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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
This surely is delicious and may last for a week as there are boxes of ingredients.
It can also be a good choice for group dining.
Interesting and very inviting.
Thank You for sharing this Comfort Food Recipe that is well written and nicely presented.
Write on.
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Review of For everytime  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A love poetry that speaks of the true desire of the heart.
It has a very important message to someone special in your life and your heart.
Hope she reads this Nice written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank you for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The witch story behind the poetry is fascinating.
Moon, nice name for a Cat.
I am glad that eventually she found a hat that she loves.
The poem is well written and nicely presented and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing this and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Forced into Being  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry with a good flow.
It speaks of life, work and all the essence of living.
The poem speaks of a philosophical message and is well written and nicely presented.
The last stanza expresses True Love

Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Tumbled Granite  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A poem about Nature.it speaks of the situation or condition of this particular season

This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
The rhythm and rhyme of this special work of art is wonderful.

Thank You for sharing
" Tumbled Granite "
Write on.

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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Yes..no matter what is happening to the whole world what matters most is that You and Your Wife are united and always together...until forever.
The given title fits for the written lines.
Thank You for sharing this
" Love Haiku Sonnet " and for the read.
Write on
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A real antique . Precious as the passing of time.
They can have a very special place at the Museum.
Touching and meaningful...It is a great experience to see them. to touch them and read them.
Thank You for sharing
* Postcards From Iowa, 1909 "
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A Diamante Form of Poetry and written for a prompt and you did write it nicely.
Descriptive of the mountain so high that is near the sky.
The presentation is Awesome.
The picture adds more meaning into this special work of art.
Wonderful as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of The Tractor  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Her eagerness to drive the tractor only forgot to ask on how to stop it.
A great job turned disaster yet a good lesson being learned.
She is blessed to have a caring and understanding father.
I love the storyline of a happy family.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of The Game  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The given title expresses excitement and great expectations.
" GAME "
It is truly a lot of thrill and excitement watching a Family member playing and the loud cheers makes it more lively and lovely .
I am happy for Jimmy, for the team and for the whole family.
Hep ! Hep ! HURRAY !
Great story.
Brilliant writer.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Oh...The given title is captivating and intriguing "
" Let's Wait And Not See "
As in do not have a great expectation.
The poem is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The lines at the last stanza are the most meaningful lines.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of Canvas  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is interesting, sad yet wonderful.
Wonderful that it expresses a great talent and Hope that makes the poem glowing.
Nice title.
Nice poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
" Canvas "
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
I love this song. I love its tune too.
Yes.. wonderful list of words that completed this wonderful Word Search.
I admire your style of having songs as your title.
A word search of a beautiful Music.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of This Broken Heart  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece that is well written and nicely presented as well as with a good flow.
This reminds me of my brother's favorite song when he was a teenager
" Who Broke Your Heart ? "
Yes..the one who Broke your heart makes you a great poet.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of How To Get Viewed  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
WOW!
Thank You so.much for sharing this highly informative, useful as well as helpful writing with an interesting title :
" How To Get Viewed "
An Essay that surely everyone enjoys reading and I am one of them.
Great !
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of Valentine  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Brilliant girl..and with a very caring heart.
I love the character of Anna here in this beautiful Valentines story.
Nice bonding time with Grandma and she learned a lot from her.
I enjoy reading this
" Valentine " short story.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning,
An eighteen years old storyteller and you did write it so well.
Your life's experiences as well as your personal outlook in life
Interesting title:
" A Narrative In Our Minds "
My suggestion in this Essay :
Please divide this into four paragraphs for a nicer presentation.
Thank You for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of The River  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The river of a questioning soul as in seeking for the right answer and at the end the great answer is Hope.
Fascinating work of art.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing
" The River "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
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Review of That Day  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
So that's the answer to Dorothy's
Confusion.
A unique storyline that is full of excitement and suspense.
An Alien story ? I believe so.
This is well written and nicely presented.
The life of Dorothy is in trouble or her memory is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Aware  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Amazing talent.
Amazing presentation..

A one word per line poetry with a given title that also serves as a great warning :
" Aware "
One of the great poets in this awesome Community.
I admire your talent.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of The Vast Darkness  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow and a wonderful twist and turn at the end.
It speaks of no matter how gloomy life is, there is Always HOPE that tomorrow will be alright.
Nice rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Mountain  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
This is for me a wonderful poetry all because I can relate to the given title as well as for all the poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
I live very near the Beach, and it is my forever Home Sweet Home.
Thank You for sharing this and
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A poem that is well written and nicely presented and is descriptive of the given title :
" Mr. Barnaby, the Toad "
Poor Mr. Barnaby with a terrible ending.
A sad story behind the poetry with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Sharon  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
An office Romance with a lovely lady with a beautiful name:
" SHARON "
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow and is full of love and life.
I admire the Creativeness.
A joyful read.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Wow..
Very Young and already a great achiever.
You are truly Blessed and I am so happy for You.
Thank You for sharing this writing that is informative especially when this is an Awesome Community of Writers all over the world.
Follow Your dreams and keep dreaming BIG Dreams
Winning is your Birthright.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
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