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~ Solace ~ (18+) A couple learns to cope with the emotional scars after a savage beating leaves her deaf #1497336 by Mara ♣ McBain
I was impressed by the characters strength to trust again after enduring something so tragic. The bond that she and Gibb have is strong and stands out in this story. The fact that she is able to move on with her life gives hope to other women who may have been in a similar situation.
Looking at the overall composition of this story I have to say it is perfect. You have included all of the necessary elements to make it a great read. Well done Mara!
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This is awesome! I love the way you emphasized the black and white in this free verse poem. The detailed way in which you describe the photo is great. I could see it as if it were right before me.
Well executed poem with no errors. Great writing my friend.
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This poem is amazing! As I read it, I had to wonder how many times you have been told that your reader could relate to this piece because it reminded them about how they feel toward their spouse/partner.
You give such wonderful detail to everything you describe in this top notch poem. I can see why it was published. It's one of the best I have ever read.
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This poem is a lovely and heart felt tribute to someone you care for a great deal. The bond the the two of you have is clearly evident in this piece. I enjoyed the way you put this acrostic together sharing pieces of both your lives. It is perfect in all aspects. Thank you for sharing your talent with us Kiya.
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I don't think there are words to describe the feelings that I experienced after reading this poem. I cried and my body trembled. It will be a year for me in May that God came to share my house. Since then, my life has changed in ways I never thought possible.
This is the best poem I have ever read. I can't say enough about it. Thank you SO much for sharing it.
I couldn't think of any better words you could have used to describe these unconscious actions of our mind. I don't mind dreaming but nightmares usually result in a panic attack.
I have never tried this style of poem before but it looks fairly easy. Another flawless write my friend.
You descriptive wording in this poem paints a vivid picture for your readers. The vastness of the seas that surround us is mind boggling. I often wonder what mysteries lie in their depths.
You have a good strong poem here. It is easy to read and has great flow. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it with all of us here at WDC.
The Witch in me absolutely loved this poem. I have always been fascinated with magic and voodoo. You have a remarkable writing ability Audra and I am honored to get to review your work.
This poem is superb. I didn't find anything at all wrong with it. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Dark Poet (ASR) What inspires a dark poet... what lives within his mind. #1531808 by 🐺HowlersMoon
Despite the fact that this poem is dark and disturbing I found it quite fascinating. I think we all have a bit of "dark' that dwells within our soul waiting to be unleashed. I know I do.
You did a marvelous job with this poem. It is well written and error free. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Hollowness (E) This is a poem about what I feel about the world we live in. #1523009 by LRbluemoon
There are many hard truths to face in this bold poem. I don't think there are many of us who could deny much of what you write about. I think this poem is a wake up call.
Overall, the form of this poem is fairly standard. There are no errors and it has good flow. Thanks for sharing your opinions with us.
I agree with you whole-heartedly about the charm of this new poetry form. Its fluidity as I read each line is flawless. I also like the way it tells a story to the readers. I didn't see any spelling, grammatical or punctuation errors. Awesome write my friend!
I really felt sorry for the character in this poem. Our first time is supposed to be special; a moment to remember and cherish. For this young girl is was the exact opposite.
I must admit that the desperation the character exudes in this poem is distressing. No one should have to beg to be loved. Love just happens. It not something we can force upon another person. Your character is needy and very insecure.
Looking at the composition of this piece I will say that I don't see any issues with the form and there were no errors found. Good luck in the contest.
This is a great poem that honors St. Patrick. I will say that the bit 'o irish speak in it is hard to get used to. Nevertheless you have given a great tribute to a wonderful saint and provided some history for your readers at the same time. The overall form of the poem is fine, there are no errors but I did find the meter to be off in a few places. This however does not effect the integrity of the piece. Write on!
Wow! If I were able to actually sit down and set a list of goals for myself I might actually get something accomplished. You seem to have everything in order. I'm impressed. I will keep my fingers crossed for you.
Despite the fact that you are a career woman and a mother of two, you seem to be doing a wonderful job with your writing. I took a quick peek through your port and saw that you have a huge collection of short stories. I can hardly wait to read some of them. What I like the most about your work is your attention to detail. I rarely come across an error. That says a great deal about you.
Good luck with this list Steph. I'll be rooting for you.
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Since I will be spending some time in your port I thought I would get to know you a bit first. I find that fact that you are a 911 dispatcher quite exciting. I don't know if I could do it.
You are so fortunate to have been able to see the world the way you have. I have only ever been on a plane once and I was just a year old! Your little guy in the picture is adorable. I can see why you would want to gush. I noticed that Andrew and I share the same birthday. Wish him a good one from me.
Thank you for sharing some of your life with us. I am on to my next review.
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The harsh reality of this poem had me in tears. It is so difficult for me to think about the countless woman who have lost their lives at the hands of someone they loved. I hope your poem reaches out to some of then before it is too late.
I didn't find any issues with the form of this poem and no spelling or grammatical errors were found.
Warmest Best, Damiana
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This is an amazingly vivid poem and you have executed the Pantoum style perfectly. I would like to see you add some punctuation to this piece. The overall flow is great and there were no errors found. Thanks for sharing it. Keep up the good work.
I really enjoyed this poem. I think snakes are fascinating; they feel so cool! I had a 6 foot Boa Constrictor around my neck when I was in my early 20's. What an experience that was.
I didn't see any technical issues in your poem and there were no errors found. Thanks for sharing.
I can't say that I would ever want to know what it was like to be blind by putting glue in my eyes. Closing them and walking around gives us the same sensation. Thank goodness this story is fiction.
Once again, you have good composition in this story and it is error free.
For a flash fiction story this is quite believable. You did a great job bringing your character to life and also that of a dead man. Nice touch!
I didn't see anything wrong with the overall composition of this story. All of the punctuation is correct and I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
I had the feeling something was going to go wrong as soon as Lagrima gave Isaac the potion. If she had only told him her true feelings she wouldn't have succumb to her own poison.
I think you did quite well with this story. Your characters were believable and it had a strong storyline. I didn't see any spelling errors and all of the grammar is fine. Nice write!
I was completely mesmerized by the stunning scene you have described in this story. I was lifted up and swept away right from the beginning. I felt a sense of calm as I read this wonderful story.
In my opinion, the composition of this story is perfect and it is also free from error. Excellent write my friend.
I thoroughly enjoyed this beautiful and eloquent poem. You paint a clear and vivid picture for your readers. There is a strong rhyme scheme present in this poem and it compliments the overall meter. I didn't find any spelling or grammatical errors. Great write fellow poet.
Losing a loved one isn't easy especially when it's a grandparent. Your poem emanates your grief and sadness from her passing. I didn't find any techincally issues with the form of this poem but the meter is rough in a few places. There were no errors found though. I hope time will help you heal. Keep writing too; it's great therapy.
Write On!
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