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I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
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In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
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I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
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Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
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pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello NayNizzy!

The title of this poem grabbed me, as I love anything Alice In Wonderland. Then I looked at the description and was quite intrigued, so I had to open it up and see what the contents were.

Instantly, this held my attention. I loved the choice of wording. The rhythm was superb.

I do not have a clue if this is what you have intended but after the first stanza, I was totally picturing Alice In Wonderland as she was falling down the hole. Unlike that story, this poem had the hole go even deeper. Like in the second Bill And Ted movie. Sorry, I think in movies a lot. Something I really do not have much control over. *Laugh*

I generally live a stress free life but when I am stressed out, this poem sums it up. You did an amazing job!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello Intuey!

This was a fantastic poem that told about a few ghosts and what they do. It had a really great story with a good rhythm and rhyme. I loved how it got darker towards the end. Especially in the last couple of stanzas.

There is one minor error. You said: "say a prayer to casts the spirits out," It should be cast, not casts.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of In a Daydream  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Mindertwenty!

This was such a clever little, short poem. In such a little amount of space, you have said very well what the mind is. It can take you on many adventures without even getting up or being a certain age.

I liked that it was very short and to the point although I would not have minded one bit if it were any longer.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Sherri's Web page  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sherri!

What a wonderful page that you have here! I love the layout of it and the colors are great. Everything that you said about yourself told me more about you than I've ever known. Perhaps I should have looked in here sooner. I knew nothing about you before. Now I know more than I ever have!

Your grand babies are beautiful, by the way! (As if you had no idea)

Write on!

Jenny





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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello T. Boilerman!

I actually have wondered this very thing at times so I was glad to have stumbled upon this. I personally thought that everybody, or at least more people, were going to say reviewing. I was amazed at all the very diverse answers. Great idea!

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Jenny




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Review of Simba's Dilemma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sum1!

The time has come to judge for the contest: "songs, movies, and more! Oh my!"

This was a terrific poem that fit the required amount of titles in quite nicely. This poem had exceptional rhyming, fantastic rhythm, and it told of a great story. Everything went together so well within this.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Choconut!

Thank you for your entry into "Songs, movies, and more, oh my!" contest!

This was an all around spectacular story. I love that you used more than the required number of titles in the story. It made me smile each time I ran across a title. It all made perfect sense and nothing was out of place or misused.

Then the story itself was just phenomenal! I loved the end where the fairies were all home safe and had a "Nightmare before christmas"!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Alma!

First, I want to tell you how much I loathe those lights! They give me a migraine if I am around them for so long. So, the last year the regular light bulbs were around, I bought some every time I went out. I have a collection of over three hundred of them. My mother gets migraines from the florescent ones as well and she hoarded a little over two hundred of them.

This was pretty well written, telling about the florescent bulbs. I am set for the rest of my life though and will never have those! *Laugh*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Reaching  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello W.D!

This was quite a heartfelt poem and you showed the emotion of the loss of love quite well in this. I was able to feel the strong and powerful emotion.

This poem had great form, exceptional rhyme, and great rhythm.

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Jenny


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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Elizabeth!

This was quite a good thing to read. I benefit from all three as well, although my music is quite different than yours to calm down.

There are a lot of people out there, that are very stressed out and wound up but do not do any of these things. If they did at least one of these three things, like you do, it surely would put their minds at ease.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Autumn!

I must be different from a lot of raters. I have been here for seven years and I have always rated just how I thought it should be. In the past, when I gave a deserving one star with a review, I sent it anonymously. Now though, if I rate low, I do not send the review anonymously. I have never been mean but always constructive. Not everyone would see it that way and one even asked me to change the rating, after NOT correcting it like it should have been at all.


This is quite helpful for those raters and reviewers who are scared of hurting feelings. Like you said, It is far better to rate a truthful low than to rate a not so truthful high, which is more hurtful to their work than helpful.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello LilacorFTW!

This was absolutely hilarious! It reminded me of books I read, which are collections of columns from a newspaper humor columnist. If there was a collection of these in a book, you would totally have my money!

Unlike you, I do not have this problem. I just put on clothes and make sure I look decent, then I go start my day. I have not dealt with pantyhose in a very long time. This reminds me one of the reasons that I stopped dealing with them!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Happy Birthday !  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jyo!

I loved how every stanza talked about a different animal and each animal were doing different things. All of the animals were described very well also.

Then the last stanza was about your friend. Such amazing words and it definitely portrayed how much the friendship means to you. I really hope that she liked this poem as much as I did!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Baby Powder  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Bikerider!

This was quite an amazing poem about your granddaughter that made me smile and warmed my heart when reading this. I really hope that she appreciates this when she is older.

It had a great flow, rhyme, rhythm, and the content was very touching!

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Jenny




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Review of The Terrible Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello GeminiGem!

This was a very well written poem about the passing on of breast cancer through the family.

I am sorry that you have gone through such a thing. I really do hope that you have overcome it. It is more like a curse than a gift though.

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Jenny




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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Joy!

I love to read anything written about wdc because I just love wdc so much!

This poem had great content. However, it needs to be fine tuned to be more of a limerick. A limerick has five lines with the first, second, and last lines all of the same amount of syllables and the middle two lines with a shorter amount of syllables but matching each other.

In the first stanza, you have: 8,9,8,8, and 8 syllables. In the second stanza, the third and fourth lines are perfect with five syllables in each. The only line in that one that doesn't match is the second one that has 9 syllables, where the rest have 8. Then the last stanza has the first, second, and last lines with 8,9, and 8 syllables. The middle to have 8 and 7. So, if you polish up the syllables, wold be happy to re-review this! The content is great, just the syllables don't match up.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Earth's Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Jellyfish!

This poem had terrific imagery. I could see the animals with each description. It had a fantastic flow, rhythm, and rhyme to it.

Most of all, this had such a fantastic message that I wish more people were aware of or cared about. People are destroying earth and many just do not seem to even care.

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Jenny



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Review of Sidewinder  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Sara!

These lyrics had a terrific beat and rhythm to them. This song was different from other song lyrics I have read because it did not have a chorus but in stead, there was the same line repeated at the end of every stanza which I took as the chorus.

Very well done!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Mirror Mirror  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Sue!

This was a really great poem and something a lot of people can relate too. It was very funny, upbeat, and had a great rhythm to it.

The only things I can really relate to so far are bags and the time going y faster than ever. I was born with bags though, so that part is really no big deal. I often say I really should stop laughing so much. I have laugh lines and crow's feet Well, at least ya know I have a good sense of humor!

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Tonibarri!

This was a great sort of inspirational, pick me up poem! I did not personally need a pick me up but I often try to cheer others up by telling them that tomorrow is another day and there is always something good that happens every day. Also that the glass is half full! This poem goes right along with what I tell people.

This is pretty much the same advice I give: Think positive, trust in yourself
When you are feeling low
If in yourself you can believe
Your confidence will grow My advice would sound even better if I rhymed! I'm going to work on that for the next time. I'll be speaking like a Dr. Suess character or something.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of The Last Salute  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Michael!

This was a very sad but amazing and well written poem. Funerals are always sad of course but for some reason, fallen soldiers or veteran funerals tug at my heart strings even more. Even if I have no idea who the person is.

I was able to envision and even hear everything that was going on in this poem.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Lavender  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Bluedog!

I just absolutely loved this poem! It had a terrific flow, great rhyme, and nice rhythm.

My favorite part was: With one eye closed
And the other exposed
Close, so very close
And my eye just explodes This makes me think Edgar Allen Poe was an inspiration. This poem wasn't anything like his poem that I have read, subject wise but definitely rhyme pattern. I could be completely wrong though! *Laugh*

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pens!

This was definitely quite a fun thing to read through and of course participate in. The answers were pretty diverse. I was not expecting to see such a wide variety of answers. I could not come up with a lot. I only said that I would just never worry about needing to renew again.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of The Real Santa  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Luvleepoet!

This was quite a wonderful poem that is a great tribute to your fantastic furry friend, Santa!

I absolutely loved the rhyme and rhythm pattern of this. It was nice and upbeat, just as the contents were.

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Adriana!

As I read this, I was trying to recall when and if this has ever happened to me and as I recall, it has not. Of course though, I have been here for quite a few years so there was probably a time or two that this may have happened. The reviews I get have always matched the rating, from what I recall. Reading this made me think that it happened more than a few times for you. I agree one hundred percent with this!

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Jenny





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