I enjoyed reading your poem through. It was very emotional and powerful. I liked the tone of the words and lines. A good, expressive poem to read. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I liked the opening few lines most. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Wow! A great little poem from you. Short and powerful, saying so much to the reader. A very effective poem here. I enjoyed every word and line. The imagery was great and real. The title was very inviting to me. I enjoyed this work very much. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a great little poem to read through. I loved the wisdom here. Everything you wrote was so true and factual. A good subject and it was enjoyable. I liked how much you said in just a few lines, very smart. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a great little piece of writing. You reminded me of my own youth and younger days very well. Back then we had no worries and everything was fun. I loved the meaning of your poem here. I really enjoyed the read through. Excellent writing, be blessed and write on!
I thought this poem from you was rather good. I enjoyed the read through. Nice descriptive tone to the words and lines. There was good imagery coming from this work. I found no way to improve the writing, it is good. I also liked the length of the poem, it keeps the readers attention levels up high. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this little poem from you. It was very simple yet effective. You managed to tell a frustraiting story in just eight lines. I liked the theme, it was fun. I enjoy all your poetry. The title was fitting for the words and lines. A good read. Great work, be blessed and write on!
I thought your little item here was fantastic to me. I really loved the philosophy here. The funny thing is, what you wrote out was very true and real. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I liked the power of this poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was very deeply written and executed. I did enjoy the story you told. You reminded me of my own childhood, where summer days would feel so good but have to end at some point. The last line was powerful to me. I loved the poetic swagger to this item. You did a fine job here. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a very refreshing little poem. I loved the title, I found it very inspiring. The film is very good. I loved the quote "Build it, and they will come" that line is awesome. A good theme, a positive poem and one I truly enjoyed. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed the powerful tone of this poem. I liked the biblical strength and meaning. Nice presentation, good font used, looks good on the page. I felt a warming sense over me as I read this strong poem through. Nice tone to the words and lines. good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a great piece of writing. I liked the manic depth of dispare here. Your descriptive manner was very expressive indeed. The tone and texture of your writing style here was a blessing to me. I liked the dark, deep tone. A great poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this little item from you, it was rather deep and powerful. I also liked the tone of the whole poem. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. The title was fitting for the writing. Anxiety is becoming very common here in the UK. A good theme. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a great piece of writing. I really liked the expressive depth and tone. You managed to say so much about yourself here. I felt good as I read this through. Fact or fiction this was a real poem and it didn't let me down. I liked the honest title too. Good work, be blessed and write on!
A simple yet effective love poem. Your message was clear to me. A statement of conviction to each other. I liked the romantic tone to the words and lines. The title was inviting to me. There was a reality here with the useage of the lovers name, "Mark". Love never dies, it just moves about inside. Good work, be blessed and write on!
A well written and displayed poem from you. I liked the descriptive manner here. The humdrum of life was evident to me. There was a realistic feel over me as I read this through. A good, original theme for an item. I enjoyed every word and line. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked the positivity here in your writing. Nicely written out and expressed. I liked the title too. The flow was great and I enjoyed every word and line. Nice descriptive words used here and the poetic power was good. I liked the theme. Great work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this little item from you here. It seemed like a good prompt for a story to me. I loved the imagery coming from the words and lines. You set a scene very well. The picture at the bottom was revealing to me. A good, interesting theme for a poem. Great work, be blessed and write on!
Aww. Great writing here, I loved every word and line. Your story telling was perfect. The flow was great, the rhythm was great too. I loved the ride this poem gave me, it was magical, rewarding and mysterious. I would love to visit this place some time. A lovely little read. Great work, be blessed and write on!
There was good imagery from these words and lines. I could just feel the warmth of the suns rays. I liked the length of this poem, it kept the readers attention levels up high. You said so much in just a few lines. I enjoyed the whole poem. Great work, be blessed and write on!
Aww, great imagery from this writing from you. I love how you captured this moment into words. A sweet and simple little item to read through. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. The title says it all and matched the writing very well. A good expressive poem. good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a very expressive poem to read through. It was really good. I enjoyed the emotions, the tone in how you wrote this out. It was revealing to me. I also liked the sentiments here. There was a mysterious feeling over me as I read this out. It is a good item. Nice work, be blessed and write on!
A great little poem here. I loved every word and line. Nicely presented on the page, I liked the font used. I bet you felt supreme as you wrote this poem out. There is an amazing feel when writing about the Lord. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this little story from you here. I liked the ending, I guess Sam spoke too soon. Again, nice font used, looks good on the page. There was good imagery from this item. I like how you can blend a story in just a few lines. This amazes me. Good work, be blessed and write on!
WOW. I thought this poem from you was awesome indeed. It was very musical how the lines came out. A fantastic theme and a lovely tone to the words and lines. I truly enjoyed every part of this poem. I am going to place an awardicom with this writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Aww. I thought this was a sweet little piece of writing. I was gripped to every line. I liked the sense of freedom this item gave me. The length of the poem was very good, it keeps the readers attention high. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Great work, be blessed and write on!
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