LOVE

My Love Jeremy

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LOVE







A love that feels like a dream,

A type of love that only we can see.

A between us that is so strong,

Why does everyone say it's wrong?





You are my bestfriend and I am yours,

This love of ours is so pure.

You may hold my hand and I'll hold yours,

In your arms i feel like i can soar.





My heart screams in agony when your away,

With you I will always stay.

I will stand beside you through thick and thin,

We both know this love is no sin.





From you I will never part,

For you are the one with the key to my heart.

Babe, i can not wait till the day i become your wife,

You are the one I'll cherish for the rest of my life.