A simple little poem here. I liked and enjoyed reading this through. A good theme and interesting too. The title is inviting to me. No errors found and no mistakes. A good read and was rather vivid, mentioning the scent of sick. Ewww. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Nice writing here from you. I liked the theme and biblical tone. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. The title was a good match for the poems details. I found no errors or mistakes. The length of the poem kept the readers attention up high. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked the tone of this writing here, it was very rewarding and noble. I think you spoke for many, many people here in this write. Good presentation, good font used, looks good on the page. The theme was up to date by subject, even in 2025. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Good writing here, I enjoyed every word and line. I liked the romantic power this gave off. A good length for an item, it kept my attention levels up high. You also managed to say a lot in just a few lines. This woman you wrote of sounds a delight to know, fact or fiction. A nice tone for the poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked the message here in this writing. I liked your positive manner and attitude. I wish I could be as cheerful as you sometimes. I always smile when I read your works, you have a very positive philosophy to life. Keep smiling. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Aww.I thought this was so sad and painful to read through. The thought of a lost doggie is awful. I hope the writing was fiction. The picture of the dog was great, made me smile. I liked the presentation and font used. Looks good centred on the page. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was very original by theme. A simple yet effective item to me. I liked the tone of the writing, it was comforting. A glass of wine normally cheers people up. Chocolate is good for comfort food too. I enjoyed the read. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed the tone of this writing here. It seemed a litle sad to me, all the losses. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines, you kept the readers attention with the length of the poem. A good theme to write about and its not often seen here on writing.com. Good work, be blessed and write on!
An interesting read. A man who has never known love is rare, even a crush on someone can feel similar to love, the lust. I think only the weaker man will combine love and hate together. I have known both too but I rarely hate in this life. Hate is a strong word to use. Nobody is perefect and nor will they ever be. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I loved this poem very much, it held great emotions and truth. Your honesty here was amazing, The natural flowing rhythm told me that this flowed from your being very easily. You expressed your hurt very well indeed. I enjoyed every word. Fact or fiction this was a great poem from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I quite liked this quirky little poem from you. I thought it was very sweet and original by theme. I really liked the title and the very last line, it was encaptivating to me. There was a fun feeling over me as I read this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this sweet poem from you. You summed up this time of year so very well. Great presentation, looks good centred on the page. The title was good match for the writing. A well executed item from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Nice presentation and good font used here. I liked the happy flowing lines to your poem here. I enjoyed every word and line. I thought the writing was uplifting to me, describing the season very well indeed. Good title. A well executed piece of writing ... Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a good piece of writing. I related well to what you had written out here. The bond of family can be very powerful, especially that of a mother. Nice presentation, easy to follow and understand. I enjoyed the meaning of this writing. I enjoyed every word and line. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading your writing through here. Nice structure and good flowing rhymes made this a joy to read. Nice romantic power very inviting to me. You are a good little writer. The title was a good match for the poems words and lines. Good subject to write about. Good work be blessed and write on!
Nice writing here from you. I truly enjoyed every word and line. The philosophy was great. The tone was powerful and the essence was strong. A great read to me. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Good presentation and good sized font you used here, looks good on the page. Good rhymes, great flowing words and lines. I related well to what you had written out here. I enjoyed the read very much. No errors found. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought there was a sweetness about this writing from you. I found it on the random read and review page. I liked the writing style used here. The imagery was very good. I enjoyed every word and line. The title was romantic indeed. Nice structure and presentation too. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Jokes to teddy bears? I thought this poem was so very, very cute and sweet. I smiled from ear to ear as I read this through. Perfect tone to the words and lines. The title was fitting for the poem. I loved this poem very much. I am going to award it an awardicom. Great work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this little poem from you. It was very sweetly written. I see I am the first to review it. All three lines were equal in quality and power. A nice tone to the words and lines. The imagery was good too. A chain of this form might be a good idea. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked the manic tone to this writing from you. There was a good philosophical power here. A deep thinkers poem to read through. Nice presentation centered on the page. Your thoughts here were vivid and real, deep and powerful. Good work, interesting, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this poem from you here. I am very comfortable reading your poems in eight lines. This was a great poem to read through. You used the prompt very well. This held good structure and a good tone. I liked the line where you said "Dark clouds they fill the leaden sky" This line reminded me of a line from Pink Floyd's song called "Sorrow". Awesome work, be blessed and write on!
After reading this item of writing through, I thought you are the most positive woman can be. Your heart is your key to this positive existance. Yes, I believe in God and the afterlife. Your sweet heart has for sure bought you a pathway to heaven in years to come. May one day will you be recognised for your positive manner, your hearts respect to others. Nice work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was very sweet to read through. Great flowing rhythm, good rhymes too. A very romantic piece of writing. Written on valentines day too. You expressed yourself very well here, and there is no way to improve the poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this writing through. I thought it was quite good. I liked the philosophy in this work. A good length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. A thinkers piece of work to me. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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