Falling Water

A little poetry practice... I'd like to be more versatile in my writing.

Water drops on cold stone,
Laden with impurities.
Hard walls grow, unbreakable.

Unexpected, a tumbling torrent.
flashing and brilliant,
cracks stone foundations.

Stone tumbles away,
dancing and melting,
in the joyous flood.

Water drops on water,
impurities cleansed
in the welcoming softness.