Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry about a relationship and the observation on someone you love
" You sing when
everyone screams"
This is an intriguing line of this special work of art.
The last two lines speak of the facts of life
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Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The mystery box as in the mystery gift and it's an Alien cat.
Written for a prompt and I enjoy reading it
This is well written and nicely presented with a good flow.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing " Mars Cat "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on
Haiku Poetry about Friendship .
It speaks of the meaning and ways of having a true friend through a concise, wise and nice form of poetry.
Three precious lines that completed this special work of art with a nice title :
" Friendships Rest "
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Good Afternoon,
I love the given title that we all need to experience " True Love "
The love for each other is real then the last part is a sad story behind the poetry as it expresses a twist and turn that spoils the loveliness of it all.
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Good Afternoon,
A Song with a very interesting title and captivating too:
" When You're Wrong "
The lyrics fit for the given title..
I wonder what is the tune of this song.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines that are also most meaningful to me.
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Good Morning,
Thank You for the Special Note below the poetry that explains clearly about this form of poetry
.
The given title is wonderful as there are many songs written about the " Moon ".
This one is concise, nice and wise Haiku Poetry..
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Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is interesting as well as intriguing.
Family relationship.
Family bloodline
and that cannot be erased with what happened and not be erased by time.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented
" Inheritance "
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Good Morning,
A sad story behind the poetry.
A pitiful situation and so unfair yet I love the happy ending.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The rhythm and rhyme of this poem is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing
" Compelling Justice "
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
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Good Morning,
A love story through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
It is so full of life and happy moments that being shared by two hearts .
The written lines fit for the given title :
" Our Timeless Love "
Keep loving forever and Be Very Happy.
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Good Morning,
Wonderful " New Year Dreaming"
A well written and nicely presented poetry with a good flow. The rhythm and rhyme is nice.
The itinerary speaks of beautiful places. Possibly you can add traveling to the Philippines to discover Moalboal, my hometown and a popular tourist destination.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
Based on observations and that's enough " Proof " for him to conclude that the Aliens are coming and the reason of such happenings.
Yet, they just laughed at him.
Am Alien story that is well written and nicely presented.
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Good Morning,
In answer to the question at the last line I say " YES "
The decision is yours and yours alone.
Knowing that right is right and wrong is wrong, so why move wrongly.?
This is written with all honesty and truthfulness.
Yes .You can change for the Better or for the best if you put your heart and mind into it.
Winning is your birthright.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very touching story about love, relationship and death .
And these " Flowers For Suzy "
Gone too soon and forever lives in your heart, beautiful and lovable Suzy.
Surely Suzy is watching you from Heaven for Always.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the read.
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Good Morning,
A lovely and heartily written Poetry that serves as a great tribute to a dearest Mom who's gone too soon.
I am sorry for your loss.
A poem so full of love and care as well as of great Hope..until we meet again.
Touching and meaningful.
A beautiful Mother who is now in God's keeping as she keeps her in your heart.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A sad happening to a person when suffering a " Depression "
Each poetic words and lines fit for the given title. Usually this happens when one has a traumatic experience. Prayers and healthy, clean living along with full support of loved ones help to vanish this feeling .
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Good Evening,
You are greatly blessed to love and be loved. It is always great to be surrounded with people who truly cares...as it lightens the burdens and brightens the road
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented
" Free Of It All "
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Good Evening,
That feeling of despair is now gone as there is a cute new neighbor around. Oh .. Puppy Love...
Lilly's Mom makes the right move of telling her that " Tomorrow will be a better day "
Wonderful story that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
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Good Evening,
Wonderful title of a free verse poetry about flowers :
* The Flowers Blossom Along "
Yes ! And they add more color and.meaning into our world.
Admirable lines that completed this work of art.
Awesome as it is.
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Good Afternoon,
Christmas is fast approaching and the list of words are about Christmas.
A time for a great celebration that makes the world rejoining.
A time for family gatherings and gift giving.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
It speaks of color of the season that changes too as the season changes .
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
It is not an easy feeling when
" Sadness " fills the heart.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented work of art.
The chosen poetic words and lines fit for the given title.
I wish sadness will be gone and be overshadowed by joy.
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Good Afternoon,
I love Pringles. My late brother whenever he went to the city to went marketing for his bar and restaurant business he always bought Pringles especially for me and I miss him more than words can say writing this Review.
Yes..I love the Pizza flavor.
Thank You for the read.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Afternoon,
A Romanticism Form of Poetry.
Something New I learned today.
An interesting title:
" The Dome Above,
The River Below "
The written poetic words and lines speaks of the beauty of nature as well as with the true feelings of the heart which truly fit for the Poetry Form.
Wonderful work of art.
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Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The love story that is no longer in harmony..like a bridge over troubled water...sad as in sad.
Descriptive of a relationship that turned sour from I love you to
I hate you..
Like a drama in real life .
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A message directed to someone.
An order on what to do.
Something unusual is happening in the story behind the poetry that for me sounds so terrible and scary.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
" Crawl Back Inside "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
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