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This was a well-written story. I commend you on writing this. I express the same opinions as you do in this piece. Sometimes it's hard to believe that such evil exists in this world. Maybe one day, we won't have to worry anymore. Fighting and violence has been going on since the beginning of time.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done! Thank you again for your request. Sorry about the delay in getting to your item sooner, I had some things happen to me in the last few months. Write on!
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This novel has a lot of potential, and I hope to see more with this.
Plot Comments:
A prologue is a good way to determine the plot for the story, for both the author and the reader alike.
Character Comments:
The names of the characters are very unique for this story, very medieval.
Imagery:
You gave great imagery and description in this.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Good job! Sorry that it took so long for me to get to your request, I had some things I needed to get straightened out. Thank you for y our patience and understanding. Write on!
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I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
A very bright and colorful forum. I really love the banner at the top. Very cool!
The prizes are definately worth it, I would recommend that all members that are into writing fiction or someone who would like to try something new, to give this a shot.
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Well done! I hope that this contest is a great success! Here's a donation for your contest!
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This is a very heartwarming story. I am not much of a dog person either, but when a pooch comes up and hops on my lap, how can I resist?
This is a well written story with great narration.
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done!
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What a cool idea for an add-on story! It looks to be very popular! Seventy-two additions, wow! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. So far this is turning out to be a great story. Well done and Write On!
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"And the moral of the story, ladies and gentlemen......"
This is a great article that you wrote. It's sad that people rely on silly pills and fads only to be disppointed with the end results, whether little or not at all. There is such a thing as eating less and exercise, or just being happy with yourself.
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I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
You were right.....be careful what you wish for, you may get something really bad in return.
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I know how you feel about those types of reviews. I get those every so often. They tick me off to the point where if it's extremely mean and nasty, I won't even return their emails. I have done exactly what you and many others have done. LOL. A review is pointless and has no meaning if they can't state what would make it better, or why they gave you a lower rating. This is well written and you make a very good point. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
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This was a rather humorous piece of writing. I especially enjoyed the part about of the escalator. That was cute. This was well written. I get a bit embarrassed when talking about undergarments. LOL. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
Again, well done on a well-written piece. I have always enjoyed reading your work. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. I enjoyed both the short story and poetry parts. Well done! Keep writing!
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This is a well-written story with a lot of potential. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. You have a great plot here. I will have to check out the rest of this story to gain more insight to this. Well done and keep writing!
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This was so beautiful and so sad at the same time. This was very moving. It must be hard not having your mother around. I know what it's like to lose a parent. I lost my dad back in October. He would've been 50 in July. I treasure all of the moments that I had with him. This was well written and had great flow. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
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This was a very sad and moving poem. As sad as this was, you still delivered some of the most vivid images in this. The poem flowed smoothly and was well-written. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. You did an excellent job! Thank you for sharing this!
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Sorry that it took me so long to get to your review(s). I had some things come up that I needed to take care of. I am very embarrassed for this.
Overall Impressions:
This is so beautiful but seems so tragic.
Emotional Impact:
I can definately relate to this piece. There have been a few paths that I didn't go down, and wish I did. It makes you wonder the all too familiar phrase, "What if.........."
Flow/Form:
This has excellent form and flow.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Suggestions to make the poem better:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Good Luck! Thank you for entering! I hope to see you in round 7! Here's 100 gps for entering! Well done!
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I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the story and how nicely it ended.
I think you're on a role. 
This is very unique. The easter bunny getting into a fight with poor old St. Nick! 
This was a very sad and moving piece. It's a shame that this happens to a lot of people everyday. 
