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Member 1/3 for Task #2 ---------- Forwarded message ---------- Date: 05-Feb-2026 10:24 am From: ruwth To: greenwillow@Writing.Com Subject:  Task #2 for 26 PaychecksAngel, I chose you for one of the three people for my Task #2 for "26 Paychecks " . Although we know each other a little through Scroll, I decided to delve into your port. Per our assignment, I will review each tab. Portfolio Tab I read in Scroll that you updated your Bio-Block today. From the way it looks on Mobile View versus Desktop View, I found myself wondering if you did it using a Mobile View because of the way it looks on that view. Have you looked at it both ways? I prefer the appearance of your Bio-Block on the Mobile View. I was intrigued by your comment on Scroll that we no longer need "tricks" for line breaks. (Makes me curious but I doubt I will change my own Bio-Block.) I noticed the link to "The Kindness of Strangers" . I would suggest putting this as a Highlighted Item. I had forgotten what it was until after I clicked on the link. I was curious to see what story you had chosen to link there. Have you used up all the characters allowed? Could you use {{litem:2350375} or add See this forum: or just change it from a link to a Highlighted Item? I also find myself wondering if you could make it a rotating link to randomly display a link to different things you would like people to see... Anyways, I already don't like this task. Moving on: Review Tab Well, I am now comparing your Review Tab to mine (LOL). When I read the words "Does it make sense?", at first I thought you were asking if the lead in "I"m good at" made sense. Perhaps an added word or two so it would say, "I'm good at asking if what you have written makes sense." Does that make sense? Flipping back and forth between your Review Tab and mine, I realize your description of your Review Style gives a more descriptive answer than mine does and I came up with a good edit for your "I'm good at" response. You could just preface your questions with "asking these questions:" Looking at our Review Tabs makes me want to update mine. One thing I like about mine: I have a Trinket posted there. One thing I like about yours: the reviews you have done of my items--I really owe you some reviews! And this review:Review of "ruwth is writing..."  served to remind me of choosing joy. The image you have on your Review Tab is perfect! Someone reading is a great image for a Review Tab. My image has nothing to do with reading and reviewing—hmmm... Bio Tab Okay, my first question: Do you have red hair? I immediately noticed the picture here (like the girl reading on your Review Tab) has red hair. Do you? Next thing I noticed: your age. I know I have seen it before but sometimes I forget I am talking to someone my grandkids' age. Five of my twenty-one grandchildren are older than you! As I read about you on this page, I find the "counting stars somewhere" cute and clever but I always like to see where people are from. I can't say anything though because I think I left that part completely out on my Bio Tab. I actually left all but one section out on mine.  As I read about you on this page, I couldn't help but remember how much I love your writing. In my eyes, you are amazing and write so much better at your young age than I can ever hope to write. I treasure "Viva La Vida" and always will. One thing my Bio Tab has that yours doesn't: TRINKETS.  Notebook Tab Okay, your port is the first I have done for this task—and I am tired of writing this email!!! So, short and sweet for this tab: I discovered this note: "Note: I've added a new nonfiction drabble to my b..." I want to read and review the non-fiction entry you reference there! A dribble is a good length for my attention span. I noticed that you seem to primarily use your Notebook Tab/Newsfeed to share your recent writing. I did search to find this note: "Note: Job openings available for 2026 at [Link To ..." This note is interesting: "Note: Yoo-hoo *BigSmile* throwing some pretty U..." 4 more tabs to go... Aaaawwwggghhh... Blog, Community, Fans & Sliders coming up next... Blog Right now, I don't even have a Blog item. You have: Cover Art is perfect for this blog. I find myself wondering if this is the best book in your port to use as your blog. It is no longer easy to look for book items so I am not sure what others there are to choose from. An idea: provide links to your other books in the main part of this blog. It appears you use other book items in the same way so posting links to those books here would be a good way to promote them. Community Tab Well, we don't personalize this tab so what do I notice here? You not only have Daily Visit Badges, you also have a slew of 7 Day in a Row Review Badges--that is an impressive achievement! I only have 3 of those.  Fans Tab Are we supposed to do these tabs? Mine is not visible. You have a lot of favorite authors!!! 894!!! Whew! Sliders I don't know if many people have Slider Tabs any more. I haven't used mine in a while because I mainly use my phone. Well, that is the end of one person for my Task #2!!! I am worn out. See you in Scroll... And I need to review that entry you wrote today... ------- ruwth See also: "Re: Task 3: ruwth's Member 2/3 (Hummingbird)" "Re: Task 3: ruwth's Member 3/3 (wiesblaize)" ~ ~ ~ JESUS is LORD! ~ ~ ~ |
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