I loved the presentation of your poem here, it looks great on the page. A lovely, sweet little piece of writing. The title was fitting for the words and lines of this poem. Good structure and good flowing rhythm. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I couldn't agree more with what you wrote out here. I know Christmas has just passed but I did everything your writing stated. It is in the heart and the joy of coming together in family. I liked the effect of your poem here, it was sweet. Good work, be blessed and write on!
This was a lovely little prayer to read through. Prayers always feel good and satisfy the heart and soul. I enjoyed reading this through. A simple message for the reader. Soldiers are a lot braver than we realise, willing to give their lives for freedom. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I was 16 in the mid eighties and I hated all the glam rock genre. I liked the theme of your writing here, it makes a good conversation. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines and I liked the imagery coming from the words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I really liked the imagery that came along with this writing. The words and lines were powerful and special. There was a might feeling over me as I read this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the imagery that came along with this writing. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I liked the woman in the poem, she sounded thrilling and wild. No errors found. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a lovely little story here. There was much freedom in the words and lines. The image of the horse is wonderful and powerful. Nice font used and nice presentation too. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
This was a very different story to what I am used to. Your imagination is wild. I wonder what made you write such a bizzare story? I did enjoy the read through, it was rather gripping. I was hoping the giant girl would put you in her knickers for more fun. A good read, write on!
I enjoyed reading this writing through. The structure was great, the flowing rhythm was great too. I see this was a finalist in the Quills, nice going. A good theme and was well written out and displayed. I couldnt see anything to be adjusted here in this work. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I truly enjoyed this wonderful poem from you here. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. A very creative poem, very rewarding. You have a good writing style here. The imagery was good too. I liked the length of the poem, it keeps the readers attention up high. A classy little piece of writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading your little poem through. I loved the poetic atmosphere here. Good words and lines. I also liked the presentation of the writing, looks inviting on the page. The title was very fitting for the poem. I found no way to improve your work. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked the rhymes in this writing from you. A good length for a poem, keeping the readers attention up high. I also liked the line where you wrote that woman only need the seed for creation of a new world. I thought this line was very inviting to me. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I related very well to this atmospheric writing. I loved every word and line. The title drew me in and matched the writings very well. There are some great lyrical people out there. The depth was great and the meaning was special. I loved it all. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this through. The depth was very good. The length was good too, keeping the readers attention levels up high. I related well to this writing as my sleep is all over the place too. I found no way to improve the writing, it is good the way it is. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was well written out. Good presentation, looks good on the page. The romantic guestures were lovely and promising. Your poetry is as good as the stories you write. I really enjoyed reading this through. A good length for a poem too, keep the readers attention. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a sweet little poem to read through. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. An attractive poem to me. The imagery was good and I found no way to improve the item. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was well written and had a nice flow to it. I related well to this poem. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. A well expressed piece of writing. The length was good, keeping the readers attention up high. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a lovely little story here. I was so pleased the teddy could go back into the girls room. That moment was special and I will never forget it. There was a real beauty to this story. I enjoyed every word and line. A very pleasing tale. Thank you for sharing. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I liked the theme too. The title was simple and matched the writing well. You told the story very well and was enlightening to me. I found this in the random read and review page. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed the theme of this poem from you. There were some great questions and lines in here. The title was very well matched to words and lines. The philosophy was great and highly inspirational. There were no distractions to this work. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this poem through. There was a good tone and feel to the writing. The theme was good and you told a good story here. Fact or fiction it was gripping. Nice presentation with a big red font. There was a romantic harmony about this poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed the orginality of this writing. The idea was great. I liked the flowing lines and rhythm too. A good length for a poem, keeping my attention levels high. The title was fitting for the words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought the theme of this writing was very original. I liked the presentation. There were some nice lines in this work. You raised some good questions here. I enjoyed reading this through. The title was fitting for the words and lines. Great work, be blessed and write on!
I liked this tiny poem from you here. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. The meaning was deep and thought-provoking. I liked the theme. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. A powerful little poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed the rhymes in this piece from you. The poem was very sweet and simple. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. A heart-felt piece of writing to me. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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