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Review of World  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Finn O'Flaherty Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a [very happy account
anniversary on this cold snowy winters day, I do so hope you are having a very blessed day today. I thought that your poem was a little on the odd side, it wasn't bad it was just very different and hard to comprehend. it is like you intentionately are try to stump the reader. I really don't get the poem...
but it is your taste that matters and I do so hope that you enjoyed writing it, that is the real point of writing is that it makes you feel good about what you write and it helps you get your feelings down on the paper or screen. Your idea is a good one for you and that is important I did not dislike your piece oif writing, I just don't really understand it mthat weoll. I bet others would get a lot out of your writing to each his own and your writinmg is important.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Daddy Ziok Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this cold
snowy morning, I do hooe you are having a blessed day today. This was a particularly bearutiful piece of writing, I think you really do have good talent for writing poetry. I have read other of your writings and I just loved them, especially the poem entitled "Jesus", it was wanderful. This one is also very nice.
Do you share your writings with your family? you really should as they are beautiful. This particular one had a good rhythm, which is very important to me.
It alsoi has a good rhyme scheme. This item is very well written and it has good grammar as well as good spellibng.. You chose to use punctuation with this piece of poetry and it seems to all be correct to the best of my knowledge.
You should be very pleased with this item, as it is great.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Her Father's Face  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Cubby ~ Gone Campin' Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I like the way you wrote this item using just a couple of wordds per line, I thought it made it very easy to read.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: reminiscing about her father at his death.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this item flowed very well and had good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: there was ni punctuation which is okay in poetry,

*Sun* tone: the tone came off as loving.

*Strawberry* Title: The title,"Her Fathers Face", is appropriate and very good.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a lovely job creating this item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello G. B. Williams Author Icon, I came across this item in the read and review item list, I thought it was of major importace and wanted to share it with anyone who would listen. it is a powerful and important piece of writing.

Flow: I thought that the item flowed well and it has good grammar and spelling

*Exclaim* punctuation: I also thought the punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: informational

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Lean not to Your own Understanding" is very clear and perfect for this item.
I so much want to share this iytem with others I think it is important and poiwerful
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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of The Human Species  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Dr Gonzo Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured using about five quatrains

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I the theme is mankind bringing forth the end of the world through pollution and global warming which man-caused
*Moon* Flow:

*Exclaim* punctuation: there is none

*Sun* tone: the tone is tragic.

*rawberry* Title: the title, "The Human Species," is appropriate and good.


*StarfishB* Suggest: there are no mistakes that I see.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Reaching Out A Hand To God

*Poseyp*Author: oldmonty

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is the most beautiful and poignant piece of writing I have read. I just love this. your rhyme and rhythm are perfect and the story factor is also very good.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: There are no mistakes with this fantastic piece of writing, I only wish I could have created something so lovely.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: ghosts of old fears

*Poseyp*Author: Redtowrite Author Icon

e:poseyp}Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering.

this was a beautifully written wpiece of writing. I truly enjoyed reading it and I could really see the story as it came to life for me. I can really identify with the work in the coal mines as my brother-in-law is a miner. it is back-breaking work,

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I saw no problems with your entry, it was just lovely,

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Demon Came to Our House

*Poseyp*Author: Words Whirling 'Round Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. Wow what a story and told so poetically as well, You did have a story to tell.
This was an unusual story poem and I really liked it, it woke me up from a nap so to speak. I wasn't expecting one like this.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I thought you did a great job and I loved the rhythm the poem has.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of You Are My Only  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Crissy~Baby! Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: structured as a letter in paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: a letter to Jesus showing your faith and alegience


*Moon* Flow: the letter flowed well with good grammar and spelling.


*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct i guess.

*Sun* tone: the tone was deep and loving

*Strawberry* Title: the title was "You are My Only", which was appropriate for the tone of the letter.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I just adored your letter as I am quite sure Jesus loved it as well. You know He knows this because He knows our thoughts and feelings. I just love when people write in Honor of The Heavenly Father and His Son.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of Troubadour  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Troubadour

*Poseyp*Author: Dave Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering.


*Poseyp*Suggestions: This is one of the best story poems that you have entered, I really enjoyed reading this poem of tercets with a good rhyme and a nice rhythm, I really liked this item. I don't think I have read this one before. thanks for the joy.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello Elby Wordsmith Author Icon ,you ask me to review thhis item and I am complying with your wishes, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure is six stanzas of various lengths.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: upon your death


*Moon* Flow: the flow was really good and I think you used good grammar and also good spelling. this was a good rhyming poem, which I really liked very much.


*Sun* punctuation: the punctuation was not in use in this poem , which is fine in poetry.

*Strawberry* Title: the titlek, "The Day That I Die", which you wrote entirely in all capital letters puts emphasis on the idea.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a profound and well-written piece of writing. you can be proud of this one.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello Elby Wordsmith Author Icon , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure was one paragraph, and I will have to say you put a lot of living in one paragraph, and I liked the way you did this.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this prose, is what I would call it, is your life in short form.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well, with good grammar and spelling it was prose I would categorize it as not a novel, but it told a story sort of like a story poem.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to the best of my knowledge, the punctuation was okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone was light.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "The Greatest Novel Never written", was a play on words which I found amusing since it was not a novel but more like poetry or prose.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see anything wrong with this item and I will have to say it is the kind of story I like to read, short, and straight to the point.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of i've binned it  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello sambob Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this item of poetry using about five stanzas

five*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this poem ios a variety of thoughts.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well with good grammar and good spelling. I enjoyed reading this item.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the puncturation was as good as it could be, I thought
you really don't have to have punctuation in poetry.:

*Dragonflyp* title: The title, "I've brinned it", is a strange title and I really don't get it.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think I would write a new title for this item, it is very important to have a good title.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Cappucine Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this item using around six stanzas of various lengths.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: a picnic in the park

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well with good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct

*Sun* tone: the tone is fun

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "The bad shared sandwich", is appropriate for the item


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a very descriptive poem, which is good for poetry.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of FATE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Fate

*Poseyp*Author: sinbad

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a very powerful piece of writing. it was awesome anbd unique. I think you really worked hard and tried hard to create a mega poem. You did a lovely job, however, there were several errors where a comma was desperately needed but it was missing. it really makes a huge difference as to the reading of the poem. I love that you tried to create an epic story poem, but the commas make such a huge difference in the way the item is read.
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*Poseyp*Suggestions: go back and read the poem out loud yourself and see where the commas belong. I am sorry to only give you four stars because I can tell you really tried hard.


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Review of She  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Krazy Daze Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary, you have been a member of the writing.com family since Nove3mber 7, 2003, that is seventeen years, wow you are about to hit a mil3tone in a few more years. I liked this poem it was powerful and well written. \
the rhyme was good and so was the rhyth. You show a nice bit of talent for writing poetry. I really did like this piece, you did a nice job creating it.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of I am God  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello BXC Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this crisp refreshing autumn
day. I loved your writing, I uc]st confess I began reading it with a chip on my shoulder getting ready to tell you how wrong you were for your statement of Being God. But I was wrong, you do see the problems the way the Lord sees them. there is not just fun and glory in being all-powerful, with all the love you also have all of the problems of the world,
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Homelessness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Kellie Saberhagen Author Icon, I would like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary on this beautiful crisp autumn day. You have been a valuable member of '
The writing.com family. You have been a member since November 4, 2013 which is seven years. I for one am glad you are a member of our writing group.]
The title of your poetry is "Homelessness
, sadly this is a terrible problem in the world I do think we could all pull together and stomp out this terrible problem in the world. Your title, "Homelessness" is appropriate for this poem. The item description is helpful and I think the writing is very good it is describing a problem that is very important.
Thank you for bringing this to the forefront with this writing that explores this subject.
His mother probably wiped his snotty nose
and taught him proper etiquette.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I want to thank you for sharing this wonderful story with me. my grandfather was stationed in France and England He got two purple hearts and a silver star. I am proud of him. I am so impressed by your story. This was a perfect day to tell a story about a former Pesident.. What would he think of what we are going through in this country and the world? Let's pray good prayers for this country.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: This was a beautifully written story poem, I hope to see you again in December with an entry,.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Form  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Blake Author Icon, I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this crisp gorgeous day. You have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since November 3, 2016 which is four years. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today. I think your writing is good, but you have me stumped, I am going nutty trying to figure out what you are talking about. The form looks good to me, believe you need a different title, the title is one of the most important parts of the poem, so is the item description. The two of these items let the reader decide whether or not they want to continue on reading what you have written. I would certainly suggest to you to create a nice title, one that says something about the poem. You seemed to use good grammar and the spelling is correct, I think all of the elements are correct with your poem, but you do need a decent title for your poem.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello Liama Author Icon, I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this crisp and glorious afternoon today. I hope you are having a blessed day today. You have been a dedicated and valuable member of thew writing.com family since November 3, 2012, that is eight special years that we have been blessed with your presence, I just loved this very well written piece of endearing poetry. I thought it was very sad, but it was also very deep ane powerful. I liked the title, "Sad", It just said it all. It was appropriate for this item and it was simplistic. I thought the format which you chose to create this item was well chosen. you structured this item using six couplets, which really did well by making each line stand out, I thought none of the importance of the message was lost, This was a highly emotionally charged piece of writing.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of The Joy of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello tyler Author Icon, I would like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary This crisp and wonderful afternoon, I see that you have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since November 3, 2010, which is ten sweet years.
I am so glad that you are a member because it means I can read your wonderful writing. I love the autumn and this poem really did do the season justice.
You show a lot of talent for writing and creating poetry, I enjoyed reading this item. The title, "The Joy of Autumn", is very good and also very appropriate for the poem that you wrote. You created this piece of poetry with four stanzas of various lengths. You used good grammar and spelling and I didn't see any mistakes with the punctuation either. You put this item in a nice format and the whole poem is well-rounded, and well written.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You *Heart*

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Hello Mister E Author Icon, I would like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this crisp and beautiful autumn morning, You have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since November 3, 2009. We are lucky to have you as a part of this writing community. I enjoyed reading your little poem about a lost childhood, that is something I miss terribly, as I was blessed with wonderful people in my life always. And back when I was a child in the '70s and 80's we knew how to play, I didn't have all these smartphones and computers and such. the only technical thing I had was a record player. We knew how to have fun like children are supposed to. we made up our own games and played simple things and we did have a hell of a good time. kids today do not know how to play. They need computers and phones and such.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*
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Hello riarna, I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary , This crisp autumn morning. You have been a member of the writing.com family since November 3, 2007, That is thirteen wonderful years. It is great to have a wonderful writer such as yourself with us. This item was simply just beautiful, it was meaningful and thoughtful. I felt it in my soul that you meant these words and it was not just a mindless piece of drivel, This piece of writing means something to you and it shines through. I liked the title, "Hero" it is simple but powerful as well.
You structured this item by using four stanzas of various lengths. It was a special message that comes across with your words. it is touching and the person you are talking to knows that you mean business with what you are saying to them, I just loved it. Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello Quick-Quill Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured in paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is a pitch for a story a murder mystery with possible mob ties.

*Moon* Flow:ethi item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were good. I would certainly ask to hear mire uf U were the publisher receiving ths item.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is exciting


*StarfishB* Suggestions: this is a story that sounds just fascinating. I usually don't like to read short stories, I usually stick with poetry,, but this really sounds like a great read.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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