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Citrus

A cinquiano about a citrus fruit

The Assistants

The Assistants are "taking over the world" and the MC isn't having it.

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He lives to garden. Merit Badge Magic assignment (July 2025).

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Anti-anarhisticki

Kriticka analiza na vestackata inteligencija.

strange feeling

talkin about strange feeling how the person is feeling when people betrayed her

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I wrote this poem a few years ago about how my childhood was like. Like it or not,

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#4571737

Review of Closing in

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Rated: E

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Hello Amber , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure:
this item was structured using long verse

Theme: Feeling as if the walls are closing in on you.

Flow: I thought that the item flowed well with good grammar and spelling

punctuation: There was no punctuation used in this poem, which is okay.

tone: the tone is sort of depressed

Title: Thetitle, "Closing IN" , is appropriate for the item.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4571592

Review of L'albergo Rigoletto

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Hello Odessa Molinari , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: a few lines of writing,, to describe a beautiful location.

Theme: The Travelog for Bard's Hall

Flow: the item flowed well and it sounded like a dreamy albeit expensive place to visit.

punctuation: the punctuation was correct.

tone: the tone was prideful
Title: The title"L'albergo Rigoletto," is a good title for this item.

Suggestions: It really sounds as if you are advertising for the place, which there is nothing wrong with that, We like what we like.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
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#4571387

Review of Bonnie and Clyde

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Elaine Pitts , You requested that I give you a review of this item, "Bonnie and Clyde", I thought it was well written,

Theme: it is about ti ill-fated
lovers, who robbed and killed together. A pair who were infamous.

Flow: The item flowed well and it had good grammar and spelling.

punctuation: the punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge.

tone: the tone was loving and smooth

Title: The title, "Bonnie and Clyde," is predictable but works well with this item. I thought you did a fantastic job and I would like to tell you if you like to write story poems like this one you could enter
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Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4571357

Review of Rolling Through Intersections

for entry "Invalid Entry"

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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)

A Story Poem Contest

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Title: Antithetical Jottings by RenownPoet/ House akuve abd a snoopy moon

Author: Brian K Compton

Type: Poetry

Reviewed by: Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought, as usual, you entered a really good read. I enjoyed your little poem and I thought the story value was good and clear. It was a nice and comfortable feel to it,

Suggestions: I thought the grammar and spelling were okay and it was well rounded.

Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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#4571289

Review of Evolution of Love 2

for entry "Puns of the Year"

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Rated: 13+

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Hello sinbad, I came across this item on the newsfeed page and thought it was so true and so funny. You came up with some really good ones. I can't really say which pun I liked the best I did like the one about the alcohol on your hands and your liver. it was pretty funny. I know that I have washed my hands so much that they look like a dries old raisin or something.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4570768

Review of Miracle of the Meek-Keepers

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Rated: E

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Hello webtoot, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is structured using ten stanzas

Theme: meek-keepers' miracle

Flow: the item flowed well and had good spelling and grammar.

punctuation: the punctuation looked correct to me.

tone: outstanding

Title: The title, "Miracle of the Meek-keepers," is appropriate for the item.

Suggestions: There were no mistakes that I could find. You did a very nice job creating this item.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570764

Review of Nearly An Angel

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Rated: E

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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: You structured this item using six stanzas.

Theme: the theme is the love you have for your daughter.

Flow: I thought this item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were both good.

punctuation: the punctuation is okay as well.

tone: the tone is very loving.

Title: the title, "Nearly an Angel," is appropriate for this item.

Suggestions: This item was very
well written and I enjoyed reading it.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570647

Review of Mary had a little lamb

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Rated: E

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Title: Mary Had a little lamb

Author: weisblaize

Type: poetry

Reviewed by: Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. Hey I also entered that Mary had a little lamb contest, that was a lot of fun. It was hard coming up with something dark to say. I liked your poem it kept to the prompt well. And it also followed all the rules.
Suggestions: I did see a couple of tiny mistakes... first:

And told it all her woo,

it should read "...and told it all her woes
The next two I don't know if they are errors or if you are just purposely misspelling the words for some reason. Jezus' is Jesus and non is Nun. but all in all, you did a really good job.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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#4570482

Review of Bind, Explore, Distract.

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Rated: E

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Hello Laurie Razor , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is structured using only three lines , like a Haiku.

Theme: It had a hard tune to understand.
. "Blind, Explore, Distraacr
Flow: there was no flow to it.

punctuation: there was no punctuation.

Title: the title, the title was appropriate fir this poem
I would not use these colors it makes it hard to read I think.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
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#4570448

Review of Only Now a Tiara

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Rated: E

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Hello Don Two , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: This is a sonnet of fourteen lines only one verse long.

Theme: Finding something precious after ten years.

Flow: I thought that this poem flowed very well, I enjoyed reading it and the grammar and spelling were good.

punctuation: to the best of my knowledge the punctuation is correct.

tone: loving is the tone.

Title: The title, "Only Now a Tiara," is appropriate for this poem.

Suggestions: I thought this sonnet was well written and good.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570446

Review of An American Idiocy: Tender and Sweet

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Rated: E

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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you have structured this item using seven quatrains

Theme:A worthwhile day in American History- spending spree

Flow: Your poem flowed well, with good rhyme, and rhythm. The grammar and spelling were both up to par.

punctuation: the punctuation was good.

Title: The title, "An American Idiocy: Tender and Sweet", I believe the title is a bit long, I think I might leave off the ":Tender and Sweet" part.

Suggestions: just try to shorten the title a bit, otherwise this is an excellent poem.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570445

Review of What If?

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Rated: E

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Hello Sum1 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: your poem is structured using six stanzas. aabbccdd etc.

Theme: the theme is what if things were different would we have love.

Flow: I thought that your item flowed really well, the rhyme was good, and the grammar and spelling were also good.

punctuation: The punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

tone: the tone is inquizitive.

Title: the title, "What If?, " is perfect and appropriate for the piece.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions because I did not see any mistakes.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570254

Review of DARE + DOUBLE-DARE = FIRE (self-review)

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Rated: E

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Hello kimbro1, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: The structure of this review is just perfect, it is easy to read and it is complete.

ThemeL this is a self-review of Dare+Double-Dare= Fire.

Flow: This really doesn't count in a review of this sort.

punctuation: Used properly, as was spelling, and grammar
I thought that this was a thorough and good review. I did think that the title was a little bit longer and makes you stumble when reading.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570242

Review of Dirty Laundry

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Rated: E

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Hello Hera , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: written using only one verse.

Theme: the theme is dirty laundry

Flow: I thought that the item flowed well and the grammar was correct as was the spelling.

punctuation: The punctuation is also correct to the best of my knowledge.

tone: subtle.

Title: the title, "Dirty Laundry", is appropriate for this item.

Suggestions: I thought this was a well-written piece of poetry, I know that it is some form, but I can't recall which one it is.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570035

Review of Broken heart

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Rated: E

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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: This piece of poetry is structured using three quatrains and a couplet.

Theme: The theme is that your wife left you with a broken heart.

Flow: I thought that the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were correct.

punctuation: I guess the punctuation is correct, I am not much at that.

tone: the tone is sad

Title: The title, "Broken Heart," is appropriate for the item.

Suggestions: This is a sad poem and I wish you well, I hope you find a new person who will treat you well, as you deserve to be treated.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570032

Review of Love Holds Many Truths

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Rated: E

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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: You have created this poem using eight quatrains...

Theme: The theme of this poem is love
and how we treasure it.

Flow: I thought the item flowed really well and the grammar and spelling were both correct.

punctuation: The punctuation was equally correct I believe.
tone:

Title: The title, "Love holds many Truths," is appropriate for this item..

Suggestions: I thought this was a well-written piece of poetry.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570026

Review of You Never Walk Alone

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Rated: E

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Hello Aubrey's Play , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: You created two stanzas in this poem.

Theme: The theme is that we are never alone.

Flow: ought that the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were good.

punctuation: You chose with this poem not to use puctuation, which is okay.

tone: the tone is soft and even.
Title: The title, " You Never Walk Alone," is appropriate for this item.

Suggestions: I thought you did a good job creating this little poem.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4570022

Review of Dear Old Santa

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Rated: E

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Hello Jatog the Green , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is a villanelle, one of the few poetry forms I recognize at first sight, with the repeatin g lines.

Theme: The theme of this item is Santa in the street to meet the kids.

Flow: I thought the poem flowed very well and the grammar and spelling were all good.

punctuation: the punctuation seemed correct as well.

tone: the tone was upbeat

Title: the title, "Dear Old Santa," was appropriate for the item.

Image: the little Santa image was cool.

Suggestions: I thought this was a well put together poem, I really enjoyed reading it.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4569392

Review of Muse on Steroids

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Rated: E

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Hello Fyn , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

n, Theme: the theme of this item was poetry
the grammar and punctuation, spelling were all good. the language is very descriptive
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing

it kind of made me feel , the way you described it in such terms.
You seem to have a lot of talent and it shows well. I liked your poem, even if it was kind of gross. I guess it is to each his own ...

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4569368

Review of Halloween

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

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Hello D.B. , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item was structured using just one small verse.

Theme: The theme of this well-written poem is Halloween

Flow: I thought the item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were perfect.

tone: the tone was smooth

Title: nthe title, "Halloween," is appropriate for the item.

Suggestions: You made me feel as if I were out on Halloween night good work showing and not telling about the sights and sounds of Halloween.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4568903

Review of They Come

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Rated: E

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Hello No Sox with Sandals }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is structured using one verse.

Theme: this poem is about the Reaper coming.

Flow: I thought your poem flowed well and had proper grammar and good spelling.

punctuation: The punctuation was not used in this poem, which is just fine.

tone: the tone is anxious

Title: The title of this poem, "They Come," is an appropriate title for the piece.

Suggestions: I didn't see any mistakes, This is a good poem.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4568900

Review of Writing.Com Party Central 2024!

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

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Party Central is a place where you can go to find some trinkets and to find a lot of merit badges and is a fun place where you can find contests. and new things. There are plenty of games and contests. there you can find a day by day schedule for fun. I think this was a perfect idea to have such a place for us to go, I just love this site!

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#4568426

Review of Me and only me

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hello {suser:(elexislafay}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do hope that you are having a blessed day.
This item, "Me and only me," is a very well written piece of poetry. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it shows that you take pride in yourself and have confidence in yourself... You are not cocky just have a good dose of self-esteem.
that is a great way to be. Me, I am just the opposite, I feel no matter what I do I can never measure up in anything. Your writing is excellent and I think you should be pleased with that.

Suggestions: the only suggestion I have is in the item description you need to capitalize the pronoun I.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe

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#4568411

Review of Junk Yard

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: Senryu a Japanese poetry form of 5, 7, 5 syllables concerned with human nature.

Theme: The memories that cars hide

Flow: this item does not flow it is so short. but that is what it is supposed to be.

punctuation: The punctuation is not needed in this form

tone: reminiscent of the past

Title: The title, "Junk Yard," is appropriate for this poem.

Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and I loved your poem. I have an antique car, we take it to car shows, My husband and I have won countless trophies and plaques with the car. It is a '71 Duster.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe

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#4568401

Review of The letter X symbolizes the Unknown

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!

This review is from Lisa Noe

Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope you are having a blessed day.

Structure: Archimedes’ Poem) is a 6-line poem that uses the important mathematical constants of Pi = 3.14286. Each line’s word count correlates to the number of pi. There is no rhyme or meter requirement. So the Poem according to Archimedes is built up in this way:

Theme: The Theme of the poem is about the Human Soul and the letter X, which refers to the unknown.

Flow: the item really didn't have a chance to flow it is brief.

punctuation: The punctuation, grammar and spelling were all used correctly in this poem.

Title: The title, "The letter X symbolizes the Unknown,"

Suggestions: This is, as usual, a well written piece and properly displayed on the page.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe

"The Contest Challenge"

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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