\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED ITEMS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/christineb/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/3
Review Requests: ON
204 Public Reviews Given
205 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
<   1  2  3  4  5   >
51
51
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting juxtaposition of future and traditional imagery. The appearance of heaven at the end was definitely a surprise🙂
52
52
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sounds like a self fulfilling prophecy- he destroyed the chamber because it was trying to destroy him. Nice work!
53
53
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice work! I like how you found a logical way for them to discover each other’s birthdays. I’m curious what their career field was and how they ended up getting jobs in the Muggle world.
54
54
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love the names - Amelia Bedelia, Buttermilk3 - and the moderator intervention!
55
55
Review of The Angel Number  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Brilliant! I love this. It’s a pleasant twist and includes the numerology without seeming over the top.
56
56
Review of Escape  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great- very realistic, with the ash making the car stop. I like the detail of the grizzly bear bringing up the rear/chasing behind.
57
57
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice work! Remember to put the keywords in bold to qualify for the contest.
58
58
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thoughtful words on the bleakness of the political situation…
You may need to check against the Sept requirements re: need for 4 syllables in the fourth line (in the first stanza) and need for 7 lines (you have 8 in the third stanza).
Have a great day!
59
59
Review of Groceries  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Too true! Nice sept.
60
60
Review of Arlington  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Great poem about the Veterans’ cemetery…
61
61
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very creative short story. It was a pleasure to read about Sanjeev’s idea of giving Santa a new snack.
62
62
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice job, sweet story. I know someone who eats pickle-peanut butter sandwiches…
63
63
Review of A Box of Weeds  Open in new Window.
for entry "The Artist of Bowness" Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great work! I enjoyed your scene of an artist/musician/artisan living his life.
64
64
Review of Shadow Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent story, as always. I like how she got a new name, Blue Jay’s Song, and how disappearing into the night is turned into a blessing instead of something terrible.
65
65
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice imagery of fresh air and rain, and family ties. Great poem. 🙂
66
66
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautiful and unique idea to have that pinch of stardust!
67
67
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fun idea! I would like to worship some spaghetti.
68
68
Review of Solar Eclipse  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very creative response to the contest prompt! I like how you had Alex reading, "Escape the Alien Ship," and it sets up a potential second chapter were the story to continue.
69
69
Review of Gadzooks!  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice word play! Keep up the good work.
70
70
Review of The Caring Soul  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful story.
71
71
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
“We will escape the trap
of the anthropoce“ - love that line.
72
72
Review of Sibyl  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That’s awesome, and I’m inspired to read more about the African Sibyls.
73
73
Review of Spring Day  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That’s a fascinating thought. 🙂
74
74
Review of No More Fireworks  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem, and I agree about the safety and noise factor.
75
75
Review of Story of a Cat  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice descriptive memento of your pet. I like the graphic design at the conclusion too. 🙂
113 Reviews • *Magnify*
Page of 5 • 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/christineb/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/3