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Review of FIG TREE AND ME  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Talking to a Fig tree through a well written and nicely presented poetic words and lines that completed this
" Fig Tree And Me "
The poem has a good flow and I wish the fig tree can answer you in its own special way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of The Attic Window  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Wonderful Essay.
Wonderful Story.
Wonderful title :
The Attic Window
I can vividly picture the stillness and beauty of the night as you enjoy the beauty of the surrounding as you observed from the window of the attic .
The surprise presence of this wonderful creature who eventually sat on your lap adds more meaning and beauty into this writing.
Highly impressive.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Surely there are a lot of Authors here in this Community who love this Word Search that speaks of
' Random Vehicle Models "
Nice list here that fits for the given title.
Interesting Models indeed..
Thank You for sharing this and for the read.
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Review of Trunk  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
WOW! A very special and interesting story behind this long and nicely written and nicely presented Poetry.
The given title speaks of wonderful expectations :
" Trunk "
All the memories and precious gifts are there .
I enjoy reading this Poem with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of Registration  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The five year old Penny who believes she knows everything.
Smart kid.
Very Smart Mom with her convincing words.
This is a wonderful story and is well written and nicely presented all the way.
I love the character of Penny.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Dammit Friend  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry that expresses a great disappointment to a friend who has done something unpleasant and this causes the angry words.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The heart speaks through Poetry.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Portrait  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The given title is interesting and wonderful " Portrait "
With this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry is an important message to someone special in your life and this surely is a great surprise.
The poem has a good flow.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Steady Rhythm  Open in new Window.
for entry "Mother! Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Oh. blame it to the cat . The mother is listening to her explanation, the question is... Can she convince her or not ?
Amusing short story. The last line is truly amusing.
Thank You for sharing "Mother "
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,

Interesting topic that you are sharing in this well written and nicely presented work of art.
You justify your words with a wise and nice conclusion.
Brilliant Poem.
Brilliant Poet.
Highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing
"You Only Live Once ? "
With a question mark of course
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Christmas 🌲 in August.
This is wonderful in every way and makes me admire your great talent of writing.
Christmas in our hearts is the great message of this special work of art.

Admirable lines that completed this well written and nicely presented
" The Spirit of Christmas "
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
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Review of The Note  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A pickpocket with a heart and actually have a conscience after all.
Sad to note that people prefer this kind way of living escaping the hard work or for whatever reason it does not justify the Injustice done to their victims.
My honest opinion on this matter.
The storyline is very convincing.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A very observant five year old and she knows what she is doing as she explained it so well to Mom.
I can vividly picture her cutting her hair. Hahaha
Amusing.

A nice story that for me is entertaining.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented
" High Tea With Mommy "
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Memories with someone special in your life and heart is being expressed through a well written and nicely presented poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Sentimental as in reminiscing those were the happy days.

Thank You for sharing
" Come Sit With Me "
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Naked bowling ?
Strange.. I wonder what it means... literally ? Oh... One of a kind..
Small town with not much to offer as far as food service is concerned..
No choice...
Sad to note...
Yes .this happens ... Either you go with the flow or go back right away to where you came from.
An unforgettable story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of Semantics  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
At last the discussion ends.
To believe and not to believe.
And the story goes on and on not believing on not to know what is to believe and it actually come to and end
Thank You for sharing
" Semantics "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
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Review of Dad Daze  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A Family Story and this is about Dad and his two sons.
Well , with two boys around at this young age a lot of things happen to be experienced , to enjoy and to share including all the hassles.
Thank You for sharing and for the read of this well written short story.
Write on.
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Review of The Beacon  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Nice and meaningful.
The poem speaks of an advice and also a form of a request.
I love most the lines at the last stanza which are most meaningful and inspiring.
This is well written and nicely presented work of art
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Phil..a.k.a.
Philomena..nice name for a plant..like the name of one of my beautiful friends who loves coffee too.
This is n interesting and unique storyline.
A bit amusing too
Thank You for sharing
" Phil, The Coffee Loving
Office Plant "
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A very meaningful poem that speaks of " The Voice : Words And Music"
The most powerful voice and such words are like music to the ears.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that sounds so sacred to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Write on.
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Review of Diner Noise  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
I have a lot of experiences dining in the restaurant thus the given title of this word search fascinates me :
" Diner Noise. "
Yes ! And they are many
I need to include Music here because I love dining with a music background.
Interesting Word Search.
Thank You for sharing.
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Review of Love Is  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Nice poem about Love that you are sharing here in this Awesome Community. Wonderful lines that completed this work of art about this very special and precious Word.
Interesting word search too with a list of words that truly fits for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Life's a gift!  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The given title is interesting, captivating and so very true:
" Life Is A Gift "
Yes. And a very precious gift indeed !
The last line makes a wonderful conclusion as in a happy ending.
This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
Thank You for sharing this
Write on.
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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
So.many song are written.
So many movies are shown.
So many stories are told.
So many poems I read about Love including this one and I highly admire every line that completed this work of art.
Very true, we never grasp for love when we sense the real meaning of the lives that surround us.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
So it's not an imagination only but it's real. That's fantastic to see Peepdots...I wish I can see them myself too on our garden.. or maybe not... haha haha I might faint.
Interesting story that is well written and nicely presented all the way
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Now or Never  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Yes . these Four old songs are very famous in our country and unforgettable too.
A Winning Piece...
Congratulations..
Yes ..I agree that this truly is a Winning Piece.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way with a heavy drama story behind the poetry.
Write on.
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