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#4568398

Review of "Teach Me Your Mood..."

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Rated: E

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Hello jaya , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this poem is structured using five cinquains and a couplet for a total of twenty-seven lines.

Theme: The theme of this poem is beauty and the stars

punctuation: The punctuation was okay to the best of my knowledge.

tone: the tone was even smooth.

Title: The title, "Teach me your Mood...," is appropriate and inspired by another famous work .

Suggestions: The item was well-written and I enjoyed reading it.

Teach
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4568347

Review of Secrets

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Rated: E

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Hello marvinschreb, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: I do like the way you structured this, spelling out the title with larger letters. This appears to be an Acrostic.

Theme: The theme of this item is Secrets

Flow: it flows okay, the grammar is also good as is the spelling.

punctuation: punctuation is alright to the best of my knowledge.

Title: The title, " Secrets," is appropriate and is spelled out with the lines of the poem.

ecrets are somethhing shared with nobody

You forgot the big "S" on the first line of the poem.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4568342

Review of I Wish I Knew Your Name

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Rated: E

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Hello Chrys O'Shea - Writing again , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this poem is written using only one verse yet the last line is centered only. That really makes it stand out for emphasis.

Theme: The theme is the Little Drummer Boy of Christmas fame.

Flow: I thought that this item flowed well, the grammr and
spelling are correct.

punctuation: the punctuation is correct as well.

tone: the tone is smooth and light.

Title: the title, "I wish I knew your name". is so appropriate for this poem.

Suggestions: I just adored this poem, I found it to be sweet and charming.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4568122

Review of We Have a Shadow

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Rated: E

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Hello CHarris , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed day today. I think your poem touched me in a personal way because my father used to call me his shadow. Every time I here the word I think of him and smile. Your poem was well written and I did like it. I am a bit early on this anniversary wish for you. Your anniversary is not until the 12. you have been a valuable member for eighteen years. Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4568115

Review of Georgia Smiles

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

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Hello Carol St.Ann 👓 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today. I see that your Anniversary falls on the sixth, you have been a member since 2006, that is fourteen years, wow, that is great. You are a wonderful writer of acrostics, I just slove to read an acrostic poem. I also like to write them.
This one is about your lovely daughter. It tells the reader of this poem that she loves to run around with a smile on her face while she discovers the world around her.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4568019

Review of Seduction In The Snow

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Rated: 18+

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Hello {suser: }, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this morning, I know that this review is a little bit early but I am reviewing for the anniversary party at Writing.com. As this is a special b for the site it's been here now for twenty years. You have been with us since September 17, 2002. Wow! you have been a valuable member of writing.com for eighteen years.
I just got finished reading your poem, "Seduction in the Snow," I out laughing so loud that every one in the whole house heard me and wondered what on earth I was doing. You are so funny, I just love to laugh and you never fail to get a giggle from me when I read your funny poetry.
You are so talented, You should be pleased with yourself because it is not an easy thing to write something that is funny. It is a difficult task but you are good at it.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4567998

Review of ONCE UPON A TIME...

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Rated: E

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Hello bibi , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this morning, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today.
You share an anniversary with writing.com, you have been a member of the writing.com family since September 2, 2011, eight years. The title of your piece, "Once Upon A Time," is a very appropriate and creative one. Because you are writing a poem but it tells a story. This is a poem about how the pandemic has affected you and how it makes you feel. I thought you wrote an excellent piece of poetry.
I gave you five stars, however, I did see one small mistake.

But now death is I all see

you transposed the words I and all. It should read:

But now death is all I see.

This is just a small mistake so I overlooked it and gave you five stars anyway.
I did like it and I think you worked hard on it.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4567989

Review of Horehound Candy

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Rated: E

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Hello Carl Papa Palmer , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day today.
You share an anniversary with writing.com, you have been a valuable member of the
writing.com family since September 2, 2008, that's twelve years. You've got me beat.
Your poem was very touching, I really enjoyed reading it. The titlek, "Horehound Candy", is appropriate for the item. I love to reminisce about the past, I was my father's shadow, I recall he used to buy me an ice cream from Baskin Robbins, I loved going there with the whole family after we ate at Bananza every Sunday. Memories are what keep me going. I could not live if I didn't have such warm memories of my family and the time we spent together, I love the way you ended your poem with a tear. I thought that it was very appropriate.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4567981

Review of God Isn't a Genie

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Rated: E

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Hello Candie101 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this morning, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today.
You have been a member of the writing.com family since September 2, 2007, you share an anniversary with writing.com. I just loved this item! You did a great service for God by creating a safe place where someone, who don't yet know God, can come to learn and pray and to take the Lord as there Savior. You prayed that prayer with them. may God bless you for doing this. there are so many people who don't know God yet and who need Him in there life so bad. I don't see how people function without the Lord our God on their side. it is an important message to let people know all they have to do is call on His name and ask Him into their hearts. That was the best thing I ever did. because I have known so many troubles, He was with me during them to help me through them.

Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4567959

Review of Le Voyage Magnifique

for entry "We're All In This Together"

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Rated: 18+

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Title: Le Voyage Magnifique (We're All In This Together)

Author: Dave

First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a very well written poem Dave, I liked it and I can recall when you taught this form to me. The repetition makes it hard for the poem to make sense but yours is really good, f course.
the story value was excellent and I liked the subject. You are my first entry of thge month and you entered a good one.

Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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#4567752

Review of Ladybug Beach

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Rated: E

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Hello Itchybarn , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this afternoon, I see you share the same anniversary with the writing,com site, which is twenty years old today, I see that you have been a valuable member of the site's staff since the tenth of September 2018.
I also love ladybugs and where I live there are so many of them you can't count them.
They cover the ceiling of my porch in the fall. It is a sight to see.
I thought the title of your poem, "Ladybug Beach," was very appropriate for the piece. I also thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader.
You created this piece of writing using five quatrains or five stanzas with four lines each. I felt like this was a tremendously adorable little poem. You did a fantastic job creating this piece of writing. I just loved it.
thank you for sharing this item with me, I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4567747

Review of To my universe

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Rated: E

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Hello Ama , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary which you share with our wonderful site writing.com. It is twenty years old this week and you have been a valuable member of this blessed site since September 1, 2019, this is your very first one year anniversary. I am glad to spend it with you. Your poem was well written and very understandable I believe. You should write this poem to God, The Father, instead of a universe which can neither hear you nor help you. God in His wisdom will listen with love and will care about you and your problems. God can heal those who have wronged you as well. it is important that you know God is not the universe... We are created in the image of God, not a universe. so I plea with you to give your prayers to our Father God. He is glorious and worthy.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4567634

Review of "WHY I CAME"

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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: the item was structured using only six lines.

Theme: The theme is about our loving Father, God, and His Son Jesus Christ.

Flow: The item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were correct.

punctuation: the punctuation is correct I believe.

tone: the tone is loving

Title: the title, "Why I Came" is so appropriate for thid item.

Suggestions: The following are the mistakes you made, I will rewrite your item with corrections marked.

came from the father who sent me to teach and tell of his

commandments for the will of men.

Why I came to save men from sin to

eternal life from this earthly life.

I came to tell that I love all the father give me to

learn of me his son eternally. JESUS CHRIST.

Father and all other mentions of God, such as; He, Him, His, should all be in capital letters.
also Son, should be capitalized because it refers to Jesus Christ.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4567031

Review of Evolution of Love 2

for entry "Missing Father"

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Rated: 13+

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Title: Evelution of Love 2 (Missing Fathers)

Author: sinbad

Type: Poetry

Reviewed by: Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. this was a nice little piece of writing. The grammar and punctuation were correct. I thought the story was good as well.
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Suggestions: I am not sure which (sun/son) you are speaking in the first couple of lines, I believe you mean sun that comes up in the morning. if so you are correct, if you mean son, your child, then it is spelled wrong.

Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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#4566921

Review of Tortoises

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Rated: E

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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is a haiku which is a 5/7/5 syllable poem

Theme: tortoies

Flow: the poem flowed the best it could in the few syllables there are.

punctuation: there is no punctuation in a Haiku

tone: educational

Title: tortoises is an appropriate title for this poem.

Suggestions: I thought this was a good Haiku poem. good work,

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4566918

Review of Meeting the Challenge

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Rated: E

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Hello {suser:nfdarbe }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure:

Form: Tri-fall - created by Jan Turner. Has 3 stanzas with 6 lines each. It has a rhyme scheme of a,b,c,a,b,c and the meter of stanzas are 6/3/8, 6/3/8. It needs little or no punctuation and can use any subject matter

Theme: meeting challenges of life

Flow: the item flowed well, had a subtle rhyme the grammar and spelling were correct.

punctuation: the punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

Title: the title, "Meeting the challenge" is appropriate for the item.
I thought you did a very fine job creating this poem.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4566913

Review of In All Our Endeavours We Do Seek

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Rated: E

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Hello 💙 Carly: poems & novel , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: Form: Kyrielle – which is written in tetrameter with a rhyming pattern of a. a. b. B..... c. c. b. B... etc
Each quatrain finishes with the same line, phrase or word (Refrain).

Theme: our endeavors in life.

Flow: I thought this item flowed very well and I enjoyed reading it,

punctuation: the punctuation is correct as is the grammar.

tone: hopeful

Title: The title is the refrain as well, "In all our endeavours we do seek."

Suggestions: I thought you did a fantastic job creating this poem,

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4566774

Review of Amilcar Unleashed

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Rated: E

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Title: Amilcar Unleashed

Author: Beholden

Type: Poetry

Reviewed by: Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a really good story poem.
the story value was very interesting. I could understand Amilcar.

Suggestions: this was unrhymed, though a few lines did rhyme.
I enjoyed reading it and I am glad you entered it into my contest. the grammar, spelling, and punctuation were all correct.

Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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#4566551

Review of Revenge of Squirrels

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)

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Title: Revenge of Squirrels

Author: provinces

Type: poetry

Reviewed by: Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was very creative and I truly enjoyed it. I liked the story value of the poem, it was exactly what I want when I think of a story poem.

Suggestions: I thought the grammar, spelling, and punctuation were good.
I am only sorry that it is read-only and I can't score it. but no where it stands, lol!

Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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#4566298

Review of Rolling Through Intersections

for entry "Invalid Entry"

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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)

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Title: Ant ithetical Jottings by RenownPoet (Sunrise Event)

Author: Brian K Compton

Type: Poetry

Reviewed by: Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This poem was really something, I really enjoyed reading it and I can tell you worked hard on it.
This was an inspired piece of writing. The title was very good and appropriate.

Suggestions: I thought the word choices were good and the grammar, spelling, and punctuation were all okay as well.

Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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#4566274

Review of at the party

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Rated: E

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Hello Rhyssa , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is structured using one long verse or stanza

Theme: This is a poem about hitting a pinata with a stick.

Flow: I thought the poem flowed well from the beginning until the end.

punctuation: The punctuation seems to be correct as does the grammar, and spelling.

tone: the tone is fun and like having a party

Title: the title of the poem, "At the Party," should probably be capitalized. but it is appropriate for the item.

Suggestions: just capitalize the title and the rest is good.

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Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4566273

Review of Fools

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Rated: E

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Hello Dark Fox , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: This item was written using one long verse.

Theme: Love is in the air and people lose their sense of reasoning.

Flow: The item flowed well from beginning to end.

punctuation: you did not choose to use it in this item.

Title: The title of this item, "Fools," is appropriate for the item.

Suggestions: in the item description the word is "loses" not losses.
I thought this was a good attempt at writing poetry.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe

"The Contest Challenge"

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#4566271

Review of Visions of Uluru

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!

This review is from Lisa Noe

Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: structured using seven lines of writing.

Theme: The theme of the poem is about the Chambedrlains

Flow: it flowed from beginning to end with rhymes a/a,b/b etc.

punctuation: the punctuation looks correct to me.

Title: The title, "Visions of Uluru" is appropriate for the item.

Suggestions: I am afraid that I could not follow or understand this poem. perhaps it is just me, but I don't get what it is about.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe

"The Contest Challenge"

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4566268

Review of the lose of a loved one

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!

This review is from Lisa Noe

Hello {suser:(peanut2365}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: This item was only a few lines of writing. it was endearing.

Theme: The loss of a loved one

Flow: the item flowed well without rhyme or rhythm.

punctuation: I am not well in the punctuation, so I'll just say I think it was correct, nothing stood out as being wrong.

tone: the tone of this item was sad.

Title: The title, "The lose of a loved one " is incorrect, it should be said as: The Loss of a Loved One", and it should be capitalized.
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Suggestions: I would redo the title as I showed you above.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe

"The Contest Challenge"

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4565841

Review of Fishing and Wishing

Review by Lisa Noe

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A Story Poem Contest

THIS IS A REVIEW FROM A Story Poem Contest, IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!

Title: Fishing and Wishing

Author: Mastiff
Type: Poetry

Reviewed by: Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a very creative and imaginative type of poem. I really liked it and think you did a fine job with it.

Suggestions: I saw no mistakes, the spelling and grammar were just fine and punctuation as well. I thought the story was interestingly funny.

Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

Lisa Ann Noe
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