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Rated: 18+ · Folder · Supernatural · #1581473

my new paranormal book a WIP

This is the first draft, no real spell check just writing to get the story down.
All editing is appreciated but it is the first draft, I mostly want Character definition, continuity, plot line and interest. Does the story flow? Does it have enough detail about the people?
PORTFOLIO
Portfolio -> WIP -> Magik-First Book of The Kindered