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This poem is about a girl who's father has abandoned her. Revised, tell me what you think!

This girl had a dad
and still so young
She loved him so
until she was grown
Her parents had a fight
and he did run
Divorce went bad
for a marriage gone wrong
She grew even more
as each day went by
The things her dad did
started to make her cry
He screamed and he yelled
everything was her fault
She just wanted him back
and to no longer feel caught
Trapped in this unhappy
hell of a world
Into a wall she would
rather be hurled
She cries and she cries
she is feeling so hurt
It is she whom he
is soon going to desert
Get up wake up
get a hold on yourself
She's a bad person
She's going to hell
He's done with her
he's no longer her dad
She cries every night
for the dad she once had