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#2009523 by Samberine Everose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What would you do if you couldn't be, well, you?
#1986107 by diffidentDemon Author IconMail Icon
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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Our passion- individuality that's what make us unique.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - just because of lack of time, so as of now I don't usually like to read novels and chapters, but just because of the word creative that you given as the title, it enticed me to read it.
The title is the one that hook a reader to a piece to read.

Plot and Format- honestly my first impression is just too long, but when I begin to read, it holds my attention that I didn't noticed that I already reached the ended part and craving some more of its continuation.
The plot here is about a world in which they didn't already consider the creativity of every person, where in the main character was searching and craving to that world and place, and when she found it out, she was amazed for the beauty and the loved she found and choosing to stay it there.

Setting: the setting of the story is good, the crafted words was well written to show the different adventure, action and emotion of the story per chapter, it looks like that I am a part of the story and I've felt the emotion of the main character.
Length- as I've said, I usually don't read now a days a long novel or story, because of lack of time, but just because your novel holds my attention just on the beginning, so I've finished it without noticing it.
Grammar and Punctuation - I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
a very nice piece.
I relate this also to our wonderful site - writing.com in which it has a lot of rooms for creativity and improvement, with all the wonderful people living in here, and we have that one in common Creativity.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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the song of a bird in the rain
#1984858 by Storm Writer Author IconMail Icon
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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Birds - one of the creatures that really need a shade in times of storm, because as we may see, they are helpless, small and weak in that time. But some birds are strong and brave, just like the character of that bird in your piece, struggling, but he dance and play with the storm.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - it hook me, I can relate the storm to problems and trials, so in play with the storm, for me struggling but facing every problems with faith, courage and hope.
Imagery - just like the given title, playing - your crafted words is clever, you play with it, short lines and vivid, reminds me of a bird, struggling to problems but dancing to cope on it.
I liked the character that you build on that bird.
Rhyme and Rhythm- I liked the rhythm, but I've just noticed that there are two lines that are not rhyming.
Found on the third stanza, it maybe perfect if you can rhyme the two lines

*Question*My Doubts and Suggestions

I didn't see any word that can distract the flow.
I just wonder why you didn't use any capital letters, even only on the first letter of every stanza.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
We experienced rainy season here in our country after summer, and I've noticed that some of the birds when rain is falling, they waited the rain to stop, they try to have a shade on every roof ceilings on houses here, then after the rain, that's the time they will fly to go in their nest.
But, I like the character of the bird on your piece, it didn't quit even a terrible storm can knock him down, until it reach his/her nest home.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Acrostic poem, 19 lines, 94 words
#1984860 by Red Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Please remember that I‘m not a professional or an expert in writing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Minecraft- Every craft is an Art, its a passion, if we liked and loved our work, then its already our passion, because thru involving on it, we acquired knowledge or wisdom in which school, academics didn't teach, its just only through our experience.
Experience is the best teacher.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - it hook me, title is the enticing part of a piece, I am intrigue on the word mine craft.
Imagery - Very vivid, I easily grasp because its light, and it creates a friendly tone, it reminds me of a nursery rhyme.
Rhyme and Rhythm -well done in using acrostic form

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow,
And no doubt arise.
Just only spacing, maybe you can use the pattern on how the title was spaced on your piece, to easily distinguish that it is an acrostic, or you can also bolded the first letter of every line.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece. A light piece but you portrayed it well.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What dreams do flowers dreamt at night?
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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Flowers have different beauty and we also see different characters in them, but flowers are flowers-the beauty of every plant, they have weakness, and with a harsh hold, will make them fall in their throne.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - it hook me, its a part of the beauty of nature-plants, as I've said, I liked to read nature.
Imagery -in depth, I just see this as weakness and characters of flowers, and the possibility that scares them in every nightmares.
Rhyme and Rhythm - free verse and it blends with the tone.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINES:

Why had their faces become wet
After teardrops fell from their places?

Flowers as we can see in their character, they are compassionate.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A very nice piece.
Flowers are the blossom of every plants, having their own beauty and character,
But they are all the same as soft and sympathetic.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Beauty of nature, one of our pleasure, to behold the wondrously creation by our loving God. There’s nothing can compare in every joy we felt, upon mesmerizing His creation .

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title–The title hook me, I always liked nature to read, one of my favorite and the closest thing in my heart.
Imagery - its vivid, and clear, the weaved words which pertain to nature took me in a magnificent imagery of yours.
Rhyme and Rhythm –A free verse and it blends with the flow.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE STANZA:

Dandelions followed the wind
Blow mountains, o’er streams.
So light and free, as free as it seemed,
And no one knew to where it destined.

Lovely- the verse took me in a sudden floating,
Because, the imagery is good and light like a warm breeze.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I just have thought on some words,
These are just my opinion and impression
It may varies to others.

On the third line
The stagnant lake, like blanket laid.
The word “stagnant”
A stagnant water can be a favorite hangout/place by mosquitoes.
They usually used that word – stagnant and they always linked to mosquitoes,
Maybe you want to change it.
How about “still” or “peaceful”
Have the same meaning on the word stagnant but, this will appeal more in depth and firm.

On the fifth line
The clean river at my sight,
The word “clean” it just seems wordy and not satisfy me,
maybe you want to add more adjective word to be more clarifying in the imagery.
how clean is it? That's what I think,

The line
Those big trees, over my head
I think this that “those trees are just above your head,”
Maybe you want to change the line“over my head.”
How about
Those big trees, where my sightful reach

And the line
On their emerald crowns, there sing the birds
The line“there sing the birds”

Where, those birds sing.


 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
There are some words to be polished to shine its real beauty, like nature, the more we glimpse on it, the more we see its beauty to understand.
Nature is one of the gifts from God, one of His blessings to us.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future
Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
You’re right, we don’t feel the sweetness in all His goodness if we don’t experience the negative or uncertainty of life.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - The captivating part of a piece, it’s the one that every reader determined first before they enter to the piece, and the given title allures me.
Imagery - its vivid, and clear, every line creates a deeper meaning and there's an attached wisdom, in-depth.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE:

All are my favorite, all have given me something that I would think and have a reflection.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.
Just only the two last line that doesn’t rhyme.
And spacing to every two lines, that emphasize an idea, to give and to add more impact to every stated wisdom.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
An inspiring piece.
A simple prayer, in which everyline tells that God loved every one of us, and His always fair,and had perfectly planned everything.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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On the other side of the world is the perfect place for me to skydive.
#1985374 by Moarzjasac Author IconMail Icon

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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Love for me is giving all we can, for the benefit of our love one, without denying our selves, because how can we give our love, if we don't have even a few love in our self, there should always have a balance.
But when I think our Lord, who died and sacrificed Himself for the benefit of mankind-to forgive us in our sin, this is indeed true and the greatness of all. For me, this is so unfair to the one who sacrificed.
But if ever Dolores would never have that kind of thinking to their problem, is his decision would change?
Maybe it depends also on the character/personality of the girl and the depth of her love to the man, because if Dolores have different perspective on circumstances, and if he really love the man, then she would accept him whoever he is or whatever storm they were going through.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Plot and Format - My first impression in your story at first glance is enticing, because I know it’s easily to reach, and I liked also the title. It pertains to the emotion that stand on the main character.
A trial of every couple to test their love if its true.
Setting - the setting is good, you hold me and let me in your story, and I felt the emotions which the main character gone through.
Length - I don't usually like long story specially if every paragraph tells the same, it will seems redundant. Your story is not too long and not too short, but even if its too long, I didn’t noticed it because you hold my attention until I end, and it creates an impact.
Grammar and punctuation - I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.
Dialogue - I love the dialogue, and the slowly emotional drama attached in every crafted word.

*Heart* LINE THAT STICK ON MY MIND :

"her happiness is more important to me than everything else in the world."

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece.
Love is sacrificing our own happiness for the sake of our love one, Love indeed is not selfish, but we should also think if he/she is worthy for our sacrifices.
Every decision that we make, should be our choice.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Whats goin on with Regina now?
#1963259 by 32Queen Author IconMail Icon
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You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This was about life we journey in everyday.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Plot and format - my first impression in your story at first glance is enticing, because the first paragraph was easily to understand, although I just have doubt in the proper pharagraphing but still its appeal to me.
Setting - the setting is good, you hold me and let me in and a part of your story, and I felt emotions which Regina's going through.

Length - I don't usually like long story specially if every paragraphs tells the same, it will seems redundant. Your story is not too long and not too short.

Grammar and Punctuation -
First paragraph - I'm standing at my bus stop waiting for the bus so I can go to work.
The word "my" there beside the bus stop, if there is the word my in there, I just think that you are the owner of the bus stop. You might mean standing at this bus stop.
Sixth paragraph - theres always something with you.
Theres- there's

Dialogue - I love dialogue, it makes the piece more enticing to read.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece. That needs to be continued.

We are the one who Walks in our Life's Journey.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is an expression of love to our mother, and I see this like a prayer, a tribute, a feeling of missing, and love. Roses are a bunch of love.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - I really liked the title, it's the one that enticed me to read. I liked roses, and roses in heavens are so sweet, such kind of mystery.
Imagery - I see this as ethereal, by using the word heaven, Lord. It also reminds me of a bouquet of roses that has been properly arranged, filled with emotions and full of missing ness . You delivered it so nice slow and gentle.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I liked the created rhythm and rhyming in every second and fourth line of every stanza, it blends with the flow, and emotions were evoke.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE:
Roses in heaven

Lovely.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

The Awardicon deserves well.
Congratulations!!!

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is tender, a piece that talks about someone's love to mother. Its true, that our mother is only one and no one could ever replace her in our heart.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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The beauty is in the dying. [Villonnet]
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You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to changing of season. Every end, a new beginning is waiting.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - the captivating part of a piece, it's the one that every reader look before they enter into a piece, and the given title allures me.
Imagery. - its vivid, and clear, the weaved words which pertain to nature holds me and showed the slow flow in imagery and it's beautiful, where it was lightly in changing .
Rhyme and Rhythm - good in using the Villonet form.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE:

for in decay is born a new domain.

End to start something.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

The Awardicon deserves well.
Congratulations!!!

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
Changing- the only permanent here on earth, and we are have the nature to adapt it, sometimes it makes to painful specially in the adjustment- but when we think that changing is for our own good, then it is better to change.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

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You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
The real love of a father, like our Father's above. He always wanted His child to follow the right path.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - The captivating part of a piece, the one that hook me to read your piece.
I came from a broken family, and it always fascinated me to read other than nature, about love, like the given title, although I already have a stand on what Our Father's above love in us, I still have doubt what father's love here on earth.
Imagery - The given imagery is subtle as it flow, I liked the story behind on it. All I find is true and certain love of a father who always want his child to be good. Every line evokes and create emotions.

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
They placed her in my arms that day.
She met me with a smile.
God knows full well the price I’d pay
To hold her now awhile.

This is so tender. I liked the simplicity of the emotion of joy.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

The Awardicon deserves well.
Congratulations!!!!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece. Father have different personality, and have different way in parenting, but the only thing I always keep and I'll stand - a father's love like our Father's above is worth more than a million, sometimes we don't understand how- in His own way, but He definitely think the best for us.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

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#1974508 by CJHanna84 Author IconMail Icon
I've found in your Portfolio. I'm your friend Samberine Everose Author IconMail Icon

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is so romantic and an emotional piece, that talks about the value of a love one in someone's heart.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - is captivating, I liked the punctuation that you used, it seems that there's something more to say .
Imagery - some kind of sentimental, the crafted words in every line was short but in depth. There's more than what it means than the created line. It evokes emotion like certainty.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I think this is a free verse and it blends with the flow.
Form and structure - I liked the breaking of lines, and the spacing.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
Good memories are those we treasured and cherished that sometimres it gives an inspiration to us, to be still and go and inspired.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
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#1951616 by 💙 Carly: Joan Watson Author IconMail Icon
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I‘m not a professional or an expert in writing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I see this as a prayer or a wish with hope.
Peace of mind and a heart of contentment are one of those things that gives us joy.


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - The word 'come' invites me to read it, in every piece the title is the alluring part, it is the one that hook a reader to see a piece.
Imagery - a short poetry that tells more.I liked the word deep, usually we don't easily find deep joy here unless if we asked, search and keep them.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.
I just only have a thought on the three words
come deep joy - I just see them all as firm.
Maybe you want to scattered them on the piece.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
The deepest joy in our heart will always comes to us, if we are contented and appreciate all the great things that God already blessed in us. *Heart*

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

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I'm not a professional or expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and disregard it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Do we really need to know our own destiny?
Do we really need to perceive where should we be ?


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

The title is the hooker of a piece, it is the first thing that every reader first to see, your title is intriguing, every one I know are afraid in death, but it seems that you don't afraid in death.
Imagery - Some kind of vivid, and a bit of scared on my part, a different dimension, I'm afraid thinking about death and what comes after death,but it seems that you just delivered it so lightly.You're brave.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
Just some misspelled word, I have also that in my writings,

If that be me fate; dear friends don't hate.
If that be my fate; dear friends don't hate.

What is ningga?

Singin- singing
Climb in - climbing
Crashin - crashing

Slappin- slapping

Dewinged - I looked in dictionary this word but I didn't find it.
Watchin - watching

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
We have different beliefs, and I respect every person beliefs, because it gives me another Perspective.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
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This poem is a product of two words to write about,melody and harmony.
#1978510 by redbaron Author IconMail Icon
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You can chew and disregard it, if doesn't fit to your taste.*Smile*


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is about the peace that brings in every creation.


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
The title - These two words are perfect combination, in every melody we always search its harmony, that's the one that captivates me.
Imagery - I liked that you used nature to link this two words, you crafted it so vivid, and you took me to that beautiful scenic view of nature wherein there is its melody and harmony.
Rhyme and Rhythm - This is free verse and it blends with the created tone.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE STANZA:
Melody and Harmony
Singing peace through God's own love
Reminding us He is the creator
Of all things we have come to know

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't see any words that can distract its flow.
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is an inspirational piece, every God's creation, we find Him in there, and it has always the melody that flows on it with the harmony, and that is Peace.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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Watching someone become a memory.
#1980477 by Inspired Soul Author IconMail Icon
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*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to a faded love that will slowly have the possibility to become a memory.
We should always need to polish something, to always maintain its sheen.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title- is the captivating part of a piece, it is the one that hook us to read.
The given title makes me think something sentimental, because of the word memory you used.
Imagery - vivid and clear, your words reminds me of being faded, you delivered it so clear your point about fading, not only the reflection but also maybe the feeling that was been felt.
And there's a tone of sadness.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I like how you dabble it in the free verse, it just blend with the tone.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract its flow
Just only breaking of lines.
It will make this piece more emotionally impact.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
We can allow things to happen if we might.
A sentimental piece, that reflects emotions in just only a part of a vision or thought. You portrayed it well.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Its my pleasure to read a review. I rate it 4.0

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I've found your piece SAD HEART while roaming around your port, and it enticed me to read, so I'm here giving you a review.

I'm not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. { e:smile}

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Love for me is making a person to be a better person, by bringing out the best in him\her without forgetting our self.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - there are many words that can describe a heart, so I am intrigue why you called it sad heart, that's the thing that enticed me to read your piece.
Imagery - I am still learning the depth and the true beauty of poetry, we used to craft words just to hide real meanings, our real intention and it depends the reader how she\he would reflect on it. That's how poetry so deep, and I always try to learn that also.
Rhyme and Rhythm - a free verse, and I know you freely showed and delivered because it blends with the created emotion.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I just have doubts on some words, just light and wordy to me.
Like hit, yelling, boss, crawl.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Even though the Genres are dark and death. Poetry is personal - formed of words that hides the true meanings and totally in deep but sometimes it was delivered in light and it evokes emotions,its the same like a piece of Artwork.That the only one who can understand its real meaning is its creator. Readers just only reflect on it.

Thank you for sharing your piece and for allowing me to drop some review.
It's my pleasure to read and review. I rate it 4.0

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Spring means Flowers
#1982640 by Moarzjasac Author IconMail Icon
I've found it in your Portfolio. I hope you will like it.

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*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Yes, spring means flowers, and summer means flowers too, all the season have different beauty of flowers, and I just thought that spring is your favorite, because you see it through etheree, I search the word etheree in the dictionary, but the word ethereal I've found, so I assume that you see spring in an ethereal manner.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - I liked the combination of two words you used, etheree on spring, maybe your expectation, your high impression about spring, and its so beautiful.

Imagery - Vivid. It reminds me of a new fresh bouquet of flowers in the morning of spring, and I really feel and smell fragrance through your crafted words.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I liked how you chose the free verse to delivered your piece. It just blend with the imagery and flow.
Form and structure - I also like the form and shape, just like a bouquet of flowers also that laid.

MY FAVORITE LINES:

that scent the evening breeze
with the aroma of spirit.

Lovely.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
I just have a thought on the word evening you used on the seventh line
That scent the evening breeze.
On the first line it reflects the morning, so my mood and vision is in the morning, but when it comes on this line, you already refer to evening, it just lost me.
I just also think that maybe the flowers scent are like evening- at rest,or mystery?
But morning breeze can also be a refreshing and can soothe also a spirit.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is an inspiring piece.
Beautifully written.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5


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In the aftermath of a storm comes a symphony of color
#1982251 by Moarzjasac Author IconMail Icon
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I hope you will like it. *Smile*

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*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
After a night comes a morning, it consider as a day. As they said after a rain, sun will shine.
But our weather here in the Philippines, summer then comes rain. So I always said when rainy season comes, my happiness were gone, because rainy season defines here as storm.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - I like the given title, it gives a playful and tender idea, and intriguing too, what could be that sound of a rainbow.
The rainbow is a colorful, bright and amazing reflection, its sound will be like it also.
Imagery - your crafted words are certain and delivered it in light tone, but truly when it read and think it really pertain to wisdom and an inspiration of life.
Rhyme and rhythm - I've found this as a lyrical, like a lyrics in music, fine tune.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
the sound of a rainbow.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :

I didn't find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

Just only using some capital letters on the title.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
An inspirational piece.
Specially the brief quote, its already stated here that after a storm, sun not only would shine, but also the rainbow and it gives us beautiful colors.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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#1910139 by BEAR Author IconMail Icon
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*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Losing - a word that is no difference in pain, because when we lost something a part of us would be missing, and in pain, it cause destructive emotions and thorniness of our heart, but both can ease through time and love.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - the title is simple, but it captivate me to read your piece and give a review, and I've found it emotional.
Imagery - I liked the words crafted, vivid and certain.
I liked the part that you are asking, it makes your reader think also what you are asking, which create their own ideas and opinions.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I think this is a rhyming poetry, some stated the rhyming pattern to distinguished clearly, but you've got it, it blends with the created tone.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
you can write down your feeling,
And most will not care.
Because when you write the real things,
No one is ever there.
The best thing to express down emotions is by writing, because through writing, we are free to pour everything that is hard to express in words.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.


*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
One of the beauty of a piece is when created through emotions by the crafted words, and you did it. You showed and portrayed it well.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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#1654084 by BEAR Author IconMail Icon
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You can chew and just ignore it,if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Why is it that if we love, its only the beginning of heartache.
Sometimes pride can make a relationship rot.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - The given title enticed me to read, I see it certain and true, maybe this is a wish, that only one heart only would stay forever.
Imagery - your crafted words are easily reach, and I see some story on it. What most have a relationship. Vivid, and it flows subtle with the created emotion.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE WORD :
why is silence , better than to talk,
When you know that talking will work?
Maybe, when we are in silence,
We always hear the beating of our heart,
That's how we perceive what really we felt and think.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece.
We face many things when we gone into a relationship or love, but we should think that we can grow on it.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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#1959139 by christo Author IconMail Icon
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I relate this to a moment that were treasured and kept.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - I liked the given title, it gives me like familiarity, intriguing.
Imagery - clear, the crafted words create a mystery tone, because of the combination of night and moments.
Rhyme and Rhythm - this is not a rhyming poetry, I just look it as a story, continuing because I noticed that you didn't use capital letters or period at the end off every stanza.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
same moon, here, dashing from cloud to cloud, which lays softly splintered on the ocean
I like how you described the moon here.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I just don't understand the line
No one basket can hold the separate moments,
The word "one" there
I just think if you could eliminate it, or you might mean
None in every basket can hold the separate moments.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a a nice piece.
Moments is like the mystery of the night, and the same as the moon that light.
You portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

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A young man realizes the value of a conscience.
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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
The only thing we have that can't stole in us is our integrity and conscience.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Plot and Format - The plot is good, it talks about the worth of a material/thing in a man's thought - integrity.
Setting - this is one of the important of a story, its fine also, it holds my attention, specially on the first part that create an intriguing tone for describing and defining the locket dangled thing, somehow it took me also in my curiosity about the main character.
Length - even if its long, I decided to read it, because of the intriguing part on the first part.
Grammar and Punctuation - I didn't see any words that can distract the flow.
Dialogue - is one of the part of the story that entice a reader to read a piece, if this is a dialogue about characters thought.
Maybe you can have a separate paragraph on the dialogue of your story, it can be more enticing, and will create a breathing part of the story.
Point of view - the POV here was the first person, and you took me like I am on his feet, thinking the way how he think.
Flow - the flow is good, it holds me until its end.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow of the story *ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You portrayed it well.
Even just only a material thing it took us to think its essence and the most important is how we can learn on that piece.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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I describe springtime by using symbolism to express my beliefs.
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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
We have different definition of spring and its time, and you described and showed it here in your piece ,another idea of spring, but the only thing that we have all in common, we always believe that spring is a new beginning.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - the one that captivates me to read your piece, nature was one of my favorite genre and it hook me on the given title.
Imagery - I liked the words you crafted, it creates a vivid and clear imagery, somehow a combination of ideas and poetic imagery.
Rhyme and Rhythm - This is a rhyming poetry and I liked how you did the rhyming pattern it blends with the rhythm.
Form and Structure - Short poetry but full of ideas, it creates many reasons.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
springtime burst forth in a glorious birth.
I've found this as refreshing.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow of the story *ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You portrayed it well.
Mostly, they see spring as a beginning, but for me its the end of something, because here, summer ends when comes spring.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
You're right, reading is fun and adventurous, we can learn everything through reading, its a key to acquire knowledge .
We can develop also our writing skills, because writing is next to reading.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - The title is simple, but it captivates me, because writing is a partner of reading, and vice versa, I liked writing and indeed I liked also reading.
Imagery - very vivid, easy to grasp because its light, and creates a friendly tone, it reminds me of a nursery rhyme.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I think there is a rhyming pattern here, some authors stated the rhyming pattern below to easily determine it.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
Books are the key to education
This is true, indeed.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow,
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece. A light piece but you portrayed it well.
Reading is my key before I started to write, through reading I begin to appreciate the beauty of writings.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

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