Overall Impressions:
This is good advice for those who only look at the bad things in life. If everyone focused on what is right, instead of what's wrong, all of us would be better off.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this. Write on!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This was so sad and yet so beautiful. I greatly enjoyed reading this piece.
Emotional Impact:
I think a lot of people can relate to this. A lot of people wish they could go back in time to relive certain moments and change the things they did.
Imagery:
You did a great job with the descriptions and visuals.
Flow:
This has excellent flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this! Well done!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This was really fun and funny to read! I never knew what the word hyperbole meant. I had never even heard of the word before, lol.
Flow:
This has excellent flow and meter.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done!
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Overall Impressions:
I enjoyed reading this amusing little short. I have had days like that. I call them "Murphy's Law Days" They suck to say the least.
Narration/Dialogue:
The narration and dialogue were excellent.
Character Comments:
The old milkman creeped me out big time. I am so glad that I live on the third floor of my apartment.
Imagery:
Great job on the descriptions and imagery.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any punctuation, grammatical, or spelling errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done!
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Overall Impressions:
This is a beautifully written poem. I very much enjoyed reading and reviewing this piece. Your words were so well spoken and well-written. I am at awe over this.
Imagery:
You gave beautiful imagery and visuals.
Flow:
This had excellent flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions:
I enjoyed reading this piece. For something so short it says a great deal.
You gave terrific detail and visuals in this short story. I could almost feel the sandpaper, and cool metal, and taste the scrumptious chocolate chip cookies.
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions:
You bring up a really good point. Curse words technically aren't bad, and that they are just perceived as that.
Flow:
I had a hard time reading this piece because of the use of the word 'badness' too many times. The over-use of certain words can affect the quality of an item, unless it's part of a prompt. I would suggest using different words other than 'badness'.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
This is piece with a lot of potential. Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions:
I feel that many people can relate to this story. I have been down that road myself. I am going through it right now.
Emotional Impact:
Reading this made me feel sad. Love and relationships are most definately difficult and hard to understand.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece. Sorry that it took so long to get to your request, I had a lot happen to me in the past few months. Good job on this piece. Keep writing!
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Very unique.
Ciao,
I never knew what the word hyperbole meant. I had never even heard of the word before, lol.
True love is one of the best things on earth. You did a wonderful job on this poem.
