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Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
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Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
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Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
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I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A scientist creates a time machine. Nothing unusual there. The issue - it also crosses dimensions. So, what happens when the scientist, and a friend, decide to explore time and space? Anthros, Ninjas, Magic, and plenty more make their appearances, as the pair set off. What will happen to them? Will they make it home okay, or will things get messed up forever? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of MIXED EMOTIONS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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November - for some, it's about the eventual Turkey Day. For you, it's about your own birth, as well as the death of your mother. You talk about the struggles you have faced, as she was your best friend. In a way, I can understand - my stepfather's father died before Thanksgiving, and his mother before Christmas (funny enough, they were divorced), and while my stepfather knew that his father was ill, he didn't know about his mother - that took him and his siblings by surprise.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
It was a dark and rainy night - the perfect time to review a noir-style story. A stray cat seeks a meal, but it won't be easy. The prize, a thing of shrimp, is held by a stray dog with a reputation. Most wouldn't dare to steal from this dog, but this feline has decided to take the risk, and rob the canine of his treasure. Will he get away with his daring theft, or will he end up taking a long nap in a back-alley dumpster? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Radioactive water? What is this? Mad Max: Beyond Thunderdome? It can be interesting to see that while some things change, others stay the same - in this case, foolish folks believing anything, while others are lied to, or tricked, and some end up dead. However, that's what happens when false science is used, or real science is twisted for others ends. Always something.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "November 3 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Cats - there is always something about them. One moment, they will run away like their tail is on fire, and the next, they will rub your leg like there is no tomorrow - same cat even, with the same person. I often wonder this with the one cat on my dirt road, as it looks for one mouse or another to hunt, either for her to eat, or for this kitten that may be theirs, or adopted. Always something.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
The one section would make more sense as "Calypso has her winter coat on", not your. *Laugh*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah, a cute little poem about Halloween, for a contest it seems. It's always nice to find someone trying their hand at such things, as those can be a lot of fun. I know that I have a few floating around, here and there. Some are good, others are moving. The trick is to always try to find a reason to write - that is key. In this case - Halloween.

Thoughts
A cute poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Might want to make the key words pop, somehow. *Wink*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
What is it about Halloween? Well, I can say this - it's the start of like six months of candy and other such treats. I mean, Halloween has the skeletons and spooky things, Thanksgiving has the turkey things, Christmas (and other such holidays) has the winter things, Valentine's has the hearts, Saint Patrick's loves the green, and Easter shows off the eggs, and after that, it's just the regular stuff, unless one celebrates an Independence Day thing in the Summer, or has candy during other less celebrated holidays (or at least not celebrated much in America), but most of those are between Fall and Spring timeframe, meaning that candy and treats of any sort tends to be on sale then. Always something for kids, and those with a sweet tooth.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A man finds himself transported to a strange world, one full of intelligent beasts, and ruled by dinosaurs. Being hunted at every turn, will he survive long enough to discover the truth, or will he be captured, and forced into servitude, or end up as a snack? Follow along as he makes allies, foils foes, and encounters the Royal Princess herself. What will happen next?

Characters
The characters look very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see too many issues involving spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "Meeting Jace" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
There's nothing quite like meeting a friend, especially if there has been years since the last time you met. Had that not too long ago with a D&D buddy of mine - hadn't seen them since 2020, and I ran into them a few months ago. I try to visit them at their game shop every so often. It was interesting to meet them again - wish that they could play with my current group, but they got a store to run. Always interesting.

Thoughts
Meeting up with old friends is always interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Science Mews" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
What is it with cats, those feline beings that like to be silent until the last moment, only to then jump out at you. Or there's those that wait until you're a step away before running away. Then there's those with pitiful meows, ones that just make you wonder. Then there's those where, just after you've been sitting for a while, decide to climb your leg, and curl up on your lap, all but daring you to move them. Always something.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, an interesting poem. Two late 18th / early 19th century warships encounter each other during wartime, and battle ensues. However, despite the fighting, and carnage, captains, officers, and crews of both ships seem to respect the others' courage, to the point that when the one side was defeated, and taken prisoner, the one captain allowed the other to keep their sword, and thus their dignity. Interestingly, Switchel is a sugary drink that is made from honey, ginger, and sometimes, while at sea, rum.

Thoughts
One has to respect the courage of both ships crews.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting item to read. It talks about the different types of ghosts and spirits. Some are friendly, or at least mean no harm to the living. Some just like to cause mischief, and are just an annoyance. Then, there are those that are hostile, and rather dangerous. Personally, I hope that the ghosts in my area are the friendly sort, especially since those that died within the past 30+ years were family and friends. Makes one think.

Thoughts
Makes for an interesting read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "October 18 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Honestly, there are days that I'm glad that I'm not active on social media. I try to avoid politics, and a bunch of other things that I don't understand, because someone will take my ignorance as a sign that I'm a bigot, or some such thing. That is both annoying, and unfortunate, not to mention very sad, especially for me, as I'm not, to the best of my knowledge, intentionally a bigot, but some folks make up their opinions in two seconds and label you, using Gorilla Glue to stick it in place. Not easy to deal with.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Angel Feathers  Open in new Window.
for entry "Faith vs Fear" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Fall and Halloween, the time when folks like to bring out the various decorations - scarecrows, skeletons, witches, ghosts, goblins, evil dragons, and so many more - all to delight, wonder, maybe even scare, those who see them. Then, there's the various movies that show up on the TV - zombie movies, slashers, demons, space aliens, and so many more. Makes one wonder what will pop up next.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "Shaking My Head" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah, the Recreational Vehicle, which lets you take your camping on the road, living in cramped quarters, dealing with mysterious smells, never ending leaky roofs, and a bad place for a toilet - yeah, I'm not living on one any time soon - know of folks that tried, and don't want to do that ever again. I mean, camping has its own issues already, but a bad RV is even worse, as you spend so many thousands of dollars on it. Not fun when there's trouble.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Pitter Pat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Looks like it's that time of the year, when the spooks come out of the ground - it's a trick, grab an axe! Leaves change color, from green to gold, and many more, before tumbling on down. Some poor witch just crashed into a tree again - told them to watch their drinking! Fools making dumb decisions - just put the slasher guy into the ground for once! Plenty of monsters showing up - bring out the boomstick for Pete's sake!

Thoughts
Makes one laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Technomedium" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, using AI to "interview" a dead person in order to get their opinion on stuff.

Reminds me of a scene in "I, Robot", where Detective Spooner has to ask a hologram projector of a dead researcher/scientist what's going on. "I'm sorry. My responses are limited." Thus, he must ask the right questions.

Personally, I have my own take on the whole gun violence thing, which comes from growing up with guns, and seeing them as tools and not necessarily only as weapons.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Thumb Drive" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Thumbs and brains - what is the connection? That is, besides us using our brains to control our thumbs? Is there something special between them, or is it just a coincidence? Many primates have thumbs and brains, so, what makes us so special? I do not know, and I doubt we'll ever truly understand the real reason that we are the way we are. Still, folks will keep trying to find out. I wish them luck.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
We can sail for adventure upon the open waters, assuming that we are by the open waters, and that we have access to a sailing vessel, and that we know how to sail. This is also assuming that the Navy equivalent isn't going to bother us too. Still, there are many places to go - North, South, East, West - all depending on the body of water. So, if you want to be King of the Pirates, cast off those ropes, and set sail for adventure!

Just don't capsize the ship!

Thoughts
Makes one think of things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Cow Tools - the idea that cattle, if sapient, would make ugly and inelegant items. Well, to be fair, a lot of humans' early tools were also ugly and inelegant, but, here's the thing - they got the job done. What jobs - cutting meat, killing animals, cutting down trees, digging roots for food, and so many more. Of course, one issue in the comic might be that the cattle in question had cattle hands - human hands might be more useful.

Thoughts
Makes one think, and chuckle.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Bugs-B-Gon" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an item that, as someone who grows grapes and other berries as a bit of a hobby, might find interesting. Seems that there's something called a spotted lanternfly that gives those that grow grapes, stone fruits, and other things a whole lot of issues. Thankfully, it seems that someone has come up with a solution that might put an end to the average grower's worries. Hopefully, it does well.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "October and Nostalgia" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
October - the time of the years when trees change colors, witches fly, zombies crawl out of their graves, and so many spooky things. Then, there's all the other things, like birds flying South, certain weather patterns increasing in frequency, and folks getting ready for a Winter that tends to act like a Drama Queen that may not even show up to the party anyways.

Thoughts
Makes one think about things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Sometimes one must chuckle upon hearing innuendos and entradas - in this case, there's a type of bird that's called a tit. While raising young, they tend to stay faithful. However, once the kids have left the nest for the final time, they go to the divorce lawyers and separate. I don't know who gets the nest, and who gets the boot though. Maybe they sell it and spit the money 50-50.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
When life gets difficult - there are many things that one can do. Some turn to prayer. Some turn to drinking, or eating, or other such things. Some turn to talking. Some turn to reading. There are many things that one can do. Do they work? Well, that depends. Some work better than others. Some need to be used in small amounts. And others.... folks are on the fence about if they are even worth trying.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Oh, All That Light!" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Light - well, let's put it this way, without light, what's the point in having eyeballs at all? Many creatures that live where there's no light don't have the greatest of eyesight, with most being all but blind, if noy all the way blind. One might wonder why eyes were evolved, but, one must admit, things look nicer when you can see. After all, as the saying goes - a sight for sore eyes.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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