I enjoyed this story very much. You managed to convey the main character's unease at encountering a stranger while visiting her daughter's grave, and the overall creepiness of the situation very well using only dialogue. The slight twist at the end is well-done and it adds a layer to the interaction between the main character and the stranger.
This is well-written and very informative. This article is clear and easy to understand. I learned some new things about this current virus outbreak and some older outbreaks as well. I did notice one spelling error. When you first mention the CDC under causes, you wrote "Canters" instead of "Centers". That was the only thing I noticed. This was very well-done.
I enjoyed your short story. It works well as a good introduction to you and to your Writing.com path. This was an interesting take on a short story. I've haven't read a short story in the form of a blog. I look forward to reading more of your work. Good job.
I enjoyed your short limerick very much. It utilizes both the poem form and the prompt well. The rhyme scheme is consistent and well-thought out. Even though the limerick is short, the length works well and it does a lot with a little. Very good job.
I enjoyed your three micro poems. Though the title implies that they are three separate poems, together they read like one poem. There is a theme of seeking peace that flows through each one and ties them together well. They are very well written and calming. Well done.
I enjoyed your story very much. It demonstrates growing up learning multiple languages well. It also displays the connection that one has with family members who speak different languages. There is also the connection between three generations of this family which was well done. Good job.
I really enjoyed your short poem. It utilizes the prompt very well. It also showcases the relationship between owner and cat well. Writing a poem, even a short one, where it requires a specific rhyme scheme and with only a certain number of syllables can be difficult but this is well done. Good job.
I enjoyed your poem. The rhyme scheme works well for the poem's theme and remains consistent. I like that each stanza has a separate rhyme at the end. It doesn't hinder the poem's flow at all. The poem portrays the love between the speaker and their significant other clearly. Good job.
I enjoyed your poem. There is a good flow between the stanzas from beginning to end. The need for balance and the struggle it often takes to find it. The poem is well-structured and thought out. The way you view a balanced life is clear and concise.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme works well and is consistent throughout. It's a fun poem about diner where all the cool dinosaurs go to eat. I did notice that you capitalized the word 'then' in the fourth line. That's the only thing I noticed that may be a typo. Overall, a good job.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The poem is very well-written. It's descriptive and creates a clear picture. The description draws the reader in from the start. The poem remains consistent throughout so it flows well. The way the final stanza is written adds to the overall theme of the poem. Good Job.
I enjoyed your story very much. It didn't go the way I was expecting it to go when I read the first couple of lines. It's a different take on androids and placing human brains in android that I really liked. The story deals well with things that don't usually come up in such stories, like the adjustments and counselors for those who have gone through with such a transplant. Good job.
I enjoyed this poem. Even though it's short, it still invokes warm images of a visit to Grandma's house where the memory of a curtain ties it together. The words "Gradma's curtain" are repeated through out and tie all of the verses together well. It helps keep consistency in the poem.
This is a well-written story with an unexpected twist. I enjoyed it very much. The characters are distinct and consistent throughout. The twist was well-done surprise and it added to the story. The story also demonstrates the relationship between siblings well.
I enjoyed your poem about roses very much. It conveys the different meanings behind various colored roses well. The rhyme scheme was well-done and remained consistent throughout. While I knew some of the meanings, I didn't know all of them. Very well done.
I enjoyed this piece very much. Your characters are distinct and each has a unique voice. I can see Emily's concern and worry for Arlynn and her dislike of Lance clearly. Though Lance doesn't actually appear, his presence is clearly felt with in the context of the story, based on the reactions of the two characters who appears. I'm curious to see where the story will go from here.
I enjoyed your story very much. The concept is both intriguing and well explained. With so many apps and games being utilized for a variety of things, having a single app that contains a number of those that are most commonly used to keep one's life organized would be very useful. It would make things less confusing because instead of 10+ apps to keep track of , it would only be one. And to have it reward you for meeting goals would keep people motivated. Good job.
I enjoyed this story very much. It was easy to follow from start to finish. The point of view is consistent and works well for the story. The characters were distinctive and unique. They all sound like they belong both to the city and the period. Lou is a well-written lead character. Overall, very well done. I look forward to reading the other stories in the series.
I enjoyed this little story. Your short fiction story was well-written and clear. The characters were clear and the narrator had a distinct voice. The words were clearly marked and well-used. You did a very good job telling a story in under three hundred words.
I enjoyed this very much. The story is very engaging and the characters are believable. Duncan is a good example of how people don't always react to things the same way. There were no errors that I noticed. I also enjoyed the twists at the end a lot. Both twists were really well done and thought out. Good job!.
I enjoyed your poem. It's a very well-written poem. The short length of the poem doesn't detract from what's being expressed in it. The poem works well with the prompt given and with the poetry form used. Overall, it's a well-written poem. Well done.
I enjoyed this very much. The main character is distinctive and has a clear voice. The world building is well-done and gives a clear picture of the world. I only noticed one spelling error. In the second to last paragraph is the word "turing" which I believe is meant to be the word "turning". Also, some of the paragraphs could be broken up a bit better. For example, the first time your main character speaks should be a separate paragraph. This also applies to the short section between the first two times he speaks. Feel free to disregard anything about my review that you don't find helpful. I still enjoyed this. I look forward to reading more.
I really enjoyed these poems. They complement each other very well. The first poem express the joy of being in love along with the fear and uncertainty that comes with being unsure of reciprocation. The second poem expresses the need to take a chance. It's a well-written response to the questions and worries expressed in the first poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. Teaching the children of the world is a job that doesn't get nearly enough credit. This poem demonstrates the influence a good teacher can have on their students. It reminds me of many of the teachers I know who have influenced me. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. Despite being short, your poem was vivid and descriptive. It shows how much can be done with a few words and in only a few lines. It also gave me a new poetry form to look up and try out for myself. This is very well done.
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