I love to experiment and with this last poem "wolf at the door" I attempted to create something that seems to be 2 poems entangled and flows into each other. It's an idea i had for sometime and never got to actually try it. I don't know how many "laws" I broke and how successful it is, but there it is in any case
Your feedback helps me to learn and work on my mistakes.
Thanks for the feedback. I learn alot from it.