Good Afternoon,
A wonderful Christmas Free Verse poetry with a good flow.
I enjoy reading the story behind the poetry.
Surprise of surprises and the special box contains Santa Claus
Costume that no one can refuse.
Very nice as in
Merry Christmas !
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The government Ruling on this powerful country, the United States of America and it's about
Impeachment Process and when this happens it truly makes a very controversial issue to the person's involved .
This is informative and educational.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I focused my reading to know what's
actually missing
. then I know it at the end..
Hahahaha
Clever poet...
I enjoy reading this well written and nicely presented
" The First Bite "
Interesting, Captivating, intriguing, Entertaining..
I like the rhythm and rhyme and the story behind this special work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
You are so blessed to have in your life this Marvelous Friend.
A marvelous friend who is the answer to all your prayers.
Marvelous lines that completed this work of art that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a good flow.
An interesting and nicely written title:
" Reconcile This Heart "
A plea or a request that needs an immediate action.
This is well written and nicely presented.
It speaks of a very important message in a philosophical way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Dreaming..and all are wonderful dreams through nicely written and nicely presented poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Interesting and captivating title :
" Dream If You Will "
Admirable lines all the way that fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt.
The month of June is if great importance for the Dragons. Something I learn in reading this writing.
Yes.. there are people whose name are also June. I know some.
This is an interesting information as I continue reading between the lines.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Children have good memory surely they will find their way back home.
Interesting and intriguing title of a well written and nicely presented short Story " Babes In The Woods "
Better next time they will carry some food and water while enjoying the walk.
Thank You for sharing and for the read .
Write on.
Good Morning,
A special message to someone special in your life and being expressed through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The poem is full of love and great longings and the memories lingers forever.
The heart speaks.
Good Morning,
Really a big problem on delivery here in this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Better invest a big truck or van and it also needs staff to carry and to transport from the oven to the truck or van and to the delivery address.
I agree with the last line that has no delivery problem at all.
Thank You for sharing and for the read .
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented story about friendship. A friend who's Always there as a listening ear or a shoulder to cry on and just no need to say a word. Just there and the precious presence gives a calming effect of the hurt and pain.
The last line makes a brilliant conclusion.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Wow !
Remarkable..
A unique and wonderful kind of Music originated in Indonesia.
This is a great information that is well written and nicely presented with matching videos that gives more meaning and clarity as well as importance of this precious writing.
I am so blessed to have read this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning.
YES..
This is a great manifestation to honor and to respect the King.
I agree with the written lines that completed this precious " quotes and Words of Wisdom "
Thank You for sharing these wonderful words.
Thank You for the read too.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
A Love poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
The given title is very meaningful and touching :
" Wherever You Go "
A poem whose message is being addressed to someone special in your life and such message is sacred and true telling that wherever you go you'll be here in my heart...and you are always be near to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A new form of poetry I learned through this work of art,
Zanila Rhyme Form..
The given title expresses great expectations with much enthusiasm and excitement.
The poem is so full of life and with eagerness to explore and to enjoy such wonderful ride to reach the desired destination.
This is wonderful and highly impressive.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless...
Good Morning,
The given title reminds me of one of my favorite songs during college days with the same title
" Creation"
A song that serves as an inspiration for me to sing that makes me Won the First Prize and there were 8 contestants on that Singing Competition that leads me to be an undefeated champion for one month and the Singer of the Month Award. Truly an unforgettable college days of my life that made me earned Cash too.
The lines of that song resonate with the lines of this poem that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
A Poem so full of life and meaning.
Thank You for sharing this that reminds me of the good old days of Music and Me.
Highly impressive work of art.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always..
Good Morning,
A very special " You " is in your thoughts today that makes you able to write a beautiful and meaningful poetry.
Yes..this precious " You " lives in your heart and is the main character of your true desire.
This is nicely written all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
It speaks of yesteryears as in the childhood memories are being expressed through poetic words and lines in this work of art as in a sentimental journey.
A poem that reminds me of the song
" Tears and Souvenirs "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very unpleasant feeling along with all those discomfort that bothers the mind is the main message or topic of this well written and nicely presented poetry with a philosophical message all the way.
Thank You for sharing :
" Anxiety " and Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Prolific Writer. I have reviewed many of your poems and this one is a great collection of your work of art that is truly admirable and highly impressive.
This can be made into a book with fascinating cover and a marvelous color.
You are truly blessed with a great talent.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A day in a life of a Writer is the message of this well written and nicely presented work of art with an interesting and captivating title " Scraps "
Out of these Scraps a work of art is being done as in a job well done.
Wonderful creativeness.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I live near the sea and Clams played an important role in my childhood memories at Low Tide, where along with my cousins we gather sea shells like Mussel and I had this favorite big white clam that makes me resonate this story about SOL..who finds the sea as his forever Home Sweet Home.
I love the great message behind this well written and nicely presented story of one of the brilliant Writers in this Awesome Community.
Thank You for another wonderful read.
Write on and God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Good Afternoon,
Oh...The unforgettable Christmas experience. Sad to note that possibly at the time cellphone was not popular because nowadays everyone has a cellphone at hand even very young children.
Very lucky to be back to the whole family in one piece. No scratch , no wounds. Only frustrating moments. My curiosity too as my reading was focused on what's going to happen next.
This is a well written and nicely presented story..with a Happy Ending.
Yes....
Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
A Family Story about Halloween.
The husband is interested while the wife is not for this Trick or Treat yet she has to go on with the flow which gained a lot of admiration.
Oh. Halloween..It's a lot of noise too that sometimes I prefer to lock myself in the room and read a book.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha very clever pets. They know the best way to do it.
Fascinating short story with a good flow.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Four important characters that play their role so well.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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