Good Morning,
A brother is always a brother..this is the main theme of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a very special message about a family relationship.
I am happy for both of them knowing that all is well after all.
Wonderful message .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Triquint Form of Poetry.
Thank You for the Special Note below the poem that makes me understand and serves as a great information about this form.
The story behind the poetry is sad
and lonely.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Written for a prompt and you did write it so well...
Interesting and captivating title
"Responsibility"
The given title fits for the written poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Wise and Nice.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
This serves as a great advice to one and all. This Special Writing shares a great Wisdom.
Wise and nice and is well written and nicely presented .
Highly Admirable.
I am so glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharing
" Rules For Living "
Write on.
Good Evening,
A beautiful letter to The Most High in a form of a Poem written from the heart.
This expresses a very grateful heart.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the blue colored words that completed this work of art.
Your grateful heart will always be Blessed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that speaks of the true essence of life..that it has its own share of sadness and joy, of failure and success.
A poem that also believe that there is Hope and that truly matters.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I can feel the joy as I read every line in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
I love the given title that speaks of great expectations.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines that makes me wish to join the fun .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the Poetry is sad knowing that in this house love reigns in the past and now it's being neglected but for a very good reason that the physical body cannot maintain to keep its true beauty.
Yes.. this happens as in some good things never last
The poem is well written and sentimental.
The picture adds more meaning and understanding.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
One of God's greatest creations is the main topic of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
The ocean so wide and so deep is being expressed through wonderful poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Each line is my favorite line.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Valentines Acrostic Poetry with a deeply emotional message. A poem so full of longings to this someone special in your heart thus the given title was written :
" Will You Be My Valentine ? "
A sad reality and a sad Poetry in this Day of the Hearts.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Great title.
Wonderful lyrics too with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Meaningful and inspiring.
Siblings love, honor, care and respect for each other and such moments of togetherness are so special and precious.
Surely the tune is lovely.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I love this poem as much as I love strumming the guitar.
Uncle Amos along with your Mom and Dad and their Music instruments are all yours.
A poem with a great sentimental Value. This is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title makes me wish too to a lot of people close to my heart to be here :
" Wish You Were Here "
I agree with the written poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
A sad reality.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Hahahaha
The group itself .. hahahaha
I can imagine the smell when they chorus to do the farting.
Hilarious..
Now, After reading the whole story I understand why such title was given :
" A Very Unlikely Meeting "
The last line makes me laugh louder.
Really....
Write on.
Good Morning,
Descriptive of a neighbor who is a musician. A neighbor who surely has his own experiences and many stories to tell.
A story full of observations and tells of the neighbors existence as he continues the journey called life.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I am glad with the ending. At last she can have a decent meal after all she had been through.
Yes.. life in the city is not a bed of roses for everyone. Many are having such struggles.
Thank You for sharing this very realistic story that is well written and nicely presented.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Thank You for the Special Note below the poetry that explains clearly about this Epistle Form of Poetry that you are sharing to all of us in this Awesome Community.
The given title speaks of the future " Tomorrow "
And the poem great message is for your child, from the heart of a Father so full of love, concern and care.
" You turn and look, I clearly see
The trust and faith you have in
me "
My favorite line that is very meaningful and inspiring.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Yes . tomorrow...we must not worry about tomorrow, knowing that GOD 🙏 is already there ..
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always..
Good Morning,
Having experienced a horrifying typhoon at our country two days ago that cost lives and a terrible damage of infrastructures and properties makes me understand fully the aftermath of what's going on in your place. A horrible experience with a terrible effect and is being expressed clearly through a well written and nicely presented work of art.
I admire the Creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A witness to what's going on in this particular moment between two hearts " Holding hands " is the essence of the given title of this poem with a philosophical message
" Street lamp "
The written poetic words and lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
The given title shows the greatness of your soul and a very caring heart. A writing that expresses your wonderful individuality who wishes the goodness of others as you spread your wings of love.
It always my great honor to be able to read your writings.
Thank You for sharing
" My Prayer For You "
God 🙏 Bless You Always...
Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
My answer is YES...
I need to say Yes as my intuition guided me to do so.
Why Yes...It is because in any contest or competition, one has to make a Move.. win or lose , at least I have done something that proves I am alive.
Thank You for sharing and for the opportunity for me to answer.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A HAIKU Poetry with a sad message as in this is the moment of great troubles or the turbulent experiences of life.
This is what I believe is the main message of this concise, wise and nice form of Poetry.
Thank You for sharing
" Autumn Leaves "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The union of two hearts as one is the main message of this wonderful Love Poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
The story behind the poetry is meaningful and inspiring.
The last two lines make a great conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for another worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A story that sounds like a wonderful Prose to me.
S' aen and Dia, the two important characters, the sea, the full moon and the struggles all in one makes an interesting storyline that is well written and nicely presented.
Exciting, intriguing, interesting...
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a very precious and Special work of art.
The Note below the Poetry gives a clear, wise and nice explanation of the connectedness of the Rose and the Lighthouse as well as to the existence of love, either it's being lost or gone but always be treasured.
This poem I can relate as Rose is my favorite flower and I have a favorite Lighthouse that makes a great part of my well - being.
The poem is well written and nicely presented and Awesome in its own beautiful way.
Thank You for sharing
" The Rose And The Lighthouse " with a nice picture that adds more meaning into this work of art.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless !
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