Hello Kalixta, I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" and I wanted to read and review this item for our group. I'm afraid to say the meaning escapes me.
I can only assume from the title you are speaking of roaches. This is not the correct syllable count for a Haiku.
I believe the Haiku is 5,7,5. you can double check that but I'm pretty sure that is what it is.
Hello Bear, I am here today with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" and I want to review this item because I found it while surfing the auto-rewards page. this is a love letter unlike none *I have ever seen before, the man is torn and feels like a failure because he can't find the right words. In reality the whole poem are the right words in my mind. I felt your writing had sort of a light comedic spin to it but it was drenched in emotion as well. I think you did a very good job writing this poem.
hi Dan,I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" and I wanted to give you a review of this piece I found on the auto-rewards page this is a solemn poem of your grandma on her deathbed I feel so bad for your family, death is a hard thing to overcome for the loved ones and friends. Your writing is ever so lovely, you have emotion without being gushy, I enjoyed reading your writing.
I like that your grandma was such a religious woman, but some how it came through to me that you are not as much a believer as she was, the reason I say this is because you say "the plastic priest" and such. But your writing is nice, thank you for sharing this item with me.
Hi,I'm with the Power Reviewers and I want to review you because you gave me a review and I saw this and thought I would repay the favor.
I think this is an excellent endeavor you have chosen to get involved with.
I like the interactive stories and have been reading one of yours called "Holiday Kids", I liked the idea behind that story, but I do think it would have been better had you left Santa, Pooh, and Cupid out of it. but it is being well written by writer Lisa Noe~kittylove, who has made the only two additions to the story. but I feel your overall idea is exceptional.
Hello Tim, I found this poem on the pay for review section and thought I'd give it a good read. Boy I'm glad I did this was a well written and beautiful item. my favorite part is where you talked about God and said:::
"The righteous tunes of souls’ retreat
And God's adoring ways.":::
Hello Jo, this is a dark and sad poem. I think the woman needs to get some help, killing yourself is never an answer, or at least that was my take on the poem. She lost someone dear to her so she drown herself, is that the message of the poem, or did I misunderstand? I think you need to go back and capitalize all of your I pronouns. also some of the poem flowed really well and had a nice rhythm and other parts was long and fooled with the rhythm of the entire poem. but all in all it was a descent enough poem.
Hello miss lisa this is a very good bio I found it to be very interesting and creative. It sounds like a good story and you sound like a very creative person. I feel as if you have done a good job. I read the story A Fairy's Tale and I found it to be quite charming.
Hi Tim, Your poem "A Mightier Justice", is very good I liked the rhymes they were perfect rhymes. The message was clear and it had a nice rhythm and flowed well from start to finish. I did not see any spots where it seemed to be forced or where it did not make since, this was a nice job writing this poem. Thanks for sharing, Write On!
hi Dan, I just read Your poem "Poetic Canvas". I think you did a good job writing this item. It is colorful and I like that you refer to the squirrels and the great big sky. This is a poem I had a bit of a time to figure out exactly what you are talking about. It is a pretty sounding poem, I think you mean that you feel alone. but I'm not sure. thanks for sharing and write on!
Hello I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group and I just read this item "The Book" By Rodney Gray, I think it is an unusual book, the title is good I think it is rightly named. I did feel that some of the sentences were a bit too long. But for the most part it was a good piece of writing. I thought several parts of the story sounded sort of poetic whether that was intentional or not I don't know. but all in all the first chapter albeit long was good.
hi bear,i am with the power reviewers group and i want to give you a review of your poem about the dog called " Boots of Belefonte" it is a real good poem that tells a story about a dog they some call boots. i found this to be a funny little poem story. i think they will all live happily ever after or i hope so. this rhymed well and had a great little rhythm. you really can write good poetry.
hello Tim, I am with the Writing.com Power Reviewers group and I want to review your item "Pre-Arranged Arrangements". This is a nice poem I think you did a good job writing it, I think it is very different and I liked it. I for one can relate as I am one of the types of which you speak.LOL
you have one verse of very interesting subject matter.
Hi Lisa this is a beautiful poem I always like your poetry Ive read it before. this is especially nice.
I think I would recommend this poem to everyone especially people who like spiritual things. "A Whisper" is a good poem and I hope you win the contest you have entered it in you deserve it.
-honeysuklerose-
Hello Lisa Kittylove I think your writing is very creative and good I have read all of the poetry and short stories from this folder and I find that they are very good with no exceptions. I would like to take this opportunity to say I admire you and your writing it is always so fresh and good.
from Honeysuklerose and the Power Reviewer group good job.
hi jackneigut, I am glad to have read this story it is awesome, I think it must have taken a lot out of you to write this item. I am so sorry for your loss, it must be terrible to lose a child. I believe in God and I think that he does everything for a reason we may not understand it or agree with it, but in his wisdom he knows more of the world than we do. we never know what kind of afterlife a person will know, perhaps it is a great paradise and the dead person is much better off.
it's easier to think that anyway. your writing is very nice, I think you handled this subject with grace and strength. Write on
hello Tim, my name is honeysuklerose and I just read your beautiful poem called, " My Lover's Wings".
I found it to be very appealing and a good use of metaphors.
I think your girlfriend much feel very fortunate to have a man who can write such beautiful poetry for her and about her.
I think you did a good job.
this is a beautiful poem Lisa, I think you had a good idea of writing about the beauty that surrounds us every day. I am thankful for all of these things that you mention. my favorite line was. "The Sunflower is smiling at the sun
A butterfly flutters over the yellow flowers,
Hello Donkey Hotay, I just read your short story "A wolfin sheeps clothing", I must say you have a good sense of humor, this was an amusing little story about a wolf who liked one of the sheep in a different way. my favorite line from your story is:
"I like wooly rumps and I just can't lie". I t is like the song "big butts". I really loved this comical look at the barn yard so to speak. the wolf sure was cool. thanks for sharing .
Hi JohnnyBubba, I just read your poem called "Sad Eyes".
I think it is so beautiful and in itself sad. your rhymes were very good and you had a lyrical rhythm. I really think you did a good job. my favorite lines were:
"If I only knew what I could do
To make your eyes seem bright
I’d spend every moment with you
I dream about you each night"
This was a perfect stanza I think you did a fantastic job writing this poem congratulations.
Hello Jack Goldman, this I thought was going to be a scary horror story but it ends with a funny joke. This is very imaginative I don't know how you can come up with a story such as this. I think it is very creative and has a brilliance to it.
I liked reading this story and I look forward to reading more of your work, Keep up the good work.
Gosh you scared the dickens out of me, I like a spooky story but when you throw in a witch and a psych ward it is almost to much to handle. just kidding lol, you did a good job writing a story for Halloween, I read other things of yours I can't seem to leave your port every time I start to leave I see something I'm itching to read. good job Lisa!
Hi Lisa this is a cute little rhyme for children I enjoyed reading it.
I have read other pieces of your work and I think you do a good job at writing. I did not see any mistakes with your writing.
I think this item deserves 5 stars because it is cute.
thanks for sharing this poem with me. Keep on writing!
hi Averren, I just read your story, "Touch of Magic"
I thought it was very good, Though I wonder if you are going to add more to it. It didn't quite seem finished to me. anyway I thought Rena was a likable character, she was self reliant .
I thought you had unique places and names. I enjoyed your story and I look forward to more . Rena was at once a Ranger.
I thought the part about the undead and the skeleton was neat.
Thanks for sharing your story with us all.
-Honeysuklerose-
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