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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)



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Hello Shinobigirl Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the item is structured using only a very few lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: criminal masterminds trying to steal the rice shrine

*Moon* Flow: I am afraid that, due to the lack of punctuation, the item felt broken.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I feel as if you left out all of the punctuation and it really affected the entire poem.

*Sun* tone: it was broken and it makes me wonder if English is your second language.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, is illegible.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: Go back and use punctuation in the poem and see if it might not read more smoothly.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Jay O'Toole Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
Anniversary today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today.
I thought your poem was very honorable to our blessed Veterans. I love our veterans, my father was one before he passed away. He spent his whole life in the military protecting and fighting for our beloved country. I thank you for paying tribute to all of our vets.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this story poem was just awesome. I really loved it, it reminds me of my father and me and my husband also watch Gun Smoke and Wells Fargo every day. I just love the old western television shows and I love Clint Eastwood too. t few don't, am I right?
This is an excellent example of a story poem and I can only say that I don't have enough stars to give you.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Le Voyage Mdagnifique

*Poseyp*Author: Dave Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry
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e:poseyp}First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I like what you did with this poem, however, I am not crazy about the form, there is too much repetition in it to suit me. I do think you did well with this form though. I think it is just a matter of personal preference is all.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: if you did the poem using a different form I would love it. because I know what you are saying and I like it then again who am I to tell you what form to use. I guess we all have personal preferences. since I like what you are saying and I see that you said it in the correct way for this format I'm giving you five stars.
*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Poseyp*Title: He whispered in her ear

*Poseyp*Author: turtlemoon-dohi Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. oh what a lovely little poem.
it tells the sweet story of a grandpa and his darling granddaughter and the tiny lady bug which was really a real one and not a painting. this was an adorable idea for a story poem. good work! *Thumbsup*

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*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of The Mountains  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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anniversary this lovely evening, I do so hope that you have had a w0nderfully blessed anniversary this day. Tomorrow is Independence Day in The United States, I hope you have a double celebration. This poem is about Mountains, I live in the mountains of Appalachia and I just love them.
They are beautiful and there are all of the perks of wildlife like blossoms and animals. I can't say enough great things about the mountains. Your title, "The Mountains," is appropriate for the item. This poetry is called a chain Haiku,

there are four Haiku connected together to create this on-chain. It is all about the mountains, and wildlife and it touches on the sounds and color of the hills.
The item description tells the reader a little bit about what the poem is.
It makes it helpful to the reader of the poem. You have don e an excellent job.
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thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Sweet Sixteen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Gasper Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary This late evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. tomorrow is Independence day so Happy Independence day as well.
The title of your poem, "Sweet Sixteen," is very appropriate as it is the age of which your sister lost her life. I think that the item description is helpful to the reader of this poem, and helps them to understand what the poem is about. If it does not then the Author's note should help to explain about your sister having an aneurysm and brain cancer her whole life. I think that this is a very sad story indeed. You tell a very sad story about your sister's last day on earth. I bet it is a very hard thing for you and your entire family to have to deal with. I will pray for you all tonight as I am sure this is hard on you. I saw a couple of little mistakes with your work.

plaining to any god that would listen that yes, she was sick but look how much she was worth.

God should always be capitalized, and so should the pronoun I, in referring to one's self.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Poseyp*Title: Antithetical Jottings (heat index)

*Poseyp*Author: Brian K Compton Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was an amusing little tale. I recall my cousin did the same thing as that little girl did back in the day, in the 1980s. She got in trouble by the Sisters who ran the school.
I personally was very shy and would be way too embarrassed to do that.
I think the title was very clever and for a young man that must have been a treat!


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I didn't really see any mistakes with this item, I thought that it is well written,

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Our New Birth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Stallion Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this beautiful morning love, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed day today. I thought that this essay or whatever type of writing it is
it is very well written. I thought it was a great subject matter for us to explore. I never thought of us as being angry as little babies coming into the world for the first time, I never really n to think about it before either. When a baby is first born it is a swat on the bottom for it as the first interaction with humanity. So it learns about violence and anger right off. I think you are correct the baby has been safe and protected by its mother's stomach. When it comes out into the world it knows fear and anger to have to leave it's safety. Then it is immediately hit on the bottom. Lord what a poor little babe.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Eliot Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This beautiful morning, I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
I read your little poem two times to really get the full meaning and feeling of it.
I thought that the title that you gave it, " Hitchhiker," was very appropriate for the item, as that is what the whole entire poem was about, hitchhiking.
I see you have won a pretty yellow ribbon for writing this item, congratulations on that. I thought that what you wrote for the item description was very helpful to the reader of this poem. it tells the reader that the narrator is impoverished and has no independence as far as travel goes. I think the last line was, to me, the most telling of all of them. as it made me see that your destination was really up to the driver of the car you got a ride with. You are dependent on them.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello ivesixer, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed and good day today.
I thought that this was an awesome song or set of lyrics. I really do think you chose correctly when you entitled the item, I really do believe that it is a good title, "Proper Condemnation," is an appropriate name for the item.
I also think you did a super job creating the item description, I think that it tells well what the poem is going to be about to the reader. You created this piece of writing using three verses and then a repetition of the refrain. I think that you did a great job creating this song. I am curious to what it would sound like if someone sang it out loud to us. Myself I have never been any good at writing lyrics or songs of any kind. I can't even think of a subject to write about lol.
"thank you for sharing this item with me I your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Jesus  Open in new Window.
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Hello Stallion Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning. I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
I so much loved your poem, it is a beautiful tribute to our Lord Jesus Christ, my master and King. Our beautiful savior, you have given credit in a wonderful way I think. Your title, "Jesus", is just perfect and so very appropriate for this item,
I think you have written a great item description describing what the poem will be about, it is very helpful to the reader of the item. The poem has a terrific rhythm, it actually sounds more like song lyrics, with all the repetition, which I personally thought helped the sound of the poetry. I also thought that the poem flowed so very well from the first word to the last. I am a Christian and it makes me proud to see a fellow Christian write something which Honors Jesus so much.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Don Two Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
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*Think* Structure: this item is structure using just one verse,

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme Cabin Fever

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and the grammar was good as was the spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is good as far as I can tell,

*Sun* tone: anxious

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "In this House with Fever", is appropriate especially since the Virus is running rapidly.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think you did a great job creating this and I think we can all relate to it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello T.L.Finch Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: created using four quatrains

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Apparitions showing up on the river's edge.


*Moon* Flow: the poem flowed well and had good rhythm and a good story.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I will let other's tell you about the punctuation as I am not well versed on it.

*Sun* tone: spooky

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Apparitions", is appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this was a well-written piece I like it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Hello A.M Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This structure is a very different one, it contains:
one septet,, one tercet, one couplet and one single line.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This is about one person wearing two hats as Mom and Dad.


*Moon* Flow: This item flows well and I bet it was hard to create the broken English.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: exhausting

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " Both Roles", this is appropriate for this item.

*Dragonflyp* Image:*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with any of your work.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Tim Chiu Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: created using ten
stanzas of various number of lines... quatrains, tercets, and couplets.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Opposing the second lockdown

*Moon* Flow: This poem flowed well, but I found it a bit difficult to understand and follow well. It may be just my fault but I had difficulty with this one.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct as far as I could tell, I am not that well versed in this area, so you might get someone else with this.

*Sun* tone: I have a difficult time discerning this.

e:strawberry} Title: The title,"The Calendar's Asymmetry: A Road Taken,"
This title is a bit long also.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: You usually write such good poetry and this one is good as well, However I am having difficulty with it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Hello amrighter, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

{e:t{e:Butterfly2r} Theme:hink} Structure: this poem is structured using
three quatrains and one tercet.

*Moon* Flow: This item flows very well, it has good grammar and spelling, and I think you put a lot of effort into it.
*Sun* tone: comfortable tone.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Alone In the Silence ReWrite", I think I would have said: Alone in the Silence, A rewrite.
I added the comma and the word A and lowercase rewrite.
but that's just me, You do what suits you best.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I read both poems and I liked the rewrite best. it shows more effort I thought. The theme of this item was silence and being alone.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Don Two Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured with six quatrains, which equals twenty-four lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: glitter explodes and looks like a disco ball

*Moon* Flow: this item flowed well with a good rhythm the spelling and vocabulary were also well done.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seems to be correct as well.

*Sun* tone: the tone is smooth

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Prism Pat," is very appropriate for this item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envisio0n the glitter exploding everywhere.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a well-written poem and I did not see any outstanding mistakes in it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Don Two Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This poem is structured using only two stanzas of a various number of lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: what goes on on Halloween

*Moon* Flow: the poem flows well and uses strange vocabulary.

*Exclaim* grammar, spelling: the spelling and grammar seem to be correct.

*Sun* tone: eery, "

*Dragonflyp* Title: The title, " Hallow Feign", is a play on words and is creative. it is Halloween.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a well done Halloween item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello netty, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: just written in a verse very simple and plain

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Speaking of God

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well with a good rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: punctuation was lightly used but correct.

*Sun* tone: loving and strong

*Strawberry* Title: thetitle of this poem, "When I Speak of HIM", I like how you honor our God by putting HIM in all caps. it shows great respect on your part.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I do have a suggestion for you, I think that all of the pronouns which refer to God should be capitalized.
like He, His, and Him. just as God should always be and Lord, and so on. I thought that this was a beautifully written and respectful piece of literature, I loved it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Beholden Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured in one long verse or stanza of
twenty lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: a poem of love and the one who got away, spoiler alert it wasn't the girl.

*Moon* Flow: this poem flowed very well and had a nice rhythm. you used good grammar as well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to the best of my knowledge the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: romantic

*Strawberry* Title: The title of this item, "The One that Got Away", is very appropriate and tells what the poem will be about.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I saw a misspelled word:


my last defence,

The word is spelled defense.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (3.5)



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Hello DoXx, The Renegade Monkey Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured using five stanzas of various lengths.
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*Butterfly2r* Theme: knowing what path to choose.

*Moon* Flow: this poem is a little broken up, it seems it could read more smoothly.
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*Exclaim* punctuation: You really do need to use some punctuation with this particular poem. it may stop the confusion and make it a little smoother,

*Sun* tone: confused

*Strawberry* Title: "Paths" is the title and I think it is a really good title and very appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I saw a few mistakes which you really should fix.

Is there anything to even loose anymore
In the above sentence, the correct word is lose...
not loose...


That right now just seems to bright

In the above sentence the correct word is too not to

I think this shows that you really put a lot of effort in writing this poem, and the subject is a good one, and you follow it well just go back and read it out loud and then you will see that you need to make a few changes. Take my advice and make the changes I suggested and be sure to use proper punctuation, it will make a big difference. You keep trying this was an excellent attempt.

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing your writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this was eight quatrains and it is thirty two lines of totally memorable and amusing quality writing.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: getting a little older and recalling how the times have changed..

*Moon* Flow: I thought that your poem flowed well, it also had a good rhythm, I thought it was a very well put together poem.

*Exclaim* punctuation: Your poetry had good punctuation that appeared to be used correctly the best I could tell.

*Sun* tone: the tone was light and fun.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Memory's Winding Road," Is perfect for the item and very appropriate.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I should have known this was your poem before I saw the name, because it has your type of light humor and cleverness about it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Review of Two Lives  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Poseyp*Title: Two lives

*Poseyp*Author: rl Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. What a lovely and beautiful love story. I found it to be so very romantic. This is a long courtship and marriage.
That is fabulous and surprising in this day and age. you got married the year I was born. I love the story value of this story-poem.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I can't really give you any suggestions for improvement, I thought it was a nicely written story-poem, and so sweet.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of L'aura del Campo  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Anaconda

*Poseyp*Author: Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is a very creative piece of poetry. I thought that the story value was excellent and the poetry was a cinquain.
I like that you used your imagination, although I have always loathed snakes. You did a fine job creating a wonderful story poem.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes, the spelling and grammar were both great and I believe the punctuation was equally okay.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

dog gone baby pup

Lisa Ann Noe
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