates a moment on it.
I liked also the format you used, using lines that are full of questions.
Short but if the reader reach on it there are many answer will be play on the mind of the reader.

Doubts and Suggestions :
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

I just have doubts on lines
Do you ever wish for how it was?
See him every day, love him forever?

I just see that the first line doesn’t related to the next line
Maybe you can re arrange it, or put something like on instead of for.

and instead of ever, you can also use the word still.
specially if that feeling is still there.

Favorite Line :
Want to change the past to be with him?

We can’t change our past but we can change our future by the decisions we make now.

Final thought :

This is a great piece, Questions are sometimes simple but creates a meaning full answers.
You poured your emotions here through doubts and questions and you portrayed it very well. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3910956

Review of Obscure Demur

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Dan Sturn

I am enjoying visiting your port, and chose this piece of yours to offer a review and comment.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Opinion & Insight :

A different piece, somewhat a rhythm of music combined on it. Which also explained we find the beauty of poetry within the rhythm of Music. Poetry is like music it always warmth and touches the heart, we can also feel the artist’s expressions and bits of his/her personality’s uniqueness on it.

What can I say about the :

Title:
In depth, different, and it hooked my attention.

Rhyme & Rhythm:
Poetic- it creates its own rhyme and rhythm specially when it read. Beautiful. Clever

Tone/Mood:
It reminds me of an old English Poem or classic music, full of colors, created passionately.

Format/Flow:
The flow is something good, subtle, and powerful, every line has its own depth in meaning.

Imagery:
Every words are important in every line creates a vivid imagery, although it is in depth but the reader can reach it.

What‘s the most I liked:

I liked how you creatively penned your words here,especially the lyrical form on the last part.
And the uses of nature which you that you relate it in poetry.

Doubts and Suggestions :

I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect.

I just only have a hard pronouncing or reading the line
“I know you think this poem obscure”
If you just want to trans place the poem and obscure
like: I know you think its obscured poem
for an easily and smoothly read.

Favorite Line :

Music rhythm enters gently.

Like the written line here, it described really the music how it was heard.

Final thought :

This is a great piece. Creatively penned in your own and unique formed of words. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3910613

Review of Safe To Shore

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Keaton Foster

I am enjoying visiting your port, and chose this piece of yours to offer you a review and comment.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Opinion & Insight :
This piece talks about our journey in life and our trust in God allowing Him in charge on it, Uncertainty is always a part of life but we were always been safe to shore, if we have a light that guide us in our path.

What can I say about the :

Title:
The one that hooked me to see, intrigue brief description about life’s journey

Rhyme & Rhythm:
A free verse kind, no rhyme but among the words in creates its own rhythm.

Tone/Mood:
I imagined a dark & lonely journey but there’s a determination I see, while seeing The Light that guides.

Format/Flow:
The flow is something short, simple. But powerful, every line has its own depth in meaning.

Imagery:
Every words are important in every line creates a vivid imagery, although it is in depth but the reader can reach it.

What‘s the most I liked:
I liked how you weaved your words, you have your own technique, and different, it was unique.
Short words in every line but intense, and if I glance again I can see it’s brilliant.

Doubts and Suggestions :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect.

I just don’t get this stanza:
Eventually is the wind
Upon my sail it pushes
I know that I will make it.

The word ‘is’ there, makes the idea of the stanza questioning or still in doubt if the wind really push the sail. If “is” will eliminate there, it makes the line much certainty to believe.

The lines:
The truest God of chance
Brought down from the clouds
Upon my shoulder he sits

The word “God” there, it contradict the word “he” that you used.
We often capitalized the first letter when we addressing to Him.

Favorite Line :
”Safe to shore”

Truly, in times of trouble, if we have trust in God, we are always safe to shore.

Final thought :

This is a great piece. Crafted in your own and unique formed of words. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3907420

Review of Nothing and Something and Everything

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Tayla

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comments on this nice stuff of yours.
I am not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Insight:
This piece talks about everything that we have, but can’t appreciate the beauty on it. Contentment.
The difference between nothing, something and everything.

Things that impressed me:
The first thing that hooked me to read this piece is the given title,then second is the created format.

What I liked :
I liked how you scribbled your words here.In depth
I liked also the created flow, smooth, and subtle, it creates its own music.
I liked also the format. The inspiration is intriguing.
This is a free verse type, I liked the mood that creates on it.

Tone/Mood:
Intriguing, soft, dramatic.

Doubts and Suggestions :
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Stanza :

Born from backsliding into the depths

I am just intrigue in this line, truly in depth but I liked.

Overall Impression :

This is a nice piece, The words that you weaved are emotional expressions and thoughts of yours about world we live in. You portrayed it very well. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3907417

Review of A New Divide

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Keaton Foster

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comments on this nice stuff of yours.
I am not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Opinions & Insights :
This piece is an emotional expression of a relationship that was parted, or an emotional expressions of a heart's broken.

What can I say about the :

Title:
The given title caught me to read it, something new to me, describing a broken relationship, made me curious and I found it interesting.

Rhyme & Rhythm:
This is a free verse but it creates its own rhyming and rhythm while reading- there's a beat in every word and I liked it, it goes with the flow.

Tone/Mood:
I really felt the feeling of a broken heart here, it was tremendously pain.

Format/Flow:
This is the one that really impressed me, the format is unique, and the flow, you hold the reader’s curiosity and feeling to continue and to know more until the end of this piece. It gives a deep and emotional impact also.

Imagery:
Although it is in depth, but the reader can captured it what the poet wants to portrayed, Vivid.

What ‘s the most I liked:
I liked how you emphasized the title in the body of this piece, it makes the flow paused for a while.
I liked how you create your words here and bind, it doesn’t seem to be vulgar. It is in depth.

Doubts and Suggestions :
I don’t see any grammatical error here.
I just have doubts to this line:
Continually plays back in my head
The word “plays back” - something amateur to me and it breaks the beauty and smoothly of the poems flow- maybe you can replace or change this to something much emotional or in depth word.

Favorite Line :
Of both space a time

Space in a time. This one really described the title, really in depth and nice.

Final thought :

This is a great piece,. Sometimes the memories/moment makes the pain in one’s heart. You poured your emotions here endlessly and you portrayed it very well.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3907409

Review of Where Words come to Life

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Redtowrite

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comments on this nice stuff of yours.
I am not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Opinions & Insights :
This piece talks about the wonderful of writing and reading, and the feeling of being a writer and a reader. The writer is the creator of every written stuffs. He/She can have the ability to conveyed the reader to any place any time or any character.

What can I say about the :

Title:
The given title hooked me to read it, made me curious and I found it interesting.

Rhyme & Rhythm:
This is a free verse but it has its own rhyming, and the rhythm is good.

Tone/Mood: Adventurous, I feel like a child who expecting more and more while reading it until the end of this piece.

Format/Flow: subtle, every images that created, the writer give its own important.

Imagery:
Wonderful imagery. Vivid. It made me feel like a child, having my adventure through the wonders of my reading.

What ‘s the most I liked:
I liked truly your inspiration you used here, it really creates wonderful and amazing colors with the magical touched.

Doubts and Suggestions :
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Stanza :

Books untouched by humans
open with care, to be read first by you,
imagine how rich you would be.

Really books are treasure, we have our own imagination and we can travel in our imaginations by the help of writers who bind words creatively.

Final thought :

This is a great piece, Writing like reading takes us to wonderful places , create a wonderful world.
You portrayed it very well. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3905490

Review of Autumn whispers Amour

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Redtowrite

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comments on this nice stuff of yours.
I am not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Insight:
This piece talks about the coming of autumn the colors, the feeling, and the experience when that season's comes.

Things that impressed me:
The given title intrigued me to read it, It hooked me to know what’s that spell or love potion in every season. And I’ve found out that it one is the atmosphere that can caused an intimate magical secret of love’s eternal.

What I liked :
I liked how you penned your words here. Colorful like the shades of autumn.
I liked also the flow, it creates a vivid imagery to the reader.

Tone/Mood:
Sentimental, sprinkled with a magical touch, the sweet of love and romance.

Doubts and Suggestions :
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Stanza :

Autumn is majestic trees,
dressed in dancing leaves;
painted in crimson, peels of oranges,
pure essence of gold.

Beautiful imagery, I liked the words you used here.

Overall Impression :

This is a great piece, The words that you weaved, caused a colorful imagery like the season of autumn. You portrayed it very well. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3904801

Review of Blade

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Dan Sturn

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comments on this nice stuff of yours.
I am not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Insight:
This piece talks about a reflection of one’s self, a character or a personality, like the onion which links in our spiritual aspects.

Things that impressed me:
Honestly, first thing that hooked me when I am looking for something to review is the given title, it intrigues me to find what is that given title hidden on this piece. Second is the created pattern or the form specially when I do the instruction on the brief description it enticed me to read it. It formed like a knife; Blade.
Good job.

What I liked :
I liked how you scribbled passionately your words here. Intense and demanding.
I liked how it flow, subtle- creates a vivid imagery to the reader.
I liked the repetition of words here, truly unique it made an effect like an echo, made this piece more appealing and dramatic. Very clever- creative.
I liked how you described and relate this to an onion

Tone/Mood:
Sentimental, mystery, intriguing, somehow I feel the pain when cutting every piece/layer.
like the onion when peeling every layer on it, truly it causes pain to the eye.
It reminds me also how a heart was ripped and broken when it caused pain.

Doubts and Suggestions :
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Stanza :

But I learn this repulsive
new fragrance will bring
nothing more than
more tears, more tears.

Sometimes, words that is food to our spirit, truly pierce our earthly or wordy characters, but it can light us and lift us to eternal life.

Overall Impression :

This is a great piece, or I described it as a fantastic work, Your created an imagery here used in a simple thought but it reflects a very unique idea. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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#3904486

Review of The Residents

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Radio Shea

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review and comments on this nice stuff of yours.
I am not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

My Insight:
This piece talks about memories, a room full of moments or thoughts of those who had been lost.

First impression:
The given title hooked me, it reminds me of a movie once I had been seen which left me intrigue and curious at the end, but I found out, it was all about memories and thoughts that resides in us. Great portrayed.

What I liked :
I liked how you draw your words here. Simple but intense.
I liked how it flow made and creates a vivid imagery to the reader. Dramatic.
This is a free verse, and it flows softly and subtle.

Tone/Mood:
Sentimental, I feel the loneliness, mystery and intriguing.
It reminds me of a place, which I wanted to know more about its history.

Doubts and Suggestions :
Maybe the format, it’s good but it’s just simple, you can try another, to make it something more appealing specially that blends with the emotion.

Favorite Stanza :

We are but fleeting thoughts.

I see the definition of a moment here.
Moment is just only once, so we should try to make it best to have a good memories on it.

Overall Impression :

This is a great piece. You painted here your sentiments, your emotions of longing and missing. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#3901956

Review of Thinking of You

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Tazzypoo

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about on how we feel and how we perceived the beauty of others inscribed in our own words, it features or how we look on how they are created also as unique in their own.

The things I got Impressed:
I got caught up by the given title, a kind of an amateur words, but makes the reader think some sweet memories and a sentimental kind.

What I liked:
I liked how your words used here. Every stanza has its own sense and descriptive image which the readers for see the subject. A palette composed of different colors or traits painted by the echoes from your heart. Beautiful, and Certainly.
I liked also the use of abbreviated words, makes the poem a modern kind.

Tone/Mood:
Some kind of sentimental.
I could feel the love that was kept in every stanza.

Some Doubts:
I don’t see any grammatical error here.
But I wonder if you intended not to use punctuation marks at the end of every line

Suggestions (if you just like):
I suggest that you can put some comma or period to make the flow more smoothly to read and more dramatic its appeal.

Favorite Lines :

Too soon, young man, U decided it was time to go
Last thoughts, last moments, we would never know.

Certainly, we never know our reaping time

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. It was beautifully written painted with colorful hues. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#3899261

Review of The mirror image.

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi inkwell

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about our reflection, our personality our character, that we are the one who know and always see.

The things I got Impressed:
I got caught up by the given title, It makes me think what is that image that we see in the mirror. And I found out that mirror are the only reflection of our self. But sometimes mirror are like others also where in it depends on how they see us, because mirror have different reflection too in what they see on us.

What I liked:
I liked how you used your words here, simple and in depth.
I see that every stanza has its own sense and meaning, describing a character and the way how others perceived us and our reflection in the mirror.
You really portrayed well and described your subject here which is full of imagery.

Tone/Mood:
Mystery, intriguing and interesting to read.

Some Doubts:
scrutinise- scrutinize

Favorite Lines :

Pretending that we're not the same,
but you will cross the line.
. ., .

They said that truth shall always prevail.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. Short but in depth. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

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#3898905

Review of Colors

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi AJG,

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about the different shades of colors and their meanings using your own words and views.

The things I got Impressed:
I got caught up by the given title, and the given brief description, and how you defined the colors. It is indeed that colors have also its own personality and character like humans.

What I liked:
I liked your inspiration here, and how you portrayed one by one the different colors.
I liked how your words used, it’s simple and light.
Every stanza has its own sense and meaning. It can really relate to human’s personality I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.

Tone/Mood:
Interesting and intriguing. It reminds me looking of a piece of palette having the different colors you’ve stated, and intrigue and curious what would be there like and shades upon using them.

Some Doubts:
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Suggestions (if you just like):
If you just like to add some more colors defined by your own words,
like orange, purple, red and white and others.

Favorite Stanza:

Pink is the feeling of happiness.
The feeling we all yearn to find.
The color of a small, delicate flower
though trampled and fragile
finds a way to stand proud.
. ., .

This color is where I stand for and one of my favorites.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. Relating colors to different personalities.It is indeed that every thought has its own uniqueness. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your creatively weep.

samberine

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#3897007

Review of No One Told Me it was a Formal Occasion

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi GK,

Happy WDC Days !!!

I came across again to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about friendship. Whether we are in our ups and down our best friend is always the one who understand and loved us. It’s very fascinating and interesting that you used pets to symbolized our friends here.

The things I am Impressed:
I got caught up by the given title. Nice and in depth. It is indeed that every thought and feelings has its own uniqueness.

What I liked:
I liked how you described and portrayed here your subject.
Every line make its own sense and I liked the idea that comes along with it, it was in depth.
I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.

Tone/Mood:
Interesting, and fascinating, and a comical.

Some Doubts:
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Lines:

. How empty would my heart be now?
Without you to fill the void. .

These two lines described the importance of its friendship.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

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#3897003

Review of Last Breath ‘til Death

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi again Jack P. Tollers ,

Happy WDC Days !!!

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece is an emotional expression of love or an experienced of love,I think your inspiration here is the same on your poem; Lily.
Really, losing someone is hard to imagine and it caused terrible pain, but always remember that we can’t create a rainbow if we don’t add some rain.

The things I am impressed:
I got caught up by the given title, it is like the promise in a wedding, something sweet,and also the brief description about this piece. It is indeed that every thought has its own uniqueness.
I liked to read thoughts on feelings and description written in words because everyone has its own insight and definition.

What I liked:
This is a kind of a free verse. I liked how your words used it was in depth and certainly.
Every line has its own sense and I liked the memories included. I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.

Tone/Mood:
It evokes emotion like pain, longing, sorrow.

Some Doubts:
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Stanza:

Your heart has stopped beating
You will draw no more breath,
My heart beats on,
But it longs for death. ., .

I liked how you paint your words and expressed your emotions here.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. Your imagery words are truly creative, your pen was really in weep with words which comes from the heart. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

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#3896567

Review of For Lily

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Jack P. Tollers ,

Happy WDC Days !!!

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece is an act of love; remembering and reminiscing the moment and the love that we felt for that someone we loved, that was lost.

First Impression:
I got caught up by the given title, it makes me curious, and intrigue, and also the brief description about this piece. It is indeed that every thought has its own uniqueness.
I liked to read thoughts on feelings and description written in words because everyone has its own insight and definition.

What I liked:
This is a kind of a free verse. I liked how your words used and create it was in depth and certainly.
Every line has its own sense,. I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.

Tone/Mood:
It evokes emotion like pain, longing, sorrow.

Some Doubts:
I would suggest some spacing so that there will be a space or gap in which the eyes can rest.

Favorite Stanza:

Soon I shall follow,
You to the grave,
My life you ended,
But my heart you saved., .

This was really in depth, but I liked how you expressed your emotions here.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. Your imagery words are truly creative, your pen was really in weep with words comes from the heart. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine
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#3896555

Review of Walking Chocolate my dog

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi dog walker,

Happy WDC Days !!!

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about, an activity, a fun walk with our friend. Our pets are considered as a friend,a companion, they always been there even in our ups and down, to cheer us. They don’t have the capacity or the ability to talk or share what are their thoughts as a solution but by their action, we also know that they are there for us.

The things I am impressed :
I got caught up by the given title, it makes me curious, and intrigue, and also the brief description about this piece. Fascinating. And the inspiration you used here about pets. Most people have pets and this is one who captured me.

What I liked:

I liked words used simple and light.
I liked how it flow, creating a vivid imagery.
I liked also the inspiration you used here. Interesting

Tone/Mood:
Interesting, fun, and intriguing.

Some Doubts:
The given title: Walking chocolate my dog
You might mean “Walking chocolate” is my dog.

Thru the meadow and accost the field
Thru the meadow and to accost the field,

And over quiet streets we go!
A silent street we go!

On we go in wind rain or snow
We would even go, windy, rainy or falling snow,

Stopping at each third tree to stop and pee
Stopping at the third tree to rest and pee,

If you’re two feet tall he won’t bark at you!
If you’re two feet tall he would not bark you!

I carry plastic bags for number 2
I carry those plastic bags for number 2,

Squirrels are to chase up a tree
To chase up a squirrel up a tree,

Favorite Word:

Walking chocolate
, .

I liked how you described your dog here, its means he is your favorite, and maybe looks like delicious and sweet.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. There are just some things that need refinement to shine and to spark its real beauty.
I rate it 3.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine
"The Poet's Place "

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#3896546

Review of The Moonlight Path

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Caitie,

Happy WDC Days !!!

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about a dream, a dream that we are pursuing. If one is determine in his/her dream and choose the path that link to that dream then he/she will be in his/her way to the right future.

The things I am impressed :
I got caught up by the given title, it makes me curious, and intrigue, and also the brief description about this piece. It is indeed that every thought has its own uniqueness.
I liked to read thoughts about feelings and description written in words because everyone has its own insight and definition.

What I liked:

I liked words used simple yet meaningful.
Every line has its own sense and in depth. I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.
I liked how you relate your thoughts here and your ideas here to the path of a moonlight.

Tone/Mood:
Interesting and a bit of mystery.

Some Doubts:
I just wonder if you intended not to use some of the punctuation marks.
I would suggests that you can add some of it, like comma or a period, to smoothly flow the lines while reading.

Favorite Word:

The moonlight path
, .

I liked how dreams relate to the moon here. Great.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. Your ideas are truly stunning, and interesting. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine
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#3895952

Review of I am Shattered

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi R. Walter Smith,

Happy WDC Days !!!

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about an emotional expression of what we feel deep within us, which was sketched in words by the authors chosen palette of colors.
The reflection that we see in every mirror is depends on how we are in our self.

The things I am impressed:
I got caught up by the given title, it makes me curious, and intrigued, and also the brief description about this piece. It is indeed that every thought has its own uniqueness.
I liked to read thoughts about feelings and description written in words because everyone has its own insight and definition.

What I liked:
This is a kind of a free verse.
I liked words used, some quite mysterious.
I liked also the shape and form of this piece, different, unique, and interesting.
The flow is dramatic, and good, creating a vivid imagery.
I liked how you relate your emotion and thoughts here using the mirror.
You portrayed this piece very well.

Tone/Mood:
Intriguing, interesting, and mysterious.

Some Doubts:
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Line:

Everything rendered abstract and unfamiliar like the subject of a Picasso painting.
. .

I liked how you relate your emotions here through an Abstract painting.
Beautiful.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. I really enjoyed reading it.
I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

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#3895950

Review of Mother's Soup

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Teerich,

Happy WDC Days !!!

I came across to your piece in the list of Public Reviewing Pages,so I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:

This piece talks about a love of a mother, that even if her child would face the "tie knots" or will having a family on his own, a mother would always like or preferred to be there, and being remember always by her child.

The things I am Impressed:
I liked the given title, it is the one who caught my attention what's that soup that mother's have.

What I liked:

This piece has its own rhyming and I like how it rhyme.
Words are simple and interesting.
I liked how it flow, its good and fluently, creating a vivid imagery.
I liked also your inspiration here. Funny, and interesting.
It reminds me what mother's strategy, so that her child will always be.

Tone/Mood:

A kind of sentimental.

Some Doubts:
The given title before the first line of this piece: Mother' Soup
You jut forgot to put an "s" in there.

Favorite Line:

Mother's soup. .

A mother's important treasure and that is her child.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. It was beautifully written.I'm sure your son would love it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this great piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

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#3893468

Review of Love's Timeless Gift

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi again Tim Chiu,

I came across again to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about love, “which makes the world go round” they said. Everyone has its own definition of love, and its always been based through one’s experienced or theory/principle.
The first stanza explained the feeling of love it gives to a person,an inspiration.
In the second stanza, I saw here the principle of love.
Then, the third stanza is the one that spice up the love; Trust.
And the last stanza is about those challenges love may bring.

First Impression:
I got caught up by the given title. Nice and in depth; Love is always been new and fresh everyday like the morning. It is indeed that every thought and feelings has its own uniqueness.

What I liked:
I liked how you described true love here., and your thoughts are stunning.
I liked its own rhyming, it is like I hear some kind of its own music.
Maybe the words that you used, and the idea the comes along with it. Romantic.
I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.
I liked how you painted your feelings and thoughts here in words.It was certain.

Tone/Mood:
subtle, light and interesting.

Some Doubts:
I don’t see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Stanza:

Never causing each one trouble
While never bursting God's own bubble,
True love's test amid the rubble
Shall fail to cease, but never double...
.

I like your descriptive words here. Fascinating

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

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#3892153

Review of Choices

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Jack P. Tollers,

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about our choices in life. Our decisions we are making today, can affect tomorrow. But there's no question if that what we chose.Truly, we always have a choice.
It talks also the other face of love.

First Impression:
I got caught up by the given title, it makes me curious, and intrigued, what was that choices was all about. And I found out that it was interesting to read, and we can learn lessons also about choices we choose.

What I liked:
This is a kind of a free verse. But I liked its own rhyming.
I liked words used simple yet meaningful.
I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.
I liked how you relate your thoughts about love and found it in 1st Corinthian 13 that love is not self-seeking and does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth or good.

Tone/Mood:
I feel the word brave here, and the word strong to face challenges about life and thinking twice before it gives decision or choice. And faith.

Some Doubts:
I don't see any grammatical error here.

Favorite line:

That love can save a life, .

Love can save a life if its not selfish..
Nice descriptive words.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece.I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always,let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

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#3891182

Review of Your Choice

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Jacko,

I came across to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about one of the mystery of life.The procreation.You vividly explained here the different stages and a day to day development of an embryo. That's how I think mystery was taken place.Which was a gift from God,that we are all gift from God because we came from that stages also.It so hard to believe that today, most of it are practicing or tolerating the killing of one's life in the womb or abortion.Truly we always have a choice.

First Impression:
I got caught up by the given title, it makes me curious, and intrigued, and also the brief description about this piece. It is indeed that every thought has its own uniqueness.
I liked to read thoughts about feelings and description written in words because everyone has its own insight and definition.

What I liked:
This is a kind of a free verse. I liked words used simple yet meaningful.
I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.
I liked how you relate your thoughts to an embryo here.
I liked your ideas here. Its really educational.

Tone/Mood:
I felt sorry to the little one, and sympathy.
You really described and sketched well in your words the feeling of the embryo.

Some Doubts:
I don't see any grammatical error here.
I just suggest some spacing so that there will be a part or gap in which the eyes can rest while reading.

Favorite Stanza:

Is the fault mine that I am alive?
Is it not nature to want to survive?
Why would you hurt me, when I’m not to blame?
For the actions of others, you’d refuse me a name.
No one but God in heaven hears my voice, .

This is the stanza that touched my heart.
Helpless little one are meant to be love not to be junk.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece.I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
I rate it 4.5

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always,let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

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#3890836

Review of The Book

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi again Dan Sturn,

I came across again to your piece in the List of Public Reviewing Page, and I'm here to offer you a review or drop comments on this nice stuff of yours.
Anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader.

My Insight:
This piece talks about a life of a writer or how writer's find its inspiration to write or how pen was creatively weep when handed by an artist of words.It is an emotional expression of a thing that inspired us. Maybe the book.

First Impression:
I got caught up by the given title,It was one of the things that I am interested on it. and also the brief description about this piece. It is indeed that every thought has its own uniqueness.
I liked to read thoughts about feelings and description written in words because everyone has its own insight and definition.

What I liked:
I liked words used,well chosen and clever.
I liked how it rhymes very nice, specially most on the last stanzas.
I liked how it flow, it’s good, creating a vivid imagery.
I liked how you relate your idea about writing and using a book as your source of inspiration here.

Tone/Mood:
Interesting to read.

Some Doubts:
I don't see any grammatical error here.

Favorite Stanza:

We listen with our pen in hand,
and hope our hearts will understand. .

I liked the descriptive you used here.Creatively written.

Overall Impression:

This is a nice piece.I really enjoyed reading it.
I rate it 5.

Thank you for sharing this great piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

samberine

"The Poet's Place "

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