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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Smitten with a kitten

*Poseyp*Author: Brenpoet Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was a beautiful and touching little poem. it was just precious. I love cats and I know that both dogs ansd cats can fill a void when we are so upset or sad. They are great, my Dog, Chewy, saved my life from depression. I thought this was a wonderful story and I am happy that you all found each other.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I thought the title was simple and sweet. I saw no mistakes of any kind.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Solace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Still Iam Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you have created a very nice piece of straight verse poetry.

*Butterfly2r* Theme:This was about what you were thinking of when you
wrote this item.

*Moon* Flow: I did think that your writing flowed writing flowed well, you also had good spelling and what seemed to be proper grammar.


*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was good or I think it was I am not well versed in punctuation rules. but I think it is okay not to use it when writing poetry.

*Sun* tone:the tone seemed even

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Solace",, was appropriate for the item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jay O'Toole Author Icon, I am your reviewer of this piece this evening, my name isLisa Noe Author Icon. I thought that this was poignant beautiful and patriotic.
I loved it. As one who sacrificed her father for our glorious country, I commend you on writing this item. I thank you for sharing this item and tell you to keep- writin g and I'll keep reading and God Bless You.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dark Fox Author Icon, I am your reviewer this evening my name is Lisa Noe Author Icon.
Your poem is a well-written piece of literature. I liked reading it I know that I will never let my feelings be fake or untrue. I only saw one mistake I believe.

After all true love can only be felt onse

in the above sentence, I think you mean once. not onse.
I thank you for sharing this item with me and I will keep reading and you should keep writing. God Bless You.

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Review of One Evening  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Vanishing Vapor Author Icon, I am your reviewer this evening, Lisa Noe Author Icon.
I guess you'd better rush off and put on some clothes since these measly aliens caught you in the buff! *Shock2* Your little poem was really well written and had a good rhythm and rhyme. I really liked it. I am glad that you are going to warn us all...You keep writing and I'll keep reading, Thank you for sharing this item with me, God Bless You.



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Review of Allegiance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon, I am your reviewer this evening, _Lisa Noe Author Icon.
I thought that this was a richly fantastic piece of writing. I loved it.
It is so patriotic and pays homage to our Veterans and the History of our Nation's Pledge of Allegiance. I am proud to be an American and I can tell that you are equally proud of our great Heritage. Thank you for sharing this item with me, God Bless you .



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Review of Mustang  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
hello QueenNormaJean AKA Marilyn M. Author Icon, I am your reviewer this evening, Lisa Noe Author Icon.
I found this little story to be quite amusing. It was surely imaginative and unique.
I think it is an awfully surprising turn of events. The title is appropriate for the item and the item description tells us that this was written for the Dialogue 500 contest.
I do hope that you won or at least placed in the contest. God Bless You.


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Review of The Cricket Choir  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This is a new form of poetry to me, I have never heard of it before and you taught me a new one, called an verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: sounds and sights of the summer

*Moon* Flow: I thought that it flowed well

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone is nice

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "The cricket choir," is both unique and appropriate
*Dragonflyp* Image:for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was well written and I liked it *Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Review of Matrix of Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Claude H. A. Simpson Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured using five stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is to honor our Lord and Savior

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed very well

The grammar and spelling is all good

*Sun* tone: the tone is honorable

*Strawberry* Title: The title," Matrix of Life," is appropriate for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I love and honor God so much and I think that this is a wonderful poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Rhyssa Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today.
I think that this -poem which is about your flower garden really has a lot of your thoughts throughout it.
The rain is terrible to knock the petals off of the flowers when it rains really hard. My favorite flowers are Hydrangeas, roses, and peony.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Blanket of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Bernie Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today.
I thought this was a well-witten and poetic style of writing and I really loved the
title and thought it was so appropriate for the item. I also think that the item description was very helpful to the reader.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello {suser:(falguni}, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this beautiful afternoon,
I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today , You have been a valuable member of weiring.com since August 16, 2006. I am so glad that you are here with us.
I am sorry that in your life you have had mishaps with females that has caused you not to trust any of us. We aren't all bad. but if something bad gave you this thoughts and feelings I can understand that, I was robbed recently and I know what it is like to lose trust in some people, Your writing is gkood and I did not see any misspelled words or poor grammar.. I thought that the title of your poem is appropriate and I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in the future
I am giving you four stars because though it is not perfect it is very good.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Winnie Kay Author Icon, II do wo hope that you have a blessed day today,you have been a valuable member of writing.com since August 16, 2009. That is elven years that we have had the pleasure of your presence. I enjoyed reading your limerick, I always like to read limericks, they are fun. I think that you did a really good job using the alliteration in the poem. This was a really good piece of comedy and It is not easy to write comedy so I commend you on that. I think you should by all means keep writing and creating fun stuff for us to read.
Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Write-fully Loti Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this beautiful afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today. You have been a valuable member of writing,com since August 27, 2002, that is about eighteen years, wow what milestone, I loved your poem, entitled
"Autumn", I thought that it was just beautiful and I see that you used all of the senses in creating this piece of writing. I just love the autumn or fall,
it signifies a birth of a new season bringing with it the beauty of snow.
Many people do not like the snow but I think it is beautiful cascading down from the sky. I personally love the color of the fall, it is so beautiful with the red, orange, yellow, and rust. I think the Sugar Maple trees are the prettiest.
I did not see anything wrong with your writing. it was great. Thank
you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Life's too short  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello RigbysRoads Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful morning, I do so hope that you will have a wonderfully blessed morning today. You have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since August 2, 2007, which is about fourteen years ago. We are so glad to have you as a family member. You know, you are correct, life is too short, which makes this a perfect title for your poem. I think far too often we tend to dwell on the negative aspects of our lives and overlook that which is positive in our lives. I think that the item description that you wrote is very helpful to the reader of this poetry...
nowadays there does tend to be a whole lot of negative in the world, what with the virus and all, I do hope that you and all of your family and friends are safe from that terrible thing.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you writing and I'll keep reading G. od Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Parents  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello cheshire Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning, I do so hope that you are having a very fine and blessed morning.
I just adored your little poem, "Parents," as it was so wonderfully written and sweet.. I know what you are trying to say, as my father is no longer here for me.
Although he was always there for me when he was alive, My mom is still living and you had better believe that she is always here for me. It never fails , if I need her she is always by my side.
she is my very best friend in the whole world and when my father was alive, he was my best friend too. He used to call me his shadow because I would follow him every where that he would go. I thought your poem was precious and I hope that you have a close relationship to your parents as I did with mine. The title is perfect.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*
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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello ruwth Author Icon, Thanks for entering A Story Poem Contest this month. I know the feeling, I remember when I used to work at the radio station, I made money but I worked all of the time and could never spend it.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: your story was very well written and I am glad you decided at the last minute to enter the contest. The title was good and the story was relatable I thought.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Cynic In Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You have structured this item using three stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is love and it's effect on us

*Moon* Flow: I thought that it flowed v ery well and the grammar and spellin g were also correct

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is very sweet and smooth

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Cynic in Love," is appropriate"


*StarfishB* Suggestions: As usual your writing is very well done.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: The Journey of Azmaroth
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*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is a difficult poem to read as all of the names are difficult to pronounce. I do think it is very imaginative and very creative as well. I think the uniqueness helped add s bit of mystique to the story.
The title is appropriate for the item, and the item description is helpful to the reader.


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did find that the names tended to throw me a bit, but not enough to take away from the wonderful writing.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
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Review of Darryl I Am  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured following Book one, Genesis of the Bible.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I love cats, but I don't know about comparing a cat to God.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seems correct to me.

*Sun* tone: The poem flowed well and it appeared to be light-hearted.

*Strawberry* Title: The toitle, " Darryl I am," is appropriate for the itemk.



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thought this was imaginative and quite different.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Hello {suser:(a.karpouzos}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using one verse or paragraph

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the language of the universe

*Moon* Flow: I felt as if this item was a little broken because many words were missing for some reason.

.e:exclaim} punctuation: The punctuation seems correct top me.


*Strawberry* Title: the title, "TO THE END OF THE WORLD:ALEXIS KARPOUZOS,"
is very appropriate for the item, I understand the all caps represents the danger of the world ending. I don't think you really need toi write your name in the title.
If I were you, I would read the poem aloud and then make corrections by adding miaaing words.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing with me. God Bless You.


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Hello TheBusmanPoet Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using a sestet or six stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: People who insulate themselves with Complacency and Apathy from the seriousness of things.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this item flowed well from beginning to end.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seems to be correct to me.


*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Stay Shocked or Lose it All," is appropriate for this item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions:I thought that this item was very profound and excellent.
you did a good job expressing your feelings on the subject.


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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure is not one that I am familiar with.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The world in a dropp of wayter

*Moon* Flow: the pioem fkiowed well

*Exclaim* punctuation: you chose to not use punctuation in writing this item.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "O Water," is very appropriate for the item

*Dragonflyp* Image:*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did have a little hard time trying to decide what this poem is all about.


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Hello {suser:cybergirl01 }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day. I found a few things wrong with your story. It made it very hard to understand, I think you really need some punctuation.
I have your words in red and corrections in blue:


*Think* So detective what do you have therethere's a bit of blood andthere's also two shell casings from what looks to be a magnum 45 good work lieutenant Yuki you must be commended for your evidence finding skills will send this blood sample off to the lab to see if we can find the suspect the four criminals still two bags full of rice from the pot rice store the cook-off is now canceled because these ingrates call section Chief go to now we must learn how bad this is just a we you'll find these criminals last week yojimbo's soy and chopstick supermarket lost shot lost $2,000 💴💴🤔how could that be there was nothing on the cameras now this with the rice pot rice being taken for the cook-off in Osaka prefecture.

In line one, you don't need the word there two times right next to each other.
you also need a space between and, and there's I think a period after
45 is also needed. and capitalize Good. a comma after Yuki.
a period after skills and capital will. a period after suspect, capitalize the
add the word have after still . there are just so many spaces where you need punctuation and skipped words to make it make sense. Just go back over it and write it adding punctuation.



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Hello Noah E. Johnson Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure of this item is in a written in verses or stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme:

*Moon* Flow: the theme of the item is "Love Hurts".

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is good to the best of my knowledge


*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Walking Away", is very appropriate for this poem and I think it tells a lot about what is in your mind as a writer.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I really have no suggestions for you at this time.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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