Good Morning,
A wonderful short story that fits for this modern generation.
The given title fits for the written lines that completed this work of art.
Great possibilities are truly endless.
I admire the Creativeness.
Thank You for sharing your talent and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Have a Blessed Sunday..
Good Morning,
Yes..I agree with the wonderful message of this wonderful story behind this short Essay.
The given title is interesting and captivating :
" The House That Breathes "
I can feel that the spirit of goodness and love lives in every house even if no one resides it.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Have a Blessed Sunday..
Good Morning,
Oh.. Everything happens for a reason and this story proves it. There's a purpose on why Jeff has his CPR training before having his date with Susan .
I am glad to note that they remained friends
Great short story.
Thank You for sharing and for another worthwhile read.
Write on.
Have a Blessed Sunday..
Good Morning,
The story behind the song is sad and the last part makes a joyful twist and turn.
Wonderful and inspiring lyrics that completed this work of art.
I believe that the tune is beautiful.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Have a Blessed Sunday.
Good Morning,
Yes..The Holy Spirit is with us always.. this is the very important and precious message of this work of art with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The poem is very inspiring that serves as a guiding light in our darkest moments.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
Write on.
Have a Blessed Sunday..
Good Morning,
All the frustrations and disappointments are being released here in this very meaningful free verse poetry
Yes . Writing down your deepest feelings helps the healing process of all the hurt and pain.
A very sad story behind the poetry
I am glad to read the happy ending.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Have a Blessed Sunday..
Good Morning,
Oh.. the kind hearted and wise Danny. He feeds the mice with his own food.
Well...
This is a well written and nicely presented short story. The couple get rid of the mice in their house, yet Danny keep them by the tree.
Fascinating.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Have a Blessed Sunday..
Good Morning,
The marriage collapsed, the business collapsed as in when it rains it pours.
A sad story that is well written and nicely presented proving to the lyrics of the song that " some good things never last "
A sad reality.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
WOW !
This is adorably adorable as in Awesome in every way.
Very meaningful and inspiring.
I wish everyone can read this to brighten the spirit.
Highly impressive.
This makes a very nice frame to place in the walk or in the office desk or in every room in every hospital so one can believe in Oneself and move on with meaning and fulfillment in life.
One of the Best Writings that I read in this Awesome Community.
A great read.
Write on.
Have a Blessed Sunday....
A warm smile from the Philippines....
Good Morning,
Two poems..decades apart.
Both poems speak of a questioning heart and all the answers needed are in the deepest part of the soul.
Awesome work of art and more precious and valuable after the passing of years.
I am so glad to have read this
Thank You for sharing.
Have a Blessed Sunday....
Write on...
A smile from the rainy and stormy Philippines...
Good Morning,
A brother is always a brother..this is the main theme of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a very special message about a family relationship.
I am happy for both of them knowing that all is well after all.
Wonderful message .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Triquint Form of Poetry.
Thank You for the Special Note below the poem that makes me understand and serves as a great information about this form.
The story behind the poetry is sad
and lonely.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Written for a prompt and you did write it so well...
Interesting and captivating title
"Responsibility"
The given title fits for the written poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Wise and Nice.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
This serves as a great advice to one and all. This Special Writing shares a great Wisdom.
Wise and nice and is well written and nicely presented .
Highly Admirable.
I am so glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharing
" Rules For Living "
Write on.
Good Evening,
A beautiful letter to The Most High in a form of a Poem written from the heart.
This expresses a very grateful heart.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the blue colored words that completed this work of art.
Your grateful heart will always be Blessed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that speaks of the true essence of life..that it has its own share of sadness and joy, of failure and success.
A poem that also believe that there is Hope and that truly matters.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I can feel the joy as I read every line in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
I love the given title that speaks of great expectations.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines that makes me wish to join the fun .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the Poetry is sad knowing that in this house love reigns in the past and now it's being neglected but for a very good reason that the physical body cannot maintain to keep its true beauty.
Yes.. this happens as in some good things never last
The poem is well written and sentimental.
The picture adds more meaning and understanding.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
One of God's greatest creations is the main topic of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
The ocean so wide and so deep is being expressed through wonderful poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Each line is my favorite line.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Valentines Acrostic Poetry with a deeply emotional message. A poem so full of longings to this someone special in your heart thus the given title was written :
" Will You Be My Valentine ? "
A sad reality and a sad Poetry in this Day of the Hearts.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Great title.
Wonderful lyrics too with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Meaningful and inspiring.
Siblings love, honor, care and respect for each other and such moments of togetherness are so special and precious.
Surely the tune is lovely.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I love this poem as much as I love strumming the guitar.
Uncle Amos along with your Mom and Dad and their Music instruments are all yours.
A poem with a great sentimental Value. This is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title makes me wish too to a lot of people close to my heart to be here :
" Wish You Were Here "
I agree with the written poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
A sad reality.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Hahahaha
The group itself .. hahahaha
I can imagine the smell when they chorus to do the farting.
Hilarious..
Now, After reading the whole story I understand why such title was given :
" A Very Unlikely Meeting "
The last line makes me laugh louder.
Really....
Write on.
Good Morning,
Descriptive of a neighbor who is a musician. A neighbor who surely has his own experiences and many stories to tell.
A story full of observations and tells of the neighbors existence as he continues the journey called life.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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