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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The given title is interesting and intriguing:
" Sam Adams Looks At Flowers With Regret "
The special Note below the poetry speaks of how lovely is this particular place
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Rainbow's Delight  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A Diamante Form of Poetry with a fascinating title
" Rainbow's Delight "
Wonderful lines that describe how amazing and marvelous a rainbow truly is my
I love each word that completed this special work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Whew..what a terrible ending and a horrible experience.
Reading the given title which surely is a foreign words makes me very curious to know what is this all about.
Everything went well until the last part of the story .
A Winning Piece...
I agree !
Thank You for the read.
Write on
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Review of Blue Eyes  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Surely this young man is greatly blessed. The presentation is wonderful. I like the blue colored letters of each word that completed this work of art and complements with the given title :
" Blue Eyes "
I am so glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of Nostalgia  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A brilliant Poet. This is a wonderful work of art in only 24 syllables.
Nice picture that adds more meaning into this nicely written and nicely presented poem with an interesting title " Nostalgia "
The written lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of Magic Marbles  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A wise and nice story written for a prompt and you did write it so well.
Reading between the lines I wonder if kids at this present generation still know how to play marbles as I noticed mostly all the kids are having their eyed glued to their cellphones where online games are many.
I enjoy reading the story behind the poetry.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Offstage  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A politician who is excellent in public speaking but not in deeds. Throwing garbage from the window of his car proves that he is not practicing what he preached.
What a shame as he fooled everyone including himself.
This is a well written and nicely presented writing about the realities of life. Sad to note.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very touching story.
Yes..the questioning heart on why this happened to her son and this is truly a very big problem like a strong storm that is horrifying and terrifying.
The last line proves that there is Hope, that there is truly a Miracle.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
" Four Month Old Jamie "
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The given title is interesting, captivating as well as intriguing:
" Wisdom Does Not Become You "
This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
The message is philosophical all the way.
Thank You for sharing this and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of The Magic Box  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
I wish he can recover and move out from the box and makes a strong kick to the traitors.
A sad story and mysterious.
This is well written and nicely presented.
The given title is interesting and captivating as well as intriguing as the given title is a mystery by itself.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Keep Reading!  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very interesting title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow
" Keep Reading "
The message is philosophical in a very nice way of connectedness with life and interests in the gifts of living life to the fullest with meaning.
Wonderful in its own special way.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of August  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A special tribute to this month of
August and the given title said it so.
A month of wonderful activities and great experiences in unforgettable days.
Wonderfully written and nicely presented.
Great lines that are so full.of life.
Thank You for sharing
" August "
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A beautiful Love Story in a unique situation or condition proving that Love overrules after all.
Two important characters Annette and Theo found each other at the right place and at the right time.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing
" Fanning The Flames "
Write on.

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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The given title is very meaningful, sacred and powerful:
" The Almighty JESUS :
The Blessed Truth "
Wonderful poetic words and lines that completed this very precious work of art.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
I admire the very nice rhythm and rhyme.
Awesome.
Write on.
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Review of SHE  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented Essay that sounds like an Awesome Prose to me.
Writings out of personal experience with a twist and turn.
You found the love of your life then lost it and the longings linger forever.
Like a Teledrama that everyone wants to know what happens next.
A brilliant writer.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The baseball game, the athletes, the fans, the actual action, the reaction, the observations are being expressed nicely and wisely in this wonderful work of art with a fascinating title ;
"
Love Is Truly In Tact "
Wonderful as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Teresa Rex  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A dinosaur with a very nice name:
" Teresa Rex "
Special moments of togetherness.is being shared in the story behind this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
Fascinating connectedness.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read .
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A nicely written letter to Danny, a very special person in Linda's life and heart and the father of their child, the three year old, Peggy.
A letter that reminisce the good old days of love and togetherness and so unforgettable.
I wish Danny can read this and be home soonest to be united with her and their daughter.
Very meaningful and touching.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A very young talented writer surely there's a bright future for You.
This is well written and nicely presented with your very own honest opinion of a Biblical parable that shares great wisdom.
I have nothing to add and nothing to correct. This writing is highly impressive as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
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Review of Truth  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A Love Poetry.
It speaks of the importance of someone's presence in your life.
Written with all truthfulness and sincereness.
A wonderful feeling is being expressed here in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Marvelous...
Fascinating...
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Another free verse poetry that speaks about the busy metropolis and the place to work.
It speaks of many aspects of a city life.
This is well written and nicely presented as always in your work of art.
Thank You for sharing
" A Sensible Resort :
Exist Or Change It "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of One and one  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A love poetry full of numbers that speaks of the deepest feelings of the heart.
Interesting title and captivating too :
" One And One "
This is free verse poetry with a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Country Girls.  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A beautiful song with a meaningful lyrics.
Here one can see the difference between a city girl and a country girl as well as a city life and a country life.
The lyrics fit for the given title :
" Country Girls"
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A Country Song... I believe so and written for Thanksgiving.

Interesting and captivating title
" Grannie's Pumpkin Pie "
I haven't tasted or eaten this kind of pie and surely this delicious as it is so nutritious.
A story full of love and family togetherness.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I am so glad to have read this.
A Happy Song.

Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of There's No Shame  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A Double Etheree Form of Poetry.
The presentation is uniquely Amazing.
Deeply emotional poem from the heart.
A life full of worries and
" There's No Shame " title fits for the story behind the poetry.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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