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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
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I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
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In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
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I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
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Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
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pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review of Nature Never Told  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Basillides!

I am usually a very emotionally strong person. Like a rock. Reading this though, was really tough. My eyes started to water. Quite a touching poem and so tragic. I can not even begin to fathom the horrible pain you felt.

Very well written and with lots of emotion.

Write on!

Jenny



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Review of To my mother  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Peggy!

This was a very exceptionally written poem. The flow, rhythm, and rhyme were absolutely flawless.

Perhaps this is why you are such a strong person. Because of this and you had to be.

My favorite part is
"Just know that I am a strong woman
Despite everything I’ve been through
I’m a survivor, never a victim
And I had to do it without you" This stanza is a terrific ending with a sort of positive ending that you are a strong survivor.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Nature Calls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
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Hello Web Witch!

These were just absolutely incredible pictures. My favorite ones are definitely of the peacock because I have only seen them in the zoo. I wish peacocks lived by me! I however, do not wish alligators or crocodiles lied by me. You are brave to take those pictures!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Scorpio!

This was definitely a bittersweet thing to read. So awful for anybody to lose a child but yet so amazing that the child left a part of them on earth to be taken care of by the grandparents. I read your bio and I am pretty sure that this was a true story that happened with you. If so, I am really sorry to read about your daughter. I can not begin to imagine that pain.

There was one minor imperfection with this little piece. When you said He like everyone of them. it should say "liked".

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Bren!

This was a very good article that talked about when love changes between two people or just one person in the relationship. It does not mean that they are not still in love but one person knows that that alone will not make for a fantastic relationship. The brain and the heart want different things and are often not on the same page at all.

Well written article explaining very good advice that a lot of people should follow but many do not.





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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mary Ann!

This was quite an exceptional poem that indeed hit the nail on the head. When we are younger and care free we want to try everything that the world has to offer, good and bad. I know that not everybody indulges in these certain things but sometimes if that is the case, then people are addicted to something like food and various other things that are not so bad for you.

Some grow out of these addictions such as drugs, cigarettes, or drinking as they grow older and realize that it is no good for them. On the other hand, there are people that never grow out of that and experience many health problems

This was very well written and brought up great points. The flow, rhythm and rhymes were good. I only did not get a perfect score because in the description you said that it was a "poem of habilt" I know I do not know every word in the english language, so I looked it up, and was unable to find anything. I think maybe you meant habit. I am only pointing this out to you because I would like someone to do the same with me.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Against Cheating  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Survivor!

Although this was a free verse poem, I really enjoyed the two lines that rhymed each other. I also really like how this poem was written with two lines in every stanza.

The last two lines tied the poem together quite well which said that the person could win but basically feel guilty about it. That's how I took it, anyway. I hope I was not too far off.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of You What?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Hello Lorrie!

This was definitely a very interesting story. Kind of made me cringe to read about what he was hanging by. Very well done!

There were a few errors that I will point out:

This guy seems to be levatating, somehow. The correct spelling is "levitating".

"Are you a crazy? You don kill a you self from hanging you penis and balls, you choke a the neck with the rope! You forgot to put the end quotation mark.

he didn't seem to be nuts, just embaraced. The correct spelling is embarrassed.

Write on!

Jenny



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Review of ODE TO COFFEE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Critic!

Such a funny and wonderful poem. I can completely relate. I do not even want to talk or even look at anybody before my first pot of coffee of the day. I need it to function.

These lines are completely relatable:
"CALL IT WHAT YOU WILL
LATTE, CAPPUCCINO, EXPRESSO, HOUSE BLEND" Although, the word is spelled as espresso. The only unacceptable coffee is decaf. What's the point?

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Victoria!

This was absolutely perfect and completely relatable! A few years ago, I lost some weight. I thought "Yay! New smaller size jeans here I come!" Well.....I thought it was going to be way easier than it was. I like boot cut and normal waist but found none. I only found boot cut and low rise to mid rise. Well, I settled on mid rise but just like you, I constantly am trying to pull them up even though they do not go higher. *Laugh* I am still trying to find the perfect pair but I just gave up for the time being.

Very funny and quite relatable!

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Nanapockets!

This was a pleasurable thing to read. It was an interesting children's poem that actually made me think of the children's song "Ten Little Indians". Only the hot dogs are a tasty food to a lot of children.

The flow was smooth and I did not encounter any type of errors.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Born too soon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Naina!

I had to read this poem because my son was born too soon as well. He was born way before he should have been but is alive and doing well today! I just knew that I would be completely able to relate.

I just absolutely love how you used every letter of the alphabet to start each line. It flowed so smoothly and everything was just perfect!

I really hope that the baby is doing amazingly today!

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Without You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Little Running Stiky!

This was an incredibly short poem and it went straight to the point. It was kind of like saying "ha ha! Look at me now! You thought that I could not do better than you? Well I am!"

I did not give it a rating of 5.0 because I personally would have liked to have seen one more stanza. Just my personal preference.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of On the Bus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Jinx!

This was just hilarious. What an uncomfortable predicament. I am sorry to say but after I read this, I looked up and saw that it was fiction. It would have been even more funny if this was an actual experience you had. I am not just picking on you, it would have been great if it was an experience that I had.

I liked the build up of this and that the very last line was the punch line.

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tim!

This was a remarkable poem and the first two lines definitely hooked me about the thought of the orangutan and that the giraffe was the skeptic.

The flow of this was really smooth. The wording was perfect along with the rhythm and rhyme of it.

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Pony Tale!

This poem had a fantastic rhythm and rhyme. The flow was smooth and flawless. The choice in wording was superb!

I almost asked why there was a banana in the brain but I recall seeing the description. Now it all makes sense!

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Princes Megan Rose!

I absolutely love this poem! Takes place in the '60's which is my favorite time in history (although before my time) and I LOVE pop culture!

The shows you had throughout here were great shows that I happen to catch once in a while on television and have watched my whole life. I LOVED the picture at the bottom as well.

This was very well written and was a far out poem!

Write on!

Jenny



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Review of Early To Rise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Sandy!

This poem was amazing. The flow wa nice and smooth and the rhyming of it was fabulous.

The only thing that was not absolutely perfect with thi i when you had: You have no reason
To act surprise. This would be best if surprise was past tense. I completely understand why you did it that way though. Because that would not have rhymed perfectly as it does now.

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sum1!

This poem was very exceptional! You did everything perfectly in here including the flow, rhythm, fitting the songs in just the right places and who sang what at the bottom. Perfect!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Decomposition  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Erika!

I saw the title and I was definitely interested then I saw the description and I had to read that since I almost donated my body to one of those.

I definitely like the sound of that way more than being stuck in a box for all of eternity. Like you, I too am a bit claustrophobic and I just do not want to be in a box forever. May as well put your body to good use.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review of Ben  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Storymaster!

I really do not ever review just one picture even if I do like it because there's never really much to say about it. This though.....I have a few things to say about:

First of all, I love cats so I had to come look. This picture looks like it is professional. I love the black and white aspect of it. I also really love how Ben is looking in one direction and the cat statue is looking in the opposite direction. I wonder how many attempts that took to capture that particular picture!

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Gaby!

I just absolutely loved this. Probably due to the fact that I LOVE bios and I LOVE lists. Fabulous combination!

Upon reading this it totally sounds like we would get along splendidly. I am totally go with the flow as well. I can imagine it now: You: "I heard that some wildlife expert will have a baby orangutan at the park. What are you doing today?" Me: Going to see a baby orangutan with you!"

I really do not think that you left anything out. If you did, I really have no idea what it could be.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Life as a bully  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Barnaby!

This is an excellent poem that describes why some bullies decide to go that route to seek attention. Not every bully though but maybe the majority of them. I know of a kid that is a bully and picks on every one and his brother is not a bully at all. The parents equally give attention to both, so it is not always the case as the description of this poem states.

Write on!

Jenny




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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Elaine!

This was just a very brilliant piece! I have read quite a few articles here as to what to do when seeking reviews but not with this twist to it. Love it!

When you first have the short language mentioned I knew I was going to love this! I agree with you on that part one hundred percent. It looks awful if it is not in the right full length word. Not long ago I read something of mine that had the symbol for and all throughout along with actual numbers in stead of spelled out. I can not believe I left that but I promptly fixed it.

You sound like a very tough critic. I really love that! As far as meeting all your requirements, I like to think that I meet them but I really am not sure. lol

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Born to Die  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello HWard!

I generally do not look at just the subject matter but to have an objective view about what I am reading and focus on grammar. I will not be doing that this time. I will be focusing on the actual subject.

Upon reading this, I just knew that you are a pessimist. You are a glass is half empty kind of person. Life is what you make of it. I could be wrong but I gathered that you are a teenager. Life will work out for you. Life is what you make of it. Born to die though? No. You are born to grow up, tell stories, be a farmer, an engineer, etc. You are born to be successful in whatever you put your mind to. Sure, as soon as you are born your death clock has started but life is what you make of it. It will get better at some point.

Write on!

Jenny





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