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Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Reference · #2349880

A poetic reflection on the silent threshold between presence and memory.

There are moments when a place inhales — quietly, like it remembers being alive.
The walls lean in, listening to what the light once said. The air trembles, almost human, unsure whether to stay or to drift into the dark.

I’ve always been drawn to that threshold — the limen, as the Latins called it — where something ends softly before the next thing begins. It’s the same with houses, hearts, and dreams: the beauty never shouts; it just lingers, patient and unfinished.

This piece isn’t about a building, not entirely. It’s about the silence between footsteps, the spaces that architecture forgets to explain. The kind of silence that doesn’t echo — it breathes.

Somewhere in that vanishing hour, when the light bends like a memory, the world feels designed again. And maybe that’s all we ever build — fleeting sanctuaries between what was and what will be.

— Briton
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