Good Morning,
A very beautiful story with a very beautiful message from the Fox.
Very meaningful and inspiring.
This is well written and nicely presented as always in your highly admired short stories
Thank You for sharing and for another worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Two Hearts as one is the main theme of this nicely written and nicely presented Love Poetry
Admirable and adorable lines that completed this work of art.
A joyous occasion for everyone to see and to enjoy.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Good decision to stay away from the cave.
A short story full of excitement , thrill and worries too.
This is well written and nicely presented..
I am glad with the happy ending.
Thank You for sharing
" Paradise Cove "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very important topic is being shared in the story behind the poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
The given title is not the easy to do " Waiting "
Yes..not everyone has the patience and perseverance to wait.
The chosen lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry shares an unforgettable part of the world history and it speaks particularly of a place called Normandy...where the war had cost a lot of losses.
Written for a Veterans Challenge.
This is highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
It is always nice to see birds flying and sitting on the tree and chirping too. Fascinating sight as well as fascinating sound.
I enjoy reading this short story with a good flow and it's about the " Lemon Bird "
Thank You for sharing
" Their Own Little Secret "
A wonderful secret.
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Good Morning,
A nicely written short story with all truthfulness and candidness.
A story about friendship and promotion and the unforgettable dinner invitation or get together.
Interesting and intriguing title
" The Call "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A nice title of a free verse poetry
Summer Evening Prayer..
The written lines are descriptive of the night's early summertime along with the beauty of it and added with a prayer makes it more meaningful.
My suggestion in this work:
The main title.. Please change the word Payer to Prayer.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
Oh...What a disappointment...A very sad experience in this very special part of Marriage, the honeymoon.
I can vividly picture the place especially the cottage with frogs at the bath tub.. that's too much to bear. I admire your patience in dealing with the situation. It is truly a complete No Way for me.
A very sad and unforgettable experience indeed ..
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Preface of an interesting book that is in the making.
This is a wonderful writing and surely a lot of suspense as the opening expresses so much horror and terror.
I admire the writing the way it is. I have nothing to correct or to add.
Good luck for the continuation up to the completion of this captivating story.
By the way, What Is The Title ?
Thank You for the read.
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Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
It speaks of the world's happening the affects greatly to the environment..
The written lines fit for the given title .
Thank You for sharing " Climate Change On The Move "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A different kind of entertainment and at the same time a problem.
Interesting story with an interesting title " It happens "
Well...life is not always fun there's also some discomfort.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A detective story.Another adventure of this very important character, Sam Adams and now in Bangkok Thailand and with another lead character Khun Lek .
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
" What Does That Mean ? "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Two people with different choices and live life according to their beliefs.
Eric and Frank, two important characters in this well written and nicely presented short story with an interesting title :
" Choices "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Afternoon,
A Poetry.
A Prayer .
Am interesting title
" Heartfelt "
A poem that speaks of the true desire of the heart with prayer as a wise conclusion.
This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting and sad story at the same time about your dearest brother Andrew. Sad to note that he felt unloved inspite of all the love the family give to him.
At age 35.. it is not easy for him to receive treatment or therapy to change his outlook in life...but Prayers can and a neverending love and understanding.
Written for a prompt.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Nice title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry : " Nature "
It speaks of the importance of our environment and that everyone must take good care of it all the way.
The last line makes a great conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I love this poem all the way from the given title to the last line.
It serves as a word of wisdom or a great advice.
Life is too short to live with disgust.
Admirable lines that completed this precious work of art.
Thank You for sharing
" You've Got To Move On "
A wonderful read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting story about the " The Whistling GOD " as in a form of a roll call of His flocks and they all follow Him. It surely is a delightful whistle it can be with a tune or a whistle like of the theme of a March.
Fascinating story that makes me smile and feel like whistling too while reading this.
Thank You for sharing this well written work of art
. Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This is an interesting Poll with an interesting title too :
" Who Would You Rather Meet ? "
I answered a Slender Man...because most of my brothers are slender as in fit to play basketball and other ball games.
Amusing . hahaha
Thank You for sharing and the opportunity for me to answer.
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Good Afternoon,
A story full of suspense and very touching. I am so glad she was able to escape from the village and died at her Home Sweet Home along with the spirit of her mother and the rest of her family that surely welcomes her in heaven.
The main character, the large old Lynx has lived life to the fullest along with all the memories she keeps in her heart .
A story of a BIG CAT which also can happen to a person in real life.
Brilliant storyline.
Brilliant Author
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Afternoon,
A biographical Poetry with a captivating and interesting title
" Sun And Clouds "
This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
Altogether, this poems expresses a philosophical message and with a wise and nice conclusion....as in a wonderful realization.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting picture of a place very far away from mine.
I have two female friends living there with their family and they both love the place. I believe that they love this place so much
Thank You for sharing this
" Down In Texas "
Nice picture indeed.
Write on and
Write on.
Good Morning,
A heavy drama and a heartfelt Birthday Greetings to a dearest Son.
Written with all truthfulness, honesty and sincereness.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
" I am not all worried because I
Put my trust in GOD !
Great conclusion.
Thank You for the read...
Happy Birthday To Your Son ..
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very special Love poetry for Valentines Day. This is written for a prompt.
The precious message is being addressed to this very love of your life and is descriptive of the true feelings of the heart.
To love and be loved ....is a wonderful feeling and makes both of You so very blessed.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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