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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
A well told story of Independence Day and the carefree lives of children. I miss those days of being a kid, with all of the beautiful fireworks. Holidays are a lot more fun when we are children. *Smile*

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
You did a great job with the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Imagery/Description:
Excellent job with the imagery and description. Adding the images to this piece made for a nice touch. And the description of the fragrant apple pie was pleasing ti the senses, and yum! *Pthb*

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Great job! I enjoyed reading this piece!

P.S.--You might want to check out my auction again. You've been outbid by Ruby!


*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautifully descriptive short story. *Smile*

*Note* Plot Comments:
Great job on the plot!

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
You did an excellent job on the narrations and dialogue. I could almost hear the man narrating the story.

*Note* Imagery/Description:
Great job on the imagery and description. I could see all of the scenery. You painted a lovely picture in my mind.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Thank you for sharing this! *Smile*


*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
Oooh, I thin this is my most favorite out of the poetry that I reviewed! Very deep and very poetic! *Delight*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and description!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done with the flow and meter of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Excellent work! Keep writing! *Smile*


*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
Another great piece! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Imagery:
Once again, you've done a wonderful job on the imagery and details.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of the piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! You have a unique way of writing. Keep up the great work!


*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a great poem! You are a great poet! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Imagery:
You gave great imagery and description. This was a very emotional piece.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep up the great work!


*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This was a very emotional and sad piece. I have been left feeling that way too. For the past year or so. So, I completely understand where you're coming from.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
This was hard for me to read. I am going through some similar feelings myself.

*Note* Flow/Form:
You did a great job on the flow and form of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! *Bigsmile* You have been gifted 5 reviews courtesy of larsony_1!

*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a very powerful piece, and so true to the world today.

*Note* Imagery:
You did a great job on the imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on a terrific piece! *Delight*


*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a well-written and very dark piece of poetry. I loved it! *Smirk*

*Note* Imagery:
Excellent imagery and great descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words, punctuation, or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on another great piece! *Wink*


*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
I loved this one too! You did a great job with this piece.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the description and imagery.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow and form of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing! *Bigsmile*

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a very haunting, and dark piece.

*Note* Imagery:
As always you did a great job on the imagery and description.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form. Very easy to read through.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Great job! *Smile* Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This was so beautiful, in a dark way! *Smirk*

*Note* Emotional Impact:
This had everything a great poem would have. Love, lust, desire, with a gothic twist.

*Note* Imagery:
You gave excellent imagery and description.

*Note* Flow/Form:
This has great flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Delight* Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
*Laugh* This was cute and yes, it would be rather scary if my computer started talking to me too! I loved it. Very creative and fun to read.

*Note* Plot Comments:
The plot was smooth and stayed together until the very end.

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
Great job on the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Character Comments:
It was rather amusing to see Vulcan and Walker talking through the computer screen.

*Note* Imagery/Description:
Excellent job on the description and visuals.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! As always, I enjoy reading your work. Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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#1134192 by StephBee Author IconMail Icon



*Note* Overall Impressions:
This as an excellent weekly contest! *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
The banner that you have at the top is really cute.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Bigsmile* Good Luck!



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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This was a very interesting and unique story!

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
You did a great job on the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any grammar, punctuation, or misspelled words.

*Note* Favorite Part:
I liked who had the last and final say in this bid.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this fun and entertaining write! Well done!

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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is such a well-written poem about winter. I love winter, when I don't have to drive in it. This had kind of a philosophical feel to it, which I also enjoyed. *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
You gave beautiful imagery, describing winter.

*Note* Flow/Form:
This had such a smooth flow and easy to read.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find errors of any kind.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on a great poem!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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#1134192 by StephBee Author IconMail Icon



*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is an awesome contest! The prizes are more than worth it! *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
Your banner is very sharp and classy.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words, grammatical, or punctuation errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good Luck! Well done! I wish you great success with your contest!


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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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#1134192 by StephBee Author IconMail Icon



*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a great contest! I don't write fantasies, but I love reading them! *Smile* The prize pool is definately worth it!

*Note* Imagery:
The banner at the top is very sharp, I love it!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good Luck! Here is a donation to help with prizes! I hope that this is a success! *Delight*


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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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#1134192 by StephBee Author IconMail Icon



*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a neat little hangout spot that authors/readers are sure to love.

*Note* Imagery:
I love the imagery with the merit badges, product reviews, and links to different places.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good Luck! This looks awesome! I will be back later to rate and review everything individually! Take care! *Smile*



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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a ver beautiful and sad piece. I lost a father back in October 2007, both me and my entire family are still feeling the hurt of losing him. He was only 49 years old. We miss him deeply.

*Note* Imagery:
You gave beautiful imagery and description.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done. May you find peace one day. *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is so sweet. *Smile* How old was she at the time?

*Note* Imagery:
You did a great job with the imagery.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:


*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
Very beautiful! I loved it! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Imagery:
Great job on the imagery and details.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a beautiful and well-versed poem.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and description.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Excellent job on the flow, form, and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on a great piece! *Smile* Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful and unique piece of poetry.

*Note* Imagery:
Very nice imagery and wonderful detail.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on a great read! Keep writing! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful poem written in dedication to your son.

*Note* Imagery:
Great job on the imagery and visuals.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Excellent flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing! *Bigsmile*

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Saved  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
Very beautiful and compelling poem dedicated to your wife! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Imagery:
Nice imagery and description.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Keep writing! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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