Good Afternoon,
Nice title.
Wonderful poetry.
This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
Wonderful lines that completed this special work of art that has a very nice rhythm and rhyme.
A life that is alone but not lonely.
Thank You for sharing
" Language Of Escape "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Ouch...that hurts seeing someone you love with another person.
Very Sad story behind the poetry.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Well.. Don't worry there will be the right person someday who will love you truly and you will be very happy.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Written for a prompt.
Interesting and captivating title
" Population Two "
The story behind the poetry is like a drama with a horror theme.
The fortune teller with out a fortune but with a curse and that's horrible and terrible.
The poem is well written and nicely presented with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written and nicely presented Poem about Halloween that sounds like a lively song to me.
Descriptive of Halloween activities that the young ones love to join or partipate.
Thirteen lines that completed this special work of art.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The given title is interesting and captivating:
" The Shaman "
The lines are descriptive of the Shaman that fits for the given title.
This is well written all the way..
The Shaman sees..
My favorite lines that truly describes what a Shaman is .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Written for a Prompt.
A poetry that is well written and nicely presented all the way.It speaks of the memories that keeps haunting that keeps the chilling feeling.
The written lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A kind of music that hurts the deepest chamber of the heart as in a sad memory reopens and the pain is deep.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a philosophical message.
Sad as in very sad
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Written For A Contest.
A lovely poetry about Peony.
A lovely picture that adds more meaning into this special work of art.
Wonderfully written and nicely presented.
Beautiful " One last pink Peony "
A great conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always..
Good Morning,
An Acrostic Poetry.
Actually a Double Acrostic.
This is nicely written and nicely presented.
Wonderful Title :
" Write Something "
The words and lines written fit for the given title.
Yes. This has something to do with writing which truly matters a lot.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented Essay with a very interesting and captivating title :
"Logical Lunacy : On High IQ Schizophrenia "
Biographical Writing as well as a detailed explanation that clearly outline this important topic as in a clear information.
I agree with the lines at the last paragraph that is hopeful and meaningful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A disagreement or a relationship not in perfect harmony and here comes the poetic words and lines that speaks of the true feelings of the heart releasing the deepest emotion through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
A good release of thoughts indeed !
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A Medical Report or A summary of great information that is nicely written and nicely presented detailing the necessary or complete information on this important topic.
Highly impressive writing.
Thank You for sharing
"RSI Treatment Market "
Interesting..
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A Love Poetry with a very special message to someone special in your life and heart ..
This is well written and nicely presented. It is so full of life.
The poem has a good flow and is admirable.
Thank You for sharing
" Breathe Me Again "
Write on
Good Afternoon,
This is a short story that sounds like a Puzzle to me as honestly I do not know what a Fultinator is...a part of ?
A bicycle part perhaps.. hahaha
A very interesting yet very intriguing short story
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Spring...I have not experience this Season myself yet I learned through reading that it is the best of all the four seasons in your country.
Wonderful list of words that makes this Spring wonderful as well as enjoyable .
Thank You for sharing
Spring Time.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
The cruel part of winter is being emphasized here in this well written and nicely presented work of art.
The given title speaks of one of the seasons in your country which I believe is also the coldest.
This is sad to note as I feel the coldness of the air as I read between the lines.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning ,
Written for a Contest.
The short story is full.of suspense as the main character seeks for own safety.
The coldness of the season also is another difficult situation.
I wish she and her bear can make it through.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
First Place Winner..
Congratulations.
Well - deserving to get the Top award.
This is a wise and nice work of art all the way
Highly impressive lines from the start to the end.
Very inspiring and meaningful.
Thank You for sharing
"The Beginning Of Something New "
Write On.
Good Afternoon
Dr. Gonzo,
This is wonderful and it shares great wisdom to one and all.
Very inspiring lines that completed this special work of art.
Nicely written and nicely presented.
Each statement speaks of a wise advice.
The last two lines make a great conclusion.
Thank You for another great read.
Write On.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Good Afternoon,
This is wonderful.
Interesting and captivating title
"Mind Your P's and Q's "
Nice as in Very nice.
I enjoy reading this very uniquely wonderful work of art.
Fascinating.
This is joyful read.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Possibly in the beginning it was not meant to be and here's a poetry that speaks of ending it, as in some good things never last.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a title:
" Ending Our Relationship "
A sad reality.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Great story with a great lesson to share.
I admire your Mom's way of discipline and her love of the environment which I wish everyone in this world will follow her ways.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I am so glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharing
" Stewardship "
Write On.
Good Morning,
This is a very precious and Special Poetry that is descriptive of " The Taste Of Sunshine " through poetic words and lines in your own wonderful way.
Reading between the lines makes me hungry as these are so delicious food for me.
Awesome as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A Childhood Memories that is being documented through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
This looks like a treasured diary.
Unforgettable indeed.
I am happy for you to experience such childhood memories with love to be treasured forever.
A great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I love the positive outlook in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
It is full of excitement and enthusiasm as in no one or nothing can stop you for winning in life.
Meaningful and inspiring work of art.
Thank You for sharing
" It's My Time And I Am
Finding Myself "
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
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