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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Master Om Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using around nine stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This is a poem about the Masonic view of life.


*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well with good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

hythn is *Strawberry* Title: the title, "The Perfect Ashlar" is appropriat for the analagy made in this poem.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I will have to say, the best lines of the entire poem were the last two:

Leaving behind in the hearts of our Brothers,
the tools to teach, lead and love others.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello flyfishercacher Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured by using the paragraph format.

a*Butterfly2r* Theme: a gold miner looks for gold and dinner and gets the surprise of his life.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the sentences flowed so well with each other. and the grammar and spelling were good,


*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: light-hearted and flowing

*Strawberry* Title: The title, Do Donkeys Talk Before Pigs Fly?", was so creative and funny. It was cute I liked it.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a well written piece 0f work I really enjoyed reading it I guess it was like "the goose that laid the golden egg."


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of Ink and Graphite  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Joto-Kai Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using only three stanzas


*Moon* Flow: the flow was really good and the grammar and spelling were also good,
The theme of the item is regret and inspiration.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct



*Strawberry* Title: the title "ink and graphite is appropriate and good.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a good and creative piece of writing


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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iew is from Lisa Noe Author Icon*Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Francis R. Jewel Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using only one line.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This was a quote, not a poem or anything

*Moon* Flow: the one line had no flow as it was just one line.


*Exclaim* punctuation:the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: memorable

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Quotes and Words of Wisdom, I find it odd that you wrote the title in all capital letters, It does put emphasis on it though.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I liked the quote I thought it was just great.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of Untitled  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Francis R. Jewel Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using only four lines of very few words.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is the awakening of the weary traveler, that is in your words, I hate to admit it, but I really didn't understand it very well.

*Moon* Flow: It really has no flow as it is far too brief.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the ouynctuataion is correct.

*Sun* tone: I am not too sure about the tone.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "India", is good but you need a capital I to start the word

*StarfishB* Suggestions: It is on me that I don't understand your poem.. I am sorry.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of The Tiger  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)


I am reviewing in the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" " Ghostly Hallows Raid."
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Chris Breva Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You did a really good job creatin g this piece for the twisted Poetry contest ack in July of 2015, I see you won Honorable mention. congratualaions, this is a well-written piece of work. I always enjoy reading your writing, this is not the first item of tours that I have read and it is always good.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!



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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)


I am reviewing in the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" " Ghostly Hallows Raid."
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Tim Chiu Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Understanding is so very important in everything.
The item's title , Praise and Support", is not only appropriate for this item it is creative. The item description is also very helpful to the reader of this item.
You always write such interesting and good works of art.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!



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Review of The Offering  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)


I am reviewing in the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" " Ghostly Hallows Raid."
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think that your writing is excellent and I like the fact that you give the reader a special note at the end of your site, thanking them for reading your item. That is a special touch, I think. Your title was good and appropriate for the item.
You tell the reader that the poem is a septolet and give the definition for the item below it. You get extra points in my book for including everything.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe.


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Review of Faking Emotions  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello {suser:(tattsnteeth2} I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I am supposed to choose Halloween themed items, but if you see me with my laugh lines you would think that it was a Halloween mask. lol, I am just joking, this time of the year brings out the crazy in me. your item was really a tale all about people who hide their feelings. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me, You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!



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Review of Eccedentesiast  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)


I am reviewing in the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" " Ghostly Hallows Raid."
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Julia Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is the wisest piece of advice I have ever heard, honey are you right!
You better know
that happiness starts from within and then penetrates outward.
You can be happy alone if you have to, but then again I don't want to have to. I love my husband, and he is part of me so that makes me happy lol.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!



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Review of I Am A Cornfield  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)


I am reviewing in the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" " Ghostly Hallows Raid."
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello leeflan Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I believe that this is a well-written piece of literature. I enjoyed reading this item. Your title, I am a Cornfield" is cute and appropriate. You seem to have a lot of talent for writing poetry. The item description is good and helpful, I love reading about something to which I can relate, like seeing the corn along the highway.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!i=

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)


I am reviewing in the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" " Ghostly Hallows Raid."
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Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this item is well written and there is no punctuation which is okay, it has sixteen lines and uses alliteration not just in the title but also in the poem. I thought the title was appropriate and the item descro[topnm is helpful. This was a very creative piece of writing.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!



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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)


I am reviewing in the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" " Ghostly Hallows Raid."
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Don Two Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I see that you have written a fairly beautiful piece of poetry for us for the autumn
you have a creative flair to your writing and I truly enjoyed reading it.
The title of your item was very creative and appropriate for the item. The item description was equally helpful for the item. you did a very good job with this item.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!





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Review of Autumn Ebbing  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)


I am reviewing in the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" " Ghostly Hallows Raid."
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Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Words Whirling 'Round Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was about seven stanzas of well written inspirational poetry which used all of the senses to describe the wonderful feeluings and beauty of autumn or fall.
I think you did a fantastic job creating this work. The title is appropriate and original and the item description is appropriate as well.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless .
And Have Fun and stay safe!



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Review of Vampire Voodoo  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Vampire Voodoo

*Poseyp*Author: Dave Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering.
I liked the entry you chose for Halloween it is spooky and exotic. I enjoyed it and it really helped to make my contest well rounded.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes you did a great job and I really appreciate your talent which is great.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest I really enjoyed reading your Halloween entry, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of SPOOKS NIGHT OUT  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Poseyp*Title: Spooks Night Out

*Poseyp*Author: oldmonty

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was just fantastic, I read it to my mother and she said it was really very good and liked it very much. I liked the title and the rhyme scheme.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I thought the grammar and spelling were both excellent.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You! stay safe,

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Crissy~Baby! Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the item is structured using four stanzas.


*Butterfly2r* Theme: Angel And the Lord

*Moon* Flow:
The poem flowed very well and I enjoyed it very much. The grammar and spelling were both very good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was
all in place.

*Sun* tone: The tone of this item is obedient

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Dangerous Angel Deep", is very different but appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: This is a well-written piece of writing. I really liked it and being a Christian, I appreciated it

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of Embers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello T.L.Finch Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using couplets

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is the journey of a life in flaming embers

*Moon* Flow: the flow was great, I thought this was beautifully written using proper grammar and good spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay

*Sun* tone: the tone was smooth and even

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Embers", was appropriate for the item.
what a lovely piece of writing you did a great job.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of One Day at a Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr Gonzo Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: Structured using mainly couplets.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The way we live our lives

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well and the grammar, spelling were good as was the word usage and the examples you set for people.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was normal and okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone was upbeat

*Strawberry* Title: tyhe title, " One Day At A Time", is appropriate for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that these were very good examples of how to live a good life. and I saw no mistakes with your writing, you did very good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Dr Gonzo Author Icon I do so hope you are having a wonderfully blessed day today. I am here to give you a review of your writing, This is a nice piece of work the rhyme and rhythm are great. This is the type of poem I like, it has equally good rhythm and rhyming. The spelling, and grammar were up to par, Everything about this poem is good it is well-rounded. very nice.

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Thank you for sharing this wonderful writing with me, you keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: "Twas the Eve of All Hallows
*Poseyp*Author: Richard ~ Looking for Luck! Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a glorious piece of writing, I really enjoyed it and found it to be fun. I thought the story was excellent and the poetic form was also good. You surprised with the ending, it was amusing, I thought it was going to be the devil showed up or something not Charlie Brown. That just made it by changing the mood of the entire poem. It was good thinking. *Thumbsup*


*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Poseyp*Title: Antithetical Jottings by RenownPoet/ "The Chaise For Shirley"

*Poseyp*Author: Brian K Compton Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a well-done piece of writing.
I think the chaise is what it is all about, isn't it? This was well worth reading and enjoyable. the title is appropriate for the item.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes you did well.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Lisa Ann Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Chérie Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the item is written in paragraph form

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is planting a tree on earth

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well with a simple rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the grsmmsr, spelling and punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is hopeful.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Let's Plant a Tree," is simple and appropriate for the item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your work.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Chérie Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured using four stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is a girl on fire without harm

*Moon* Flow: The item fglowed well and the sentence structure, spelling and grammar were all correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was well placed.

*Sun* tone: the tone is confident.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Girl on Fire", it reminded me of a song by the same name, I thought it was appropriate and good,


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I just loved that song a year or so ago. Your poem was good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello annamc, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this piece of writing using nine lines which most of them contain an internal rhyme or two.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: theme was your thouyght on a horse I believe in the chilly winter weather, I didn't theing the entire theme was really clear.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well with good grammar snd spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct I believe.

*Sun* tone: the tone was also not clear.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Snowy Cold Rain," is appropriate for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a good job but I think you could add a line or two and don't worry so much about the rhn\yming it seems to interfere with the clarity of the poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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