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by Dag Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR · Poetry · Relationship · #874844

A short poem I wrote recently. Would love feedback.

Quiet honey eyes
Suffering, insisting
Killing himself inside
Hurt, guilt, neglect.

Escape
Escape
Escape
He ran away.

He waited for me
and my pain
and my disease
and my skeletons.

Peeling back layers
Warm absolute
A quiet peace.
We ran away.

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