Basically I am here to test out my work on a wider audience; to see if I actually have tallent so to speak. I realize my stories are written in an unconoventional way (no serious punctuation) but that is because that is the way the story flows from my head. think of each little "..." as a pause between ideas without really cutting off the prior idea/statement. I have tried to write these stories differently but it seems like i'm destroying the story by adding conventional grammatical tools.