\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2347566-The-Vessel-of-Two-Hearts
Item Icon
by David Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E · Short Story · Romance/Love · #2347566

Forbidden love in Ahvaz: two tinsmiths, one river, and a passion stronger than fate.

The Vessel of Two Hearts


Chapter 1 -- Sparks on Taleghani Street
Ahvaz's summers were merciless. The sun beat down on Taleghani Street, shimmering on the metal rooftops and sending waves of heat through the alleys where craftsmen labored. Inside two modest workshops, the constant hammering of tin was a rhythm of survival -- one beat across from the other, two hearts on opposite sides of the street.
Arman, son of a Jewish tinsmith, worked silently beside his father's old anvil. His hands were steady, his eyes dark with thought. He often looked up through the rising smoke of solder and flux, across the street, where Eline bent over her own bench. Her sleeves were rolled back, her hair tucked beneath a scarf, yet strands escaped and caught the light like copper filings.
Few women worked as tinners in Ahvaz. Most walked past her workshop with surprise or disapproval. But she had inherited her father's tools, and no one could deny the quality of her craft. Pots she repaired shone like silver. Samovars she polished reflected the faces of the bazaar's merchants.
One afternoon, as sweat streaked his forehead, Arman crossed the narrow street carrying a teapot he had purchased from her stall weeks before. He lingered by the doorframe until she looked up.
"This is yours," he said, holding it out. "The handle is too fine. It feels like jewelry in my clumsy hands."
Her lips curved in the faintest smile. "Tin doesn't lie, Arman. It reflects who we are. Maybe the handle doesn't belong to clumsy hands."
It was the first time she had said his name. He felt it echo inside him.
That night, as he walked home past the Karun River, the city lights reflected in its wide, restless water. He whispered to himself, almost afraid of the words:
"I am devoted to you,
dream of every night.
I thought I would never fall in love,
but see -- I have."


Chapter 2 -- Karun Nights
They began meeting after dusk, when the heat loosened its grip on Ahvaz and the city softened into shadows. The White Bridge (Pol-e Sefid) was their place. The Karun flowed beneath them, carrying whispers of both prayer and longing. From one bank, the call to prayer rose from the mosques; from the other, faint bells echoed from the old Ahvaz Synagogue.
One evening, Eline brought a flask of tea wrapped in cloth. They sat on the stone steps, steam curling into the night. Across the river, lanterns from the Moein al-Tojar Bazaar flickered like restless stars.
"You know this is impossible," Eline said, her voice low.
"I know," Arman replied. His fingers brushed against hers, uncertain. "But tell me not to love you, and I will stop."
Her eyes met his -- clear, defiant, tender. "I cannot tell you that."
He exhaled, relief and grief tangled together. They drank in silence, listening to the river as though it carried their confessions downstream.
When she rose to leave, he whispered after her:
"You walked past me,
but your leaving was a mystery.
I spoke of love and faith,
you answered with a final glance."

The city slept, but on the White Bridge, two hearts kept awake, beating against the tide of the world.

Chapter 3 -- The Forbidden Workshop
The Old Bazaar of Ahvaz was a labyrinth of color and rumor. Vendors sold spices that stained the air, carpets that glowed like flame, and copperware that rang like bells when struck. It was here, among watchful eyes, that whispers began.
A Muslim girl crossing into a Jewish tinsmith's shop.
A Jew and a Muslim working the same metal.
Uncle to niece, mother to son -- warnings whispered sharper than any blade.

Still, they continued. At night, Arman bolted his door, and Eline slipped inside. Together they worked on a secret -- a samovar unlike any other. Its belly was etched with Hebrew script on one side, Persian verse on the other. They called it the vessel of two hearts.
Arman's hammer struck gently, as though every note might awaken suspicion. "We could leave, Eline," he murmured, eyes fixed on the glowing tin. "Go to Bandar Mahshahr, near the sea. No one would know us there."
Her hammer stilled. Tears rimmed her lashes. "I cannot leave my mother. My brothers would drag me back in chains."
He reached for her hand, smudged with ash. "Then I will stay here and love you in silence. But do not tell me to stop."
The silence trembled between them, heavy with fear and devotion.
He leaned close, his words like prayer:
"Do not leave this heart so easily,
my soul will go with you.
Wherever you wander,
I will call your name.
My life is set free toward you,
my eyes are captive to your hair."

The hammer slipped from his grasp, clattering against the floor. In its echo, she heard both their hope and their doom.

Chapter 4 -- The Last Crossing
At dawn, the Black Bridge (Pol-e Siah) loomed dark against the pale sky. Mist curled over the Karun. Eline stood at its edge with a small satchel, her hands trembling. She had made her choice.
On the far side, Arman waited, heart thundering louder than the river. He saw her figure, a fragile shadow, moving toward him. For a moment, joy surged -- she was coming.
But shadows moved behind her. Her uncle's men stepped out, rough hands pulling her back. She struggled, her satchel falling, scattering tools across the ground.
"Eline!" Arman cried, his voice breaking.
She turned, eyes locking with his across the rushing water. No words could bridge the distance, yet he heard her voice inside him, clear as song:
"Cast your heart into the seas,
speak of love, my beautiful one.
Wherever you go, I am beside you.
You are my soul, my beauty, my dream.
By my very life, I beg you -- do not go."

He ran to the rail, ready to dive, but the Karun roared back, swallowing his cry. She was pulled away, her gaze the last tether until even that broke.
Years passed. Arman never left Ahvaz. He grew old among the alleys of tin and copper. Eline was married off, her name spoken only in whispers.
But in a tea house near the White Bridge, travelers spoke of a strange samovar behind a glass cabinet -- inlaid with Hebrew and Persian script, etched by two unknown hands. When tapped, it rang like a bell, as though remembering the lovers who had made it.
Arman often passed by, pausing at the door, listening. In the faint hum of metal, in the river's endless song, he still heard her.
"Your eyes were all I had -- and now they are gone.
I gave my heart to the one who was my beloved --
but where is my darling now?"

And the hammer's ring, each strike of tin on stone, became his prayer: a memory of love forbidden, yet never silenced.



© Copyright 2025 David (davidkhamisi at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates have been granted non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2347566-The-Vessel-of-Two-Hearts