I am a 28 year old Military Police officer in the ARNG. I was born 22MAY1979 in Pontiac Michigan. I have been trying to write my book "DARKSTAR"  for about a year or so, I joined this site to try and get any kind of honest feedback so that I may write a more enjoyable story. P.S. feel free to send any suggestions you might have, or just a simple letter if you want to talk. I always like meeting new people.