Trinity

A cinquain.....

I know I'm not much of a poet, but the way to get better is to practice and invite criticism.  This is a cinquain, which consists of 22 syllables, in lines of 2, 4, 6, 8, and 2 syllables.

All comments welcome

Trinity

Sparrows
flit the high void.
Ravens conjure rainbows.
Swans abide love lifelong.  These three:
like us.