I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well written and consistent. While it's not very long, the poem's length doesn't take away from the details. Having heard the folklore about the Superstition Mountains, this poem does very well in expressing the folklore and bringing it to life. Good work.
This is a good start. I would recommend spacing out the lines and indenting for clearer, more distinct paragraphs and easier reading. Also, adding quotation marks when characters are speaking will assist in readability. Adding more detail will help draw in readers. Altogether, this is a good start to a story, and it has a lot of potential.
I enjoyed your comparison between three different versions of a well-loved fairytale. It's well-written and well-thought out. Your critique details both the differences between the versions and the similarities between them very well. Very well done.
I enjoyed your story very much. The story is very well-written, and the two characters are distinct. The story is short, but it doesn't detract from the story at all. The story does very well in doing a lot in a little. The plot, though brief, is intriguing and it didn't go where I was expecting it to go. Very well done.
I enjoyed your story. It's both humorous and interesting to see the story of a cat attacking a ball of yarn from the yarn's perspective. One thing I did notice is that although there are obvious paragraphs, they're not indented nor are there spaces between them. Even though the story is short, indenting the paragraphs or having a space between them would add to the readability.
I enjoyed reading your travel experience of visiting Fort Lauderdale, Florida, particularly ad someone who's never visited the city. I also enjoyed your restaurant reviews/recommendations. I'll have to keep Tiki Tiki in mind should I pay a visit Fort Lauderdale.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are distinct and interesting. The world-building sprinkled throughout the story are interesting and give a distinct impression of the world the story's set in. Overall, a well-written story. I look forward to reading more about these characters.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The poem was well-written, and I found the form interesting. The subject of crossword puzzles, their difficulty and the unique, interesting clues that are utilized within them are well expressed. There isn't a rhyme scheme in the poem, but it doesn't take away from the poem at all. Overall, a very well-done poem.
I enjoyed your piece very much. It's a well-written letter that details both the things the writer had already done this year and the writer's plans for the rest of the year. I enjoyed the conversational nature and tone of the letter, which remains consistent throughout.
I enjoyed your poem. It's very well-written and incredibly relevant. Though the poem doesn't have a rhyme scheme, that doesn't detract from the poem at all. The theme and style remain consistent throughout. Overall, this poem is very well-done. Very good job.
I enjoyed your article very much. It's very informative about building characters and how they're important for long stories/series. The resources the article contains are well explained and useful. Overall, this is a well-written and helpful article.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's a colorful, descriptive look at the solstice and summer itself. It brings all the images of the flowers , the shores and the mountains forward. I also enjoyed the image of nature being an artist bringing color back to the world after winter's chill.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It captures the spirit of winter clearly. The rhyme was consistent throughout the poem. The words used were descriptive and created clear images. I'm very glad you decided to share this poem with us. Keep up the good work.
I enjoyed your story very much. I found the story entertaining and the characters interesting. I did notice two spelling errors. The first is is when the female board member is speaking. I believe it should say "an", not "and". The second spelling error was in the second to last sentence which says "hoe" instead of home. But it was overall a good story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. I enjoyed the way you describe the variety of dogs that pass through your neighbor's home. I also like the way you talk about the neighbor and her kindness. The poem flows well and the rhyme scheme aids the flow. Very well done.
I enjoyed this newsletter very much. It's well-written and informative. The more in-depth detail on both the three acts and the separate subsections makes the structure much clearer for me than just the basics. I also liked that you gave examples and that you gave examples from two different movies. It really helped make sense of the structure.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's a different take on a vampire and human meeting. I enjoyed the characters. Both characters were distinct and had unique voices. I liked that you distiquished Edgar by giving a lisp. The budding relationship between the two characters is sweet.
I enjoyed this piece very much. I found this story adorable and very sweet. The character has a distinct voice and personality. There's a lot of fun in this story. Very good job.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent throughout the poem which aids the poem's flow.The main character has a distinct voice and a clear personality. Though there is humor in the poem , I can hear the character's frustration , which is both understandable and relatable.
I enjoyed your story very much. The titles were well utilized and made sense where they were place in the story. The two main characters were distinct and each had a unique voice. Their friendship was made clear through the way the speak to each other. Well done.
I enjoyed this story very much. The story is well-written and the characters are distinctive from each other. You did a good job creating a very creepy story within the contest's word limit. The ending only added to the overall creepiness of the story.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's definitely an interesting read. The characters are all distinct and fit well in the story. The story is engaging throughout and the slight twist at the end is well done. I did notice a possible error in the second paragraph. When you mention that it's Ellie's first time flying, there's a comma between 'time' and 'flying' that's unnecessary.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The theme of love in multiple forms remains consistent throughout and is well expressed. Even though the poem isn't very long the length works well for the poem. I can't tell if the end of the lines are a rhyme or not, but that might just be me. It's still very well done.
I enjoyed this story very much. This is a well-written flash story that does a lot with a little but the length doesn't take away anything. There is the implication of a larger world beyond what is depicted in the story. I would enjoy reading a longer version of this story. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent and thought-out. The rhythm was also well-done and consistent as well. The rhyme and rhythm work well together to create a poem that flows smoothly from stanza to stanza. Well done and good job.
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